Billy vs. Iverson03
 

ok kid, ill be waitin on your verse

imma spit later ima bout to bounce
is that aight?

how long you gonna be gone

ill spit now i dont gotta leave for a while

ok cool

yo.. you gonna spit??

You cant write, you lack verbal insight/
verses make as much sense as wearin sunglasses at night/
Iverson, idolizin an individual you could never compare too/
bitin titles of others strands you with a spare tooth and catz attemptin to embarass you/
harassin you with a pen clutched by a hand/
return to whatever you do this is new to you like pioneers explorin a new land/
if you tried to spit for currency it would take tha clothes off ya back/
left naked like a salad with out dressing stressin that you can still rap/
but you cant, you failed in that department/
many stories like apartments begin startin when i disrespect you authority like cartmen/
to approach my presence forces the blood rush so quickly it'll make your heartspin/
on target like marksmen makin my point like a paper im markin/
restart your lyrical program like computers and vacate my area like comuters/
accuse me of bitin rhymes but i dont, i chew em/
spit em back out and rearrange em so you can use em/

Damn nigga, your rap has more holes then a target at a shooting range
This rap shit just aint workin for you, so its time for a change
Only way ima stop murderin you is if the price is right like Bob Barker
But if it aint, the scars you get from this battle will be permanent, like a sharpie marker
Speakin of game shows, i got one for ya to play, its called lets make a deal
You gotta do somethin, cause your rhymes be slippin like some1 steppin on a banana peel
I wish i could say i know how you feel, but i cant lie like that
That would be like A Sumo Wrestler sayin that he isn't fat
You took almost an hour to write your rhyme, and thats the rhyme that you wrote
That shit is sadder than watching a retard tryin to use a paddle boat
If there was a ref in this battle he'd have seen enough and would be ringin the bell
Cause my rhymes is just to hot, and yours was uglier Than Sam Cassell
And the chances of you wining is the chance of surviving a case of cancer
But no matter how bad the beating, just remember, suicide's not the answer

uppin for votes please

dude you rhymed like every line
range-change
marker-barker
etc.........

ya and...

yo straight up iverson took this he came wayyy harder much respect billy the fvk u talken bout u rhymed every line no shit thats called a rhyme scheme and talent so ma vote goes to iverson he took this easy holla bak 1

yo thanks for the vote X. Holla Bak

^^^^^^^^^^^

you fed off my lines and you had no multis

Damn nigga, your rap has more holes then a target at a shooting range
This rap shit just aint workin for you, so its time for a change

its a rearrange version of
return to whatever you do this is new to you like pioneers explorin a new land/
and....
on target like marksmen .......

wuts up with that?

what the fuck are you talkin about, i came up with my line off the top of my head

come on, can we get some votes??

HAHAHAHA KIDO's don't start whining......aight the ref is here..lol

Well Ama go fo whoever came the hardest.....

Vote goes to WAnnabe IVErson...lol Nice piece Kid
Koby is way better than Ive anyhow....

PS: Someone Vote on Me vs T-squere

uppin

thanks for the vote whoever voted

god damn it, whoever voted on the poll, can you at least say why you voted that way??

yes please
i dont wanna be conceited but please shatter iversons ego

i just get pissed when people vote on the poll w/o explaining it, i dont care if i lose, i just want to see what i need to do to get better.

exactly
i want responses so i know wut im doin good at and wut im doin bad in
my bad for sayin your conceited and shit

yo dont worry about it. Anyway....votes

Vote - Iverson03. Overall I just liked your verse better. And as for whoever voted without saying why they voted the way they did, you have to remember that most people who vote here are mods. Most of us dont have time to be voting on all these battles, while maintaining the forums and living our lives. As for what you did wrong and getting advice, most of the people that are voting without using the poll are offering you those explinations. Anyway, decent battle.

ok, i see what your saying, thanks for the vote.

^^^

my fav lines from iverson

Only way ima stop murderin you is if the price is right like Bob Barker//
But if it aint, the scars you get from this battle will be permanent, like a sharpie marker//

fav line from billy

many stories like apartments begin startin when i disrespect you authority like cartmen/
to approach my presence forces the blood rush so quickly it'll make your heartspin/
on target like marksmen makin my point like a paper im markin/

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restart your lyrical program like computers and vacate my area like comuters/
accuse me of bitin rhymes but i dont, i chew em/
spit em back out and rearrange em so you can use em/

althought those wer tight lines, i think that those were ur only good lines no offense,

ima have to say iverson took this 1 in my opinion i just liked his ENTIRE verse better, none the less this was still a good battle,
keep elevatin kats

vote=iverson

thanks for the vote and good battle vs. me earlier. You had a nice rhyme goin vs. me. uppin 4 votes^^^^^^^

vote iverson....

i felt he came way harder then the other guy....the other guy had good flow but iverson had tha harder punches....

Dog Billy you are supposed to rap off of each other's lines dog. My vote goes to Iverson03 because Billy your lines are too uneven and your punch lines were not that hot. Iverson03 your punchlines were on point and I like the way you changed that boy Billy's words around. Overall Iverson03 spashed it.

thanks 4 the votes guys. uppin^^^

uppin^^^ this is IVerson03, just changed my name

uppin

Yo, Billy, what the fuck are you talkin about??? I'm with Iverson and everyone else in their right mind on this one, what is the problem with rhymin every line, the whole art of rappin is, RHYMING TIGHT, and thats what we do, Rhyme consistently in a good scheme which is what Iverson has done, I'm sick of reading shit with no flow or rhyme, Rhyme and flow are what make rap, My vote's with Iverson on this one!

Peace

straight up..
vote = iverson (aka Xtra Terrestrial)
shits tight... remind me not to piss you off lol

lol inspire, thanx 4 the vots guys

i guess i won this since the time is up...

Yeah you did. Fixed the records and moved the thread.