Light Weight Title Match: Coke Dealer (4-1) .vs Wordz Of God (1-0)
 

murder. 10 lines.lol.

check .

Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts

his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.

yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style

**spul can't vote in this battle, we both know we have beef...it is what it is....**

Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts
no

his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
this was worded badly and I'm still wondering if it was worded well, would it even be a good diss? I doubt it.
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.
worded sucky, but I get what you're saying, meh.

yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style
maybe

this battle was a toss up and fucking wack

fuck you both

pz

his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
even saying he'd rather be gay then push sue aside doesn't make a whole lot of sense, almost saying he'd rather be gay then gay
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.
I did like this though, it was simple and was worded bad but still cool, nto as effective as it could have ben though


Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts
I liked this too, btu again wording takes away from the effect
yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style
I liked this too worded bad again but metaphor was clever, went over my head at first though lol


Cool, I didn't get the sue a side part, thought it was a dudes name that used to battle, and of course it sounds fine to you you wouldn't have posted it if you thought the wording was bad, but I did, and Im sorry if my opinion hurt your ego, cause no body said you were trash.

cokes lines both connected but weakly based on wording, I think the first punch could have been dope as fuck if worded right, the second didn' come as hard but again could have.
Wordz 2nd punch hit harder then cokes, but even after the clear up I wsn't feeling the first at all. Its a hard vote to make.......but ima say coke, say what you want

peace

Wordz

his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
ehh I know what you were trying for. But didn't hit hard really.
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.
lol good shit. I don't think I've seen that used before. Nice. wording could have been better tho.

Overall cool shit. Liked the 3 line structure. Was different. First punch was ehh, but second was good.


Coke

Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts
This was ok. Seemed too statementish. Could have been worded better to hit as a harsher blow.
yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style
ehh. I've seen the concept used a couple times before. But i'm sure you ain't seen them. So not bad.

Overall, okay drop. Wording is what killed a lot of your punches from being effective.

So overall, I gotta go with wordz for having the only above avg punch in this battle. the Jokes aside one.


v/Wordz

p.s. if he can vote in my battle, I can vote in his. Honest vote.

If you look in his sig it says his crew is called Suicidal poets... I basically called him a fagget in my setup line then he doesn't care about his crew.. just dickriding Jonathon and adam while pushing suicide (Sue a side<--- as in some random girl because he's gay) Not really that complex but you have to read into it to get it.

Also, I dont see anything wrong with the wording on my 2nd punch to be honest so maybe if you could enlighten me on a better way to write it, then I'll understand more of what you mean. :thumbup:

I know you only asked being a smart ass but ima tell you anyway.

coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.

It was basic not very creative its like the concept popped in your head then you stopped there, something like

'when it comes to coke, Im making seriouse moves'
or something along that line, the seriouse moves part would tie well with the put jokes aside, .......but I'm not the only one who said that.

Words - You had some interesting concepts but didn't execute them well.
The wording killed the first punch, it could've been pretty dope. The second one was cool but wording hurt it too, an interesting concept though

Coke - Your first punch I didn't feel like it hit hard and was kind of a weak concept. The second punch didn't seem that fresh i've seen a bunch of stuff like that before so that was mehish.

Vote Words

N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.
^^
set up was gay, shoulda talked about dealing drugs in it. but the punch hit and was good.
..
rest of the lines were lame

vote- wordz

Coke Dealer
Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts
This punch connected, it was pretty funny in the sense that Wordz doesn't talk about anything besides how good he is and the fact that every rehabilitating person seems to praise God. It wasn't super hard hitting due to it's wording, but it hit for sure.
yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style
[b]Hahaha not bad, again, work on your wording.

Wordz AhGod
his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
Poorly set up and for a gay punch to really connect it has to be harsher than push "Sue aside" I get the wordplay and attempt at a personal, it was just weak.
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.
This hit, but it's not super effective.

This battle was whatever. Coke dropped two half ass punches that actually connected enough to make an impact where Wordz tried to hard to make his first punch work, a little clever, just not hard hitting and his second punch connected but it didn't take much thought and didn't really have an impact factor.

Blah, both should have come better.

I think Coke edged it.

^ that's how you fuck up the bolding feature.

you do realize, that my first punch was connecting with AA adn NA....one of the biggest steps to becoming sober is listenin and giving yourself ot a higherpower/god


but, s'all good

cool battle Wordz

Thanks for being a dick head one way but I actually asked becasue I WAS interested on your thoughts on wording. Personally, now that I read it, I do see something I can change in the setup, not the execution because I re-wrote it like 20 times before I ended up with it.

