Finally, A Song I Rap On!! Tell Me What U Think!
 

Tha name of tha song is called " Lock It Down". I forgot who produced it, but I went back and added some stuff to it. I mixed it and everything myself. I am tha second rapper on this song. My guy Gutta P rap first, and my newly signed artist Metaphor raps last, my singer Michelle Carmel is singing. This is how Chicago do it.


http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=242712&q=Lo

1LUVABOVE

This was decent.. when were you gon diss me again?

Cise

Thanx 4 tha feedback! Its about time you like something I put out. U Cali cats are crazy! But I don't know when. Maybe later on in tha week bcuz I got food poisoning from Applebee's Friday. I've beening throwing up all weekend. So whenever I get better, I'll crush you, I mean battle you.

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Beat-Sucks

Chorus-Sucks

Delivery-it was nice fo da track

1st guy Lyrics-sucked

2nd guy lyrics-suckied

3rd guy-ight vocab but thats about it you stoped to early. I wasn't realy feelin yo verse neither though. Nice vocab though.

dam yall niggas need help....this is bad :o

And what the fuck do you mean us cali niggas is crazy nigga im gaurenteed to rip murder and emberass ya whole crew easily. See me on the mic nigga if you wanna see a cali nigga rip it :cool: :p

this was alright nothing good about it nothing bad about it. first cat flows were mad elementary, second cats a weak rip off of the old jay-z third cat is trying to be like twista to much this was unorginal in my opinion. Beat was alright by the way

So niccas must not know tha Chicago style of rap. In it, all three off us portrayed tha styles of tha Chi. So if you say we sound like Twista or tha or Jay, well thats tha Chicago style of rap. Chicago started tha tongue twisting rap style. Just bcuz Twista is out in tha mainstream and he raps fast, doesn't mean every rapper from Chicago is trying to be like him. As far as me, I guess I'm tha Jayz wanna be, I came fast, slow, whatever I was feeling in my verse. Matter a fact, I really don't listen to JayZ.

We all have our own styles. U know, just bcuz someone in tha limelight rhymes tha same way we do, doesn't mean we biting. Or even being unoriginal.

As far as tha dude Ruthless, who are u? That was directed to Cise. And Cise knows exactly what I'm referring to. Stay outta our business. But if you want some, some get some. BITCH!!!!!

yo, it was a'ight... I agree with the elementary lyrics.... the last manz got the best lyrical flow, I liked yo flow a bit but overall I've heard better...

Thanx a lot. i honestly appreciate all feedback, good or bad. Keep^^^^^^

umm ok........jay z shit i mean finesse streets was aight...first rapper....whack.......beat maaaad hott, sounds like a fash beat.........singer shudnt of been it......last rapper was kinda hott. fast tongue................overall this track was aight, first rapper and the singer spoilt it..........GoNe!*

Hook Is Wack ...

First Guy Is Garbage , -Fast Forwards-

Who The Fuck Is The Two Dudes Singing On The Hook, Go To Murder Inc..

Second Kat Is Alright, Flow Changes To Much Stay With One Style Your Flow Falls On And Off, Alright ...


-Turns Off-

pz.

iight I listened to your track and wasnt really feelin it but its all good cuz you might not like my shit but check it out anyway and let me know what you think
check this

thanx 4 tha feedback. I guess keep ^^^^^^^!!

And I don't sound shit like JayZ, but if I do or if u say I'm trying to copy his style, thank u.

Now we got cats saying that since Ja Rule "harmonize", dudes can't sing on a track, GET THA FUK OUTTA HERE!!!!!!!!

Hook - Weak
1st Verse - Style, flow, and vocab was weak

2nd Verse - Style and flow was weak, Vocab was ok

3rd verse - Style was real tight but couldnt keep his flow on beat, vocab was aight

Beat - This is the best beat I have heard from you. Did you make it? I haven't heard a beat that I like from you, but this one was off da hee. You should make more beats like that....

... and what about dat battle I challenged you to? Or you wanna see if we clash in da audio league first?

It was coo.......overall I was feelin it.........beat was super raw........last guy did have the betta flow........the female was coo singin......but the chourus lyrics was on par with big tymers............not good,lol.......nice job........shit looks like u got hella hatas on you,lol.......stay uppppp

Beat is nice dawg

1st Guy-Falls on and off....he needs more emotion in my eyes,if he gets that and gets into tha track then he'll be nice....aight track

Hook is aight......dudes kinda sounded weird,tha female shoulda been tha only one there

Finesse-Came preety good man,fell off a lil bit,but ya came back and stayed on beat

3rd Guy-Came out nice,but he started rushing tha beat a lil bit....he coulda used more emotion to hype tha track up a lil more,but he was straight

Overall it was a preety decent track man.....suttin good to bump while i'm chillin..........Holla at me wit that beat that u got planned for me to get on wit u dawg.....i'm waiting for it

peep my track wit P-Cole......track is called "Okay"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/k...dpcolemusic.htm

u gonna feel that one

keep dropping dawg

~KroniK~

beats aight. wasnt feeling the lyrics at all.