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"Gateway To Hades"
Once again some deep shit, for those who wake up....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Verse One: Fixing my plot, as me and Hell sit across from each other; The smell of a revolution made the oxygen smothere; Some call it genuis, others call it blinded perception; But I'll render his soul hepless with a knife as a weapon;* Descreatly rebellin, consiquences of my devious dwelling; This sinister plan is the product of the demons i’ve held in; Leaving this hellish place, has me seemingly helpless; "Believe me he'll parish!" Is what i walked out screaming & yelling;* Anxious for freedom, I had a thought to pain his cerebrum; Have him caged, and him bleedin is the faith I believe in; Leave his departed soul and spirit stained from the beatings; I fear not, even though I'm told it's dangerous: leaving;* With the grimmest expression, malitia, and a dim lit perception; My cynical presence made them raise guns, but I grin at the weapons; Through a minute’s reflection I can see his timid complexion; I see a man walking in my direction, it's him what a blessing;* Hook Verse Two: Satanic & evil....his demise expands my cerebral; I'm manic & lethal, plus my fuckin plan is deceitful; I'm the phantom, the eagle sent here to dismantle the people; My guards run in with uzi's drawn: He's panicking, feeble;* I walk up to the reigning beast; I think I'll start w/ dissection; Gut his stomach wide open, and then char his intestines; I was as my plan unfolds it's been cautiously forming; My troops win hands down, it was flawless and morbid;* The blossoming orchids of love had me nauseous & torn in; The gut, I now crave death, but I'm watching in boredom; Funny though, cause he had his minions awkwardly sorted; He should've known better, he should've been watching his fortress;* Since 3 o’clock in the morning, I've had it down to a science; I love this shit, I can't believe I used to forwn at the violence; The roars of Heaven's Armed Forces drowned out the silence No more "Mr. NiceGuy"...I'm acting out of defiance;* The laws remain the same, I must desease all the blasphemous; Supidity; He's acted in. I had a reason to flatten Sin; I let death linger in the breeze, Rest in Peace to the Shadowed men; And Rest in Peace Lucifer, my name's Jesus of Nazareth;* No hook yet, still debating on how to approach it.... P.E.A.C.E. P.S. I'd drop links to my replies, but I constantly reply to Open Mics.... |
i liked it i thought it was deep and i loved your vocab.
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"Thank You..."
Thank you...I appreciate possitive feedback...
To The Sky... P.E.A.C.E. |
I like it the lyrics are very hot
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nice vocab, wordplay, ect. feelin this from begining to end. nice drop.peep my ish. holla
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"Thank You..."
[i]Thank you to all who have awaken form the deep slumbers and replied to my drop...good looks y'all........
P.e.a.c.e. I'll reply to your shit dogg...no doubt....[i] |
Damn....wake up peeps....
P.e.a.c.e. |
Aight,from sum1 who be spittin deep shit too,dis wuz a ill ass piece.It had sum twists in there dat made me actually wanna keep readin unlike othas on dis site.Keep writin Stay^
-Avi |
Good looks with the reply, I'll hit your drops up with a reply....
To The Sky.... P.E.A.C.E. |
This was tight, the imagery was on point and so was the content. Good drop, I'm sure glad to be seeing some people dropping hotness in Open Mic now. Welcome to RB.
pz |
Thank you Domain 9...not only for replying to my shit, but gracing my post with your ever-so pleasure giving sig....lol
Nice ass....lol P.e.a.c.e.[/i] |
definatly hot, i didnt even need to read the whole thing to write this, but im about to finish
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Word, best I've seen so far. Definitley a dope concept, and it was portrayed very nicely. Flow was something that just kept me reading, and content was good. Overall, nice piece. Keep 'em coming, Pz!
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Tight... Nice wordplay... good concepts... and it's ORIGINAL... keep it comin'... Peace...
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See this was nice... after reading 4 open mic drops in a row that needed help, its nice to see one that didnt .... dope drop with nice imagery.... keep spittin... peace
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Damn.....Can't believe I slept on you for a while.....It was prolly due to tha fact that most new heads are wack and juss dissappoint me when I read there shit.....
But this was an ill piece.....One of tha nicest I've seen in a while....Tha multi's were hot....Vocab was on point.....I liked tha topic.....Tha way U started it off was nice also....It was one of those peices that kept me readin.....Keep this up man....Peace |
yo shit is tight like a virgin.it kept me wanting to read on.but i think on the flow side there were some points whre i couldnt flow with da rhyme
all in all 4.5 mics keep thugging playa |
Damn, thanks for waking up Rb...lol.
4.5? dman thats good enough for me, but my next piece...Ill try to get 5...push it that extra mile... Thank you all for the replies, Ill keep the hotness droppin, as long you all keep reading.... I'll try to hit the majority of your all's pieces back with replies.... Thank you... P.E.A.C.E. |
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