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Brydon 03-08-09 07:16 AM

Brydon vs Da Problem Child
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-11-09 at 07:16 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. Godz Child & Da Problem Child

System 03-08-09 06:00 PM

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-09 06:00 PM.

Da Problem Child 03-08-09 06:46 PM

um.....what the f**k! you've left me no choice.....

His trash can rhymes dont even deserve a desent punchline
itz amazing how you can be on so many peoples dicks at one-time
and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man
its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing
im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening
you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker
but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber
its only fair to come hard as wood, because he couldn't scrape-of blisters
so i'll slay him like a jew, and im Adolf-Hitler

.........next time, make sure its ok with me before you set up a battle!

System 03-09-09 07:06 AM

Brydon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-09 07:06 AM.

Brydon 03-09-09 07:12 PM

See the problem is your style is bringing flip,jump and skip but u aint got this won,
coz you may just be a child but no-one round here has heard of BATTLE-NASTICS SON.
Bitch you got things twisted, i look at your ryhme scheme but musta missed it,
Coz yeah i see it and dissed it but still if it was a building it would be listed.
This battle iv pissed it, the trophy iv already kissed it,
u admit u have problems but u loved it so much u tried to fist it.
Yes your lame n, i dont wonna be the 1 your blame'n
but its wack your demonstrating,your read makes me feel its raining.
Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know....
coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow.



Just incase listed buildings are old as fuck!
Snow being coke but its a kinda 2 way meaning in that line.

Brydon 03-09-09 07:40 PM

And uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

_Talksic_ 03-10-09 03:30 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

your verse was more original better punches.brydon u got alot to work on but it takes time


Unexplained vote removed

Fly-E 03-10-09 06:46 PM

Voted For: Brydon

oh damn this is a hard one if i could vote i tie i would EXCEPT the fact that your right about the buildings line its good but played i thought somethings you guys sounded wack on than you guys had very strong point in your rhymes i say 7/10 vs. 6 1/2/10 v. Brydon

Da Problem Child 03-10-09 06:50 PM

you cant be fucking serious......_________________

Fly-E 03-10-09 06:53 PM

sorry bra you actually flowed nicer but punches that people has used the concept before don't impress me no affence it was nice but jus wasn't up there believe me if you think its a shitty vote witch it aint i have got plenty. No need to hate jus take it and use it. Like i said it will be a close battle not suprised if it goes 4-4 in a week or a year since no one rarely votes. But no hate jus lettin you no i would prefer new stuff over stuff i have seen don't take it the wrong way its jus the net bro.

GKillaz05 03-10-09 06:55 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

brydon:
Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know....
coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow.

vs.

DPC:
and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man
its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing
im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening


weak battle .. DPC had 2 lines that were ok .. and Bry only had one. and if he didnt wanna battle u you shouldnt of set itup

Da Problem Child 03-10-09 06:58 PM

naw it wasn't that it was that he set the battle up without my permission

Brydon 03-10-09 07:01 PM

Wel if you win you win but so much for your 5-0 gayboy!

Da Problem Child 03-10-09 07:29 PM

cause ya boy dont know what the hell he talkin bout

Brydon 03-10-09 07:58 PM

To be honest forgetting about your trash talk i think this is a close battle....

Think what ya like but my first 3 bars muder yours but its what ever....

Im getting back into writing and shit and in a few months time ima kill you str8 up bitch.

SnoCap 03-11-09 12:02 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

See the problem is your style is bringing flip,jump and skip but u aint got this won,
coz you may just be a child but no-one round here has heard of BATTLE-NASTICS SON.
ehh, decent name play but i juss dont get the punch... maybe its just me
Bitch you got things twisted, i look at your ryhme scheme but musta missed it,
Coz yeah i see it and dissed it but still if it was a building it would be listed.
this was okay, good flow and a decent punch, but a little forced... work on the delivery my dood
This battle iv pissed it, the trophy iv already kissed it,
u admit u have problems but u loved it so much u tried to fist it.
okay, decent concept... good nameplay, but the set up was a filler and the punch is weak
Yes your lame n, i dont wonna be the 1 your blame'n
but its wack your demonstrating,your read makes me feel its raining.
not really a punch, and if it is, its not hard hitting... take this line out like a target and come with a dope punch... this seemed like filler material to me
Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know....
coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow.
this was pretty weak, it doesn't really hit hard and not a good closer

His trash can rhymes dont even deserve a desent punchline
itz amazing how you can be on so many peoples dicks at one-time
ehh not a good opener
and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man
okay, played concept though.
its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing
im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening
you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker
but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber
eh. good flow, a bit stretched... the punch was kinda weak and a little forced... a better delievery could have saved this line
its only fair to come hard as wood, because he couldn't scrape-of blisters
so i'll slay him like a jew, and im Adolf-Hitler
okay, decent punch but kind of a played concept... closer material tho so points for that

In my opinion, this was a weak battle for ya'll... i've seen both come with a lot better shit. This was a tough decision for me but Since problem child can with a better closer than byron i'ma have to give it to em... the rest was pretty much even... close yall

Brydon 03-11-09 01:44 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Da Problem Child 03-12-09 06:25 AM

2-1 keep em comin_________________________________

Da Problem Child 03-12-09 07:35 PM

Checkin___________________________________________

Da Problem Child 03-17-09 01:52 PM

c'mon vote!!___________________________________+++

YungStaccz 03-17-09 10:39 PM

This was feedback posted for Da Problem Child
 
Checkin votes.........____________________________

upfront 03-18-09 12:39 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

two different styles but my vote goes to da problem child flow was better brydon had some fire lines but all in all dpc u win

MurDaH187 03-18-09 01:52 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

See the problem is your style is bringing flip,jump and skip but u aint got this won,
coz you may just be a child but no-one round here has heard of BATTLE-NASTICS SON.
nah...

Bitch you got things twisted, i look at your ryhme scheme but musta missed it,
Coz yeah i see it and dissed it but still if it was a building it would be listed.
eeeh i saw the reference but felt like u could of worded this wa better..

This battle iv pissed it, the trophy iv already kissed it,
u admit u have problems but u loved it so much u tried to fist it.
nasty and weak...

Yes your lame n, i dont wonna be the 1 your blame'n
but its wack your demonstrating,your read makes me feel its raining.
weak...

Where the fuck u at kid? coz really i dont know....
coz i need to lines of snow to try follow your flow.
nah weak...
4/10 weak verse...

vs


His trash can rhymes dont even deserve a desent punchline
itz amazing how you can be on so many peoples dicks at one-time
flow no punch and wasnt even a good diss...

and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man
nasty and have no relevence to this battle...

its so indifficult to stop this clown-from-breathing
im suprise he's found time to challenge me, the porn sites must be down-this-evening
eeeh but decent at best..

you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker
but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber
weak and played...

its only fair to come hard as wood, because he couldn't scrape-of blisters
so i'll slay him like a jew, and im Adolf-Hitler
best line in this battle yet still a played concept...


6/10

vote: problem

Godz Child 03-18-09 07:18 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

and also exiting to be battling my one-biggest-fan
so i'll come at this cat quick simular to a one-minute-man

you rhymes'-desieving i'd father this sucker
but from that time-consieving, how did you escape from the rubber

vs.

nother



i cant explain it any more,.... DPC just had the better verse


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