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Killerchopsuey vs X Ecution
lets go heres how it goin down 12 bars max u got till 9 pm tmorrow nite to respond wit ya verse ill have mine up soon aight holla bak 1
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X Ecution ready to set it as I steadily wreck shit/
There is a looming smell of defeat and this so called emcee sweats it/ 1` Your shit has got the wrong complection/ It should really be posting in the poetry section/ 2 I pound-geeks, you cant come hard wit da side effect of weed-brownies/ Of course ya punches are soft, you look like a spokesman for Downey/ 3 This battle must be exercise because your punches are a stretch/ no matter how long you stretch-it the victory is still far-fetched/ 4 my bars-edged, sharp, rip the lung and hand it to ya so u could hold ya breath/ this attack will hit ya so quick itll be classified as a sudden death/ 5 Just like how people do to cars, I’m about to key ya verse/ I’m like an MC antivirus getting rid of this verbal epidemic curse/ 6 I’mma cut off ur foot cuz u just got de"feet"Ied/ Permanently put u in a wheelchair becuse u just got seated/ 7 I’m about to verbally murder u wit a lyrical script so Check~Dis/ That means one less human in the population census/ 8 You never even kicked a verse...and now you wanna make ma undefeted streak final/ I'll sever ur Backbone from ur skull and skip rope style, spinal/ 9 makin' you "Burst-N-Hurl", you couldn't land a punch if ya "Mic-Was-Fists"/ I'm all over you like "Dykes-With-Chicks", you couldn't come ill "Bitin'-Dicks"/ 10 Every once in a while I gotta skip the punches and just serve ya/ You ain't a rapper, you belong at "Burger King" "flippin' burgers"/ 11 |
i wrote 11 barz u can have a free bar holla bak 1
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One-man revolution with the solution, to give this x man his own execution, shut his critical mouth of all his lyrical pollution//
Skills like these come around as rarely as an eclipse, ask any one about the legendry killer -“ya cross he path-he spits lyrics n he rips”// Ya oral skill aint rhyming- ya were born with dick kissin lips-fags like you deserve to feel my verbal apocalypse// Like chop suey I spit my rhymes cold and raw, too intense and too hardcore, if pussies like you tried spittin em ya’d probably break ya jaw// I kill ya with my verse, to make it worse, infront of ya family at ya funeral ide run ya over with the hearse// Im a live for ever-with my rhymes to colossal, after I rip ya ass-millions years later you’ll be in a museum as a fossil// To mark KASS the man who turned legends into myths, when he drops a verse its impact is like he dropped from a cliff// Battled for centuries everyone I rolled up and smoked like a spliff-ripped apart pharaohs and tagged my name with their blood in hieroglyphs// Fake niggaz like you with ya un original emcee names make me vex, the word Chop Suey is known in most dilects, it means “everyone he battles-everyone he wrecks”// You aint a real emcee, ya just some killah kass wannabie, I got a hunch ya getting ripped… nah actually it’s a prophecy// Products want the best emcees so why the fuck did they pick you when recrutin, 8-0 wow I show ya my respect with my middle finger saluting// Its over now son-im a get a gat and start shootin, ironic how the death of the x man was by the Killa doing the executing…”BANG!”// |
Aight X got this...
Chop-you came nice and original, you need a different style I think cuz im not sure what words yur rhymin sometimes and the flow gets fucked up, maybe just try regulars line... verse was nice, decent punches all around..flow was shaky but it was a decent drop..just not quite hard enough... X your either a newbie or a cat whose lame...you had a couple lines that got it for you but shit man, some of your lines were soooo played... Defeet lines are like so played out its not funny.. that hold your breathe is played and that downy shit is played, but you did have some nice original punches so Ima give this battle to you... your flow is terrible tho.. that sepparation between lines is not needed makes it difficult to read and you need to even out your bars more.. X gets this, but it was close.. eD |
aight...
x, you had a grippa played verses...like the "DE-FEETED" and the FAR-FETCHED line, but other then that your verse was aight.... chop, you talked bout yourself alot in this flow....chop this and that....you should concentrate on the other person a lil more when battelin....juss my opinion...your flow was aight but the punches didnt hit as hard as x's.... vote=xecution.... do me a fav., peeps are sleepin on r.b......hit up a vote... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34852 this one to… http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34850 |
x i aint doin 2 well...im 2-0 down
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only poll votes count so it aint 2-0 just wait till the poll votes pan out...thx to those who voted n im sorry for the played out lines...ma bad ...holla bak ^^^ 1
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crook ed yo can u vote in the poll please u got 615 posts can u vote in the poll please holla bak 1
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X gets it... u both had tight verses but i was feeling X's more... I'd like to battle either of u cuz u got some skills
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thx....poll votes please holla bak 1
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lets go can we please get some votes ^^^^^^ holla bak 1
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X gets my vote he came hella stronger n shit his punches hit harded tho he had sum played shit but better overall then killer
vote- X ecution tyo the poll wont let me vote.. weird CAN YALL PLS VOTE ON CON vS ILLMATIX n CON VS KOKIENA thnx a bunch homies |
^^^^^^^^^^ poll votes please holla bak 1
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i think killa was a lil more complex, and orignal. X is just to typical and played. Killa get the W
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...ok there buddy...lol w/e POLL VOTES 1-0 me (officially) so can we get some more...holla bak 1
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votes!!! stop sleepin
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I'm votin for X for basically the same reasons the others did. Killer you had a nice verse though.
Vote - X |
thx 2-0 ......1 more for a ko lets get some votes
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X got my fuckin vote, i like ur style kid
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thx...uppen...holla bak 1
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^^^^ cmon people vote n stop sleepin 1
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Unofficial vote coz i cant poll vote yet.
Fav Line of the battle:- my bars-edged, sharp, rip the lung and hand it to ya so u could hold ya breath/ this attack will hit ya so quick itll be classified as a sudden death/ 5 Vote- X |
thx......uppen 1
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WAKE UP ^^^^^^^^ votes please 1
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yo mods this battle is over win by KO its been 3 days cmon lets close n update records 1
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