Mista Burns (-Verses-) Black Shadow
 

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Mista Burns.....

heres ma verse
 

goin post like after

yo check it yo
Elderly man you most be scared that ya lose, here that I bruise,//1
Like the show (Simpson’s) you can’t do anything your self, MR. Smithers writes lyrics for you,//2
Taking the name of the weakest man in the Simpson’s, you most of had alot of alcohol in your system,//3
Cause Mr. Burns is comedy there just goin be numerous ways ta diss’em,//4
I rap in the zone, MR. Burn’s is forever attacking his own,//5( Mr. Burns is hated in Springfield)
Battling you is like old school I’m just in a class of ma own,//6
I would “sit up” while I’m spitting at you but I can’t “stand” your presence,//7
I’d give you Eminem’s lyrics ta “rap” but I heard all your “wrap” good is “presents”,//8

aYO Burns punsihin' hardcore spitz, eat diz lame lyricist fa lunch....
Leave shadows arms ina "lunch box",shove it down his "throat", now his lines "packs a punch"~//
Spitin' bout da simpsons, man da lame iz played....
Nigga i'm lyrical "dick" "takin' it ta" diz "pussy", leave'em "laid"~//
It's kind of obsserb....
by dey da way Burns, killin'em wit verbs~/
Rip out my "voice box", "smack'em wit it", so I literty "beat wit words"~//

ayo voters sorry fa mispellin' wit i'm drunk as fuck
amd Shadow when i said 5-8 bars i mean 2 lines= 1 bar but it's coo

anyways uppin' fa votes
MEAN'S

2nd bar~:"dick" takin' it ta(beatin' him down)"pussy"
dick and pussy(things ya fuck wit)
laid(ta get fucked)

others ya should know

~EDITED FA MEANIN'S~

Mista Burns

Both of you post links of the battles you voted for... or this will be closed

shadow took this. burns' verse was too short, and he fed off of shadows verse. not to mention the fact that he explained that wack line...lmao

VOTE: shadow easily

[i]Hate vote!!!!!
He hatin' cuz i vote fa emcee killabee in his
battle
still uppin' 0-0

Mista Burns[i/]

i'm goin post links now

Sorry... but Shadow won this one pal.

Vote= Black Shadow

vote mr. burns....iller verse,
shadow stook to the simpson's show to much

heres ma link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6144#post306144

ok shadow verse was longer and a bit funny
but mista Burns actually had the tighter verse but it was short. in situations like this normally i would vote for the one with the longer verse casue im big on effort.
but come on now. his name is MistaBurns. the simpson card i can bet is almost always pulled. i like niggaz to be more original.

vote: Mista Burns

Black Shadow came wack, Mr. Burns was ok, with more punches that hit good in spots. All areas was dominated by Burns.
keep spittin'....

vote goes to Mr. Burns

VOTE Shadow

Mr burns tried but not hard enough...i though shadow had more tighter verse

uppin 3-2

Damn uppin'

Vote Mr burns.... This battle is closed... Mr burns Won.... This has got to be the longest running battle i have seen... CLOSED