"Make It" First real track, peep and drop links, Dont sleep please....
 

You this is my first real track called
'Make It'

Reply with incite please, lookin to elevate...

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=274469&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=274469&q=Hi

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=274469

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Hope yall enjoy, Peace

-eD

WOW.
 

Damn, this is amazing.

I'm really feeling this!

I told you what I thought on aim,

Man this is a moving track. Really really good. Lyrics were good, (I like the way you flow, it all goes real well).

The beat was great also, fit perfectly with the whole thing.

Man, madd nice. "burnt" this is going on the next CD I burn.

Keep it up,

---Oh, and the hook, wow, you can sign. Ya got a voice there.

uppin this...

Uppin this again....

Folks be takin that tylenol PM on this site..

cmon yall.... anything... jees

yo man this was tight dawg
i luv the message... and ya lyrics were deep yo

one thing i would do is put a chorus on the hook... thats the only thing lol cuz you got a dope singin voice... its not really necessary though... thats just a suggestion

anyways this waz tight dawg..
keep it up

peace

thnx for the feed dog.. what you mean like make it so its a chorus line during the hook so it sounds like mad folks singin it? If that then yea Ill try it and see whats up, thanks for peepin dog

uppin

this was aight, i dont really feel ur voice, tha singings nice though, i liked tha lyrics, nice message, nice flow, overall dope track man stay up n elevate

peace

~1~

fa sho, thnx

ill ill ill ill ill
i really liked it...
good singin voice...

*officially crooks biggest fan*
haha...

thnx.. lol.. its decent but Im always tryna elevate

yea dog, u really lined up a nice track here...im NO fan singing hooks, but other then that aspect (which doesnt bother me namean) the audio was great...shit just phLo'd so fluidly...i liked the piece...




holla wit sum thoughts on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34564

namean yo...
iLL shit...
oNE

wow...this was alot better than i expected to be..hook was nice, ya flow was on point through the whole track...nothin i can see thats really bad about this..nice topic and good job

lol @ the beat you used biggie ripped though that beat

delivery was solid yo the quailty is decent the rhyme scheme is sold some polishing wouldn't hurt, the singing was kinda was good a litt;le off key @ spots but overall nice singing

2 verse is cool yo your going a little too fast and some adlbs are off with fucks up flow conisistancy you know what I mean

decent shit though gonz

dude u got major talent not just on make it i croozed ur battles too, keep it up, ill here u on the box one day

nice voice .. singing was dope


i liked this alot, work on flowing with the beat .. the flow was okay tho

lol singing was gay, wasnt feeling this, ud just get clowned listening to it, ur ai diss was better id stick to not being deep

nice track dawg. u put it down raw. deep lyricz and a nice flow,catchy hook and all that. stay uppppp

THnx for all input, Fatman... why hate? lol ... just tryna do my thing... anyways thanx..peace yall.. and Ill peep everyone elses tracks..

nice shit mann, i enjoyed this, keep blazin homie

hum... not bad... good voice... good delivery... only 17..? rhyme scheme will grow on you... you might want to try and find beats more uptempo... the singin shit... do you dunny... I was kinda feelin it... more cats need to be like you and do music instead of spit on beats... shit... keep it up...



Avalon...

Thnx alot man.. always elevatin

im not hatein, i just think u much better at dissing then beein deep
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yo. this shit was ill cus i love that beat. your signing flowed nicely on this shit. message was dope. but ya flow needs polishing. it was nice, but touch it up and stay on beat cus some parts you was off and it threw me off. but yo. ill stuff tho.

stay up.

Thanx alot for all replies yall, Im gunna redo it and touch it up a bit...thanx for all the input

yo the flow was sick. but that beats not urs tho ive heard it before. i dont know if u were claimin it as urs, if u were . . . busted. If u werent, nevermind my bad for the mix up. but anyways the rhymin i was feelin for real. the singing i was NOT. but yo check out my shit at www.soundclick.com/mindtheory. it sounds like u got some pretty clean recordin equipment. maybe we could hit up a collab or somethin. I'm feelin ya flow. if u look at my site check out God's Breath in particular. it's one of my favorites. pz. get back with me. either in here, AIM (LapzstaSC2k), or Lapzsta@hotmail.com

I DON'T like your voice. Nice message, but the lyrics weren't nas or AZ-like. In MY personal opinion aim for TIGHTER lyrics (the rhyming words not the content because you got the mastered). I love the chorus it reminds me of a Bone song. You should let me write a song for you, holla at me if you feelin da idea.

Yeah this is seriously dope man, very impressed!!!! You one hot cat man!!

Peace Out Yo!!!!

Crook ed Thrilla?

lol if its u i kno u if not u pretty good........elevate on ure flow....

Go check ma freestyle diss ... lol...