Is that what that line ment?? :huh: ?? I was fucking lost on it

lol, yeah, i figured not many people would get that line

i was saying, only person that actually listens and cares what you have to say, cuz your name is Wordz of God...is drug addicts and alcholics, becuase thats like the biggest thing for most addicts is to like become born again christians

well my apologies then, but you usually come across as an arrogant guy

Punches : Philly
Structure : werdz
FLow: werdz
Metaphors: Didnt really see any
NamePlay: Philly
Concept:Philly
Exectution: Werdz

I tihnk Philly took the most important catagories in this one but this was a close battle

Vote:Philly.

Well aware bro...

You have a small penis, sir.

lol @ the inadequecy of this vote :nono:

Did you do it with a fucking crayon or some shit.

dude, stop swaying the votes and bitching

its getting 04ish

lmao @ 2v vote..

Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts
^ehhh.. decent..
yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style
^lmao noooo. no

his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
^bleh, i seen the wordplay just not connected well..
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes asid
^mehh... seen this

v/coke
seemed a bit more direct..

Suck a DIck, you wouldn;t have complained if i voted for you.. and if you got problems we can take it to the battle thread homeboy. jus let me know :)

1. I never sway..ever and if you can find a battle where I have swayed in, in any league... then it would be miraculouse.

2. you ignorent piece of no body(SnoCap), I definetly could careless that you vote for either me or him becuase you hold no merit and Im not so petty and rediculouse to think like a whiny little kid.

3. Your vote did not show that you even read the verses because your vote did not leave adequet feed back to be considered as a real vote.

what your doing right now...thast swaying

stop bitching


vote up people

So does that mean we can battle?

Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts
This wasn't good at all. If I'm being brutally honest I'd have to say it reads simple and there is no harshness about it. It touches on the borderline between a statement and a punch. Also, I felt it was a little predictable. You didn't really flip it that well. All that, combined with the fact that I've seen the nameflip on him before just made this feel really weak.

his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.
eh, this wasn't great at all. The fucking line structure was fucking strange to. Overall, I couldn't really find any positives about this punch because it just lacked entirely in execution. It attempts a personal, but you really did nothing with the concept and there was potential here for a harsh hit.
N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.
This felt a tad predictable. The wording was direct at least, but simplistic. A little creative spark would've been nice here and it could've turned an ok punch into a nice one. Overall, the toss jokes aside is an old concept and it's been flipped better. Also, when its been flipped the way you flipped it.. I've seen it done with better wording and execution.


yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style
This was fucking garbage, plain and simple. The whole concept of saying something and then referencing a metaphor with "LIKE (then finish the punch)" is fucking old. I've seen some fly recently, only down to some solid wording though. The wording here was weak, it read plain and simple and the severe lack of creativity just took everything away from this punch. There was really nothing good about it at all.


Honestly, this battle was weak. Wordz can drop WAAAAYYYYY better and Coke can even drop better than this. I'll honestly say, at the current moment in time Wordz is a better battler than Coke, he is more polished based on everything I've seen from both of them. Since joining this league though, he dropped no show ass and now some weak ass shit. I don't think he is taking this seriously because he really is dropping garbage. Coke pulled the win out here with the first punch. This battle was fucking pants though.

VOTE: COKE DEALER

dope vote Solo

nice, explained, and....

wait...where's the sway?

yep, this dude's from 04, and i think we can till you aint battle in a while
Cuz Words your style is completely fucked like virgins doing doggy style


This was not creative enough. Too played to use and too simplistic...



Words is full of gimmiks, enough of the talk bro i think we've all had it
Cuz only people praisin Words of God is Alcholic's and drug Addicts

This was easily the best bar of the battle. The 2nd line was fire and really connect well against Words Ah God. Stong hit.


his crews full of fags..
no pussy for miles so I gaurantee that u'll die..
besides, coke would rather chase Adam n Jon then push Suicide.

The content of this was not delivered well. should have been worded better.

N' no one takes u for real
this comic act'll get fuckin pulverized
coz I move Coke too.. Hell, every day I put jokes aside.


This was okay. I think this punch was way better than the above punch you used.



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Vote - Coke Dealer, because of the nameplay word flip that hit harder

coke edges it... 5-1

wordzz 1-1