drug related: 1of 4 verses
 

Personifying absolute power I tower
over these cowards
Even though my soul’s worlds apart
drifting threw flowers
Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser
Girls tell about their dreams of gold
so welcome to golden showers
So splish in a gold splash with a wish
you can hold last
That you will out pass this out cast when
the bombs blast
Rolling tradition tight like a spiff and
using this last hit
To watch everything you ever held dear
fall to ash

i thought it was straight... nice structure to the flow i thought,,, i think the last line was a typo maybe not but it dont rhyme.. im sure you meant ashes instead of ash.. but yeah nice overall ill watch for the rest..

yea.. that's the shit, nice flow with not alot of words, it worked really well... "Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser
Girls tell about their dreams of gold
so welcome to golden showers"
shit was dope, do some longer tings fo-sure

good looking out blunted mc and incoragable im was fleppin blast with ash. but good lookin too

peace

up

haha, yo thats aiight, gotta give props for the "Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser" haha, that line was dope!

Peace out!!!!

"Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser"... yeah that was dope, sort of like an old-school, freestyle rhyme to me... hot
Yo man now I'm kinda looking forward to those next 3 verses... your concet sounds interesting and the flow, rhymes, and wordplay of this one where pretty good... hopefully you won't fall of with those next ones...

Peace

lol i wont fall off i never do

"Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser
Girls tell about their dreams of gold
so welcome to golden showers"

Those really are great bars. The way it fit in with the piece, some of the best shit I've seen on this site. Most memorable. Made the piece. I'll look for the next one.

Living more pipe dreams then Mario
Luigi and bowser.. that line just gives a made visual, my fav. line in this piece, it was alil short but to the point, flow was good
keep spittin
peace out...

im puttin this is my sig
 

good looking out

UP

I liked the shit. nice ass flow sceme and word-play. Keep postin fam

I ani't gonna front, that was some ill s*it

thanx. oh yeah and i also finiiished this peice.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34342

That was a tight post. For being so short I don't see much that I can critisize about it but it was ill. I liked the flow you had for this and like everyone else said I'm really feeling the Mario line that was dope. Keep droppin son

pz

good looking out domain. stay up

i can only agree with all of the above- nice