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MeNTiLL 02-26-03 09:03 AM

MeNTiLL vs ~Silence~
 
Rules:
10-15 bar min/max
votes need 2 b explained
due asap

I'll be able to post 2day or 2morrow.....Peace

Link One
Link Two

There goes my 2 links.....Out

~SiLeNcE~ 02-27-03 01:14 AM

I acknowledge this thread... and will post when I can.

~feel free to drop anytime....



~one~

~SiLeNcE~ 02-27-03 06:55 AM

Six Shots (Remember This Clue)

Go.

Break you with amazing quickness, even in every way possibly
as you witness my mind out run your AMD processing velocity
Make a mockery, son... you're obviously a lyrical class below
if lyrics reflect character, then you're definitely... an ass~hole
Creative? I like how your name is a paradox to the word mental
sorry to bust your bubble, but for you, I don't think it Ment~Ill
Slice you like fruits and veggies, squash you with my mallet
herb... if my bullets were tomatoes, then you must be a salad
This competition is madness, thinking you king is a wacker fate
don't assume to be a big fish just cause you can master~bait
Perform a spinal tap, don't know why you'd rap being nervous
should type like this, ehem... for that little extra courage (bold)
And I'd still kill you, make you cry after you've been bludgened
you'd look as if I wrote this whole thing on the skin of an onion
For the last line of my rhyme.................. BANG........ YOUR DEAD.


~SiLeNcE~

MeNTiLL 02-27-03 08:27 AM

Shit To Know:
(1) Tha new look of RB
(2)He's only actin' nice
(3)Tha Chris Rock joke at tha end of Down To Earth
(4)Tha gay part....How he talked about fruits and vegetables a lot....Tha waves before and after his name
(5)How he talked about guns in his verse

If battlin' MeNTiLL was hiphop101, Niggas failin' this
Homeboys got his ups and downs, Similar 2 his alias
Use carefulness, Listen up, There's a few things u need 2 learn
This nigga silence comin' nice, Unpredictable like RB gettin a perm(1)
Court is adjourned, Tha jury gives 'em 10 years 4 permanent wackness
This cat really ain't nice, He juss spent 4 years to become an actress(2)
Practice, Should be one of tha main priorities on ya days list
This cat's searchin' 4 his 1st win, Like Chris waitin' 4 his 1st kiss(3)
Oh, And juss for pointers, Tha MeNTiLL line has been played
Look at his verse, Kid's gay, I send him his goodbye, And he juss waves(4)
U gotta be brave, This kids a mama's boy, Tha net's where he uses violence(5)
I wasted my time on this verse, I coulda won standin' here in SiLeNcE


Aight let's get tha votin' started now.....Peace


This was edited before any votes....And so I can put tha explanations.....Peace

~SiLeNcE~ 02-27-03 09:14 AM

You need some spinach.

uppin for votes.


Links Below:


Finished Battle (Link)

Voted Battle #1
Voted Battle #2

Black Shadow 02-27-03 02:37 PM

U gotta be brave, This kids a mama's boy, Tha net's where he uses violence(5)
I wasted my time on this verse, I coulda won standin' here in SiLeNcE

metilll won it with that i really didn't like any thing else in this battle

Evolve 02-28-03 08:25 AM

Cleaned it up.... 1-0 Mentill..... VOTES NEEDED!!!

Finesse Streetz 02-28-03 09:38 AM

When I read this battle a couple of words came to mind:
God, Jesus, Holy Crap, Hott, Definite, Solid,
This is the BEST battle Ive seen on this site. Honestly

This was a tie in my eyes. I had to read this again to pick a winner. And it goes to
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Silence. This is why:

"Make a mockery, son... you're obviously a lyrical class below
if lyrics reflect character, then you're definitely... an a**~hole"

This was tha tightest line of tha battle.

It was too much others to explain. Just both artists brung their A game. I liked, no scratch that, I loved this battle. It was on point.

Vote=Silence

I M gOnE 02-28-03 10:47 AM

i agree...this was one of the better battles that i've read on this site. silence had a real tight verse (wasn't really feeling the opener) and so did MentILL (could've used some more multis).
but overall, both verses were real nice. but this is the line that i felt won the battle:

This competition is madness, thinking you king is a wacker fate
don't assume to be a big fish just cause you can master~bait

lmao...that was clever and funny. feelin it

**note to MentILL: don't explain ya lines. if you need to explain it...it's not worth using. just some friendly advice.**

VOTE: ~Silence~

props to both mcs for a good battle.

b ez

MeNTiLL 03-03-03 08:17 AM

I explain 'em cuz most cats prolly wouldn't get em.....As a result of most newbies now a days.....But Im uppin this for more votes.....it's 2-1 him.....Out

osiris420 03-03-03 10:39 AM

mentill won this without a doubt silence didnt have as good of flow simply stated

self 03-03-03 11:35 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by ~SiLeNcE~
Slice you like fruits and veggies, squash you with my mallet
herb... if my bullets were tomatoes, then you must be a salad
[quote]
That was just extremely gay.

[quote]
don't assume to be a big fish just cause you can master~bait
Perform a spinal tap, don't know why you'd rap being nervous


Your best lines, and they were only ok...

MENTILL
Quote:
Originally posted by MeNTiLL
Homeboys got his ups and downs, Similar 2 his alias[b]

I like this one, 2 reasons, somewhat personal, especially if you don't know the person you are battling. And I HaTe It WhEn PeOpLe TyPe LiKe ThIS.


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This nigga silence comin' nice, Unpredictable like RB gettin a perm(1)

Not the greatest line, but creative.


Quote:
This cat really ain't nice, He juss spent 4 years to become an actress(2)

Not that great, but not to bad either.

Quote:
Practice, Should be one of tha main priorities on ya days list
This cat's searchin' 4 his 1st win, Like Chris waitin' 4 his 1st kiss(3)


Lmao, creative, funny, good.

Quote:
Oh, And juss for pointers, Tha MeNTiLL line has been played
Look at his verse, Kid's gay, I send him his goodbye, And he juss waves(4)

To the Mentill thing. Exactly, Silence you should have known this. I would have and I'm not a battler.
Second part, lol!


Quote:
U gotta be brave, This kids a mama's boy, Tha net's where he uses violence(5)
I wasted my time on this verse, I coulda won standin' here in SiLeNcE


LOL, I liked it.

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[b]Vote=Mentill

MeNTiLL 03-05-03 09:01 AM

3-2 Me.....Uppin for more votes.....Peace

~SiLeNcE~ 03-05-03 11:37 AM

This Is NutRageous...

Uppin this.

play 03-05-03 12:10 PM

DIS WUZ A SHIT BATTLE IN MA OPINION BUT SUM CLOSE SHIT- DIS HAS 2 GO 2 MA BOY MENTILL DOUGH MAN HAD SUM GOOD PUNCH LINEZ.

~SiLeNcE~ 03-05-03 02:00 PM

Alright Already... Shit. MentIll Wins... Taken Forever.
Battle Over.


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