Week 3: Coke Dealer (2-1) .vs Mardu Entite (1-1)
 

checkin in, g/l

vice versa


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Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence

wow, aphilly chess steak line...and a gay joke, orignal


Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
meh wordplay but not too hard hitting

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
1st was weak and worded weired, 2nd weak again old concept

Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
meh not really feeling it

vote coke dealer for a little stronger lines.

1-0

bump bump

.......eh i didn't like none of these. honestly, Mardu you didn't have bad concepts man
but i dont think you worded them right. maybe it was the multi usage you were trying, but it didn't fit. the 1st bar wasn't really affected too much by it, but the harshness in ya 1st bar was weak...then in ya 2nd bar, the multi usage fucked it all up...and the bar was wack...


then...coke, ha! this by far the worst thing i've seen you drop yet. Your 1st bar was nicely worded. and the punch was there. just kind of weak. and your 2nd bar was just wack. sorry. i've seen you drop way better...i dont know man.

both really off this weak. not sure what happened.

v.coke barely

eh, thanks for the honest feed

2-0

uppin

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
no correlation...

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
lol, almost ok
Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
no

Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
this failed on many levels. Even if you were working with a concept, the connection also failed because of its further failing attempt with no connection.

call me a hater but, v/ Mardu Entite

rofl @ saying a phily cheese steak line was fresh

dude that line has been PLAYED EVERY which way you could possibly imagine, i'm suprised that 2v was the one who dropped THAT VOTE

rofl

2-1

^quit freepostin fucker. its just a vote. :rolleyes:

i'm not freeposting, i was uppin my battle, but jesus christ...a philly cheese steak line

come on son, come on.

^uppin your battle? Its the ONLY one ready for votes lol, and its @ the top already
just like everyone told TO, its just one persons opinion. let it ride dog, yours werent good either

lol, just delete the posts than, dick licker

nope. i'm keepin em in here. cunt sucker. :rolleyes:

i used a philly cheese steak punch in either 04 or 05 against a person named Phillycannonz

it just seemed flipped a little with 2x the wordplay on 'cheese steak'

i shouldn't have had to say that in my vote or even outside of it..... accept my opinion for what it is

accept these nuttttsss

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
lol. square...ah haven't seen someone called that in ages.
i dunno why others dont like this line... i mean it was kinda weak but...
still an alright opener punch... i chuckled...ha

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
I've seen the concept before, but never that same flip. i'll give it to you that it's a good line but its worded very...obscurely for me...like i couldn't catch it the first time...alright opener..on the same par as Coke's..

Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
ewww..this one is super played...fag/likin prison lines are so hard to flip these days..eh... you should of flipped the structure and put these as the starting lines...because at least the other had a little bang...


Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
nice flip on the name i think..but it really has no connect...its could have been worded better...ya know...like it was just quickly done.
overall its almost as weak as his ender...

both attempted at some wordplay...well they connected the wordplay just some played shit ya know.
hmm... i guess when i read em together i gotta give it to coke for more connectin punch because of better wording and easier comprehension...
not saying that mardu's wasn't easy to comprehend just very played and could have been better...

v/ coke

sweet, i swayed extra hard for that vote

^ HAHA! lol or i just suck at quick comprehension...

I'll TAKE YOUR STEAK NIGGA!
GET OFF ME!

get off me son! get off me!!!!!

All these punches were lackluster.

For the record, the philly cheese steak line IS played, I was going to used one in a PL league in 07 and I was like no, that's gay, used an Uncle Phil punch instead.

I don't really dig this battle, although Coke had some pretty good ideas, just needs to work on the wording a bit more.

I love you both.

Vote: Coke

Vote my dick son...my dick!

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
This was cool, good flip

Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
nah...this was not that good



Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
descent hit...

Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
Not original enough here...sentence and prison lines are played


Vote - Coke Dealer

Madru, you better start tryin to sway votes a little better

lol