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Quik-$pit V's Rtikulate
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20 Lines Max First to 5 Votes Or 3 - 0 KO No Dyckrydin Vote Or Hatin Votes RYME TYME OR EmceeTrizt can't Vote on this coz they Hatin on me. Pz |
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Yo' i'm dropin' lyrical bombz with extreme rtikulate measures on yer ass// why you callin yourself rtikulate you got no style, no treasures or cash// I'm flowin like a river with a lightening flash and fire up under my ass// I'm like a bomb hittin' Iraq with an almighty crash// I'm gonna rip you to peices and serve for dinner on a Platinum Platter// My lyrics got game hittin you hard so you crumble and shatter// Your the next victim of Quik-$pit and 187 Recordz just got phater// You be writin your freestyle slow like a letter just tryna be better// your lyrics are wack while mine are hotter then a double barreled sweater// Cutting into you is easier than when Charles Manson cuts into his prey// Slicin you with my lyrical razor blades so you can't run away// I'll reveal all your insides like Kurt Kobain on his suicide day// I'll make sure you remember my name like its the only thing you say// Swimming round your brain like a record stuck on play// You don't want me to verbaly torture you with my spit// but your on the lyric stretch rack gettin drained of shit// You say that and this but you chokin in a bowl of your own piss// I will never choke i'm in tha lift, Elevating to the level of Jada Kiss// Spit yer shit as soon as you can |
nice rhyme m8
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i will..just got back from track..so ima spit
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This is Quik's Most Tragic-of-Moments, Cuz like *Tampered Bombs* im 'Crossen His Wires' so he Wont Last-With-Explosives.....
My Wrath-is-Ferocious, Watch as I Adapt-to-Opponents, Maken This Kid 'Admire My Flow' as if my Raps-is-a-Token.... Fill-This-Fool-with-Quotes, Even with 'Guitars and Knives, he Still couldnt come up with *Killa-Music-Notes*.. Like 'Violent Priests' ill Abuse-His-Hope, Bruise-His-Throat, Worser then *Meth Addicts* inhaling Fumes-of-Dope.... Quik Bites-Rappen, even with 'Glitter on his Lashes' he couldnt be EYE-Catchen.... Ya Defined-Wack-Kid, cuz you 'Out of this World' like an UnIndentified-Atlas..... Ima Rule-This-Enden, Cuz Quik's gon 'Desinigrate', as if im Shooten Pools-Of-VENOM... Take a Look as i Ridicule-Ya-Percentage, ya Wack!!, Now ima Attack and Rip-Thru-ya-Appendix...... -The End of Quik's Career- Ill leave ya 'music in sectionz' when I Split-ya-Mic-Wire... Im 'spreadin illnezz to churches' hopen to Hit-ya-Night-Choir!!! Quik is like 'Asthmatic Track stars', cuz Hes known for Loosin-his-breath.. Choosin-for-death, Ive got 'Lava Hollow Tipz' that'll Ooze-in-ya-chest!!!...... Ill Brawl-with-Fist, cuz like 'Babies that cant Walk', Im Haven you Crawl-with-Witzz... Come Raw-with-Spits, The Only thing we can 'Agree On' about you and ya Crew is that Y.all-A.int-S.hit... Switch get schooled kid . . know~this~bitch, your~ flow~is~shit, so stop pretending~ knowledge..... your chances of beating Rtik don't exist . . . Like Lebron James attending~college.. Admit this...you must be begging to get your~shit~kicked...so i'll place you on the~ r.i.p~list.... shit~bitch...beat me? you got no (w)rapping presence, like jewish kids on christmas.. -Game Over....Youngsta- |
Wot tha fuck Rtikulate did i not say 20 lines MAX??????????
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that is 20 line
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yo that is 20 lines man........................
Rtikulate got this one man.............I was feelin it.......... Qiuk not hotein' or anything but it sound like you kept saying the same thing but in different meanings.........."I'm gonna" was said like crazy and I like how you stayed on him but still Rtikulate got this one. VOTE????????Rtikulate |
Break Down:
Quil-$pit: Fav Lines: "You say that and this but you chokin in a bowl of your own piss// I will never choke i'm in tha lift, Elevating to the level of Jada Kiss//" Flow: I think the flow in your rhyme was worth 10/10 Punches: The Punch Lines where good but you should have hit harder Multi's: You had some good multi's in there which i like Rtikulate: Fav Lines: " get schooled kid . . know~this~bitch, your~ flow~is~shit, so stop pretending~ knowledge..... your chances of beating Rtik don't exist . . . Like Lebron James attending~college.." Flow: The Flow in your rhyme wasn't that good it was tacky, if there was a beat in there it would be all over the place. Punches: Your Punch Lines where good also, but you did hit harder than Quil-$pit Multi's: You also had some good multi's but Quil had more Vote= Quil-$pit Reason: The Flow is what did it for me, Dont get me wrong but Rtikulates verse was off the hook but quil's was better Pz |
Aight it was 20 lines MY Bad just read it wrong.
and wot tha fuck "I'm gonna" was said like crazy" That was said once you crazy gurl, did you read the rhymes or just vote for the sake of it???? All good tho 1 - 1 Pz |
uppin
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YO {Poll vote goes to Q..cuz he came HArder overall
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aight 2 - 1 Quik-$pit
Uppin Votes People |
Yo this is gettin slept on people
Uppin Votes Pz |
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS BATTLE IS DOPE!!!!!!!!! Quick and Rtik both had some hard as rhymes. This is a fuckin hard decision. If I could vote for both of you I would But I'm gonna vote for Rtik so I can tie both of you up. This battle was dope. You two should collaborate on a freestyle or somethin. Those rhymes were the shit. |
2 - 2
Uppin people |
this was a damn close battle
but i think q came away with it his flow was badass rtikulate ur shit was great to but just not good enough this time |
3 - 2 Quik-$pit
Man this shit is gettin tense Uppin |
vote quik sick lines he came alot harder better flow better punches better everything vote -quik 1
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4 - 2 Quik-$pit
Uppin Votes |
i voted but mine is a poll vote so offically count it...btw can yall vote on ma battle wit JBreppenNJ please 1
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Yo this shits gettin slept on
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damn..nice verse man..finally i got a good opponent..uppin
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Aight Thanx Man
Uppin Votes |
both strong but quilspit hit harder, like it dogg!
vote=Quilspit |
i vote quil
strong finishin |
6 - 2 quik-$pit
WIN = Quik-$pit Fuckin good battle Rtik You is the best i've had |
shit this was close but i gotta go with quick spit,he had flow and vocab,although tha shit was close.
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rap
yo i just joined but i got shit to spit
i come at u from a different angle this aint rappin its lyrically bein strangled sayin ur shit sound cool well i wont be cruel looks like u fell of ur highstool at high school i bet u were a meathead pay attentionu say the shit that he said makin ya run like forest ya flows just garbage its so old it sounds prehistoric i bet u never smoked chronic lil bitch ibet it makes u vomit cockin da glocks pull up ya socks leavin u bitches higher than rocks drink u like a bottle of jd u play me i gotsome other shit to spit g |
vote:Quil-$pit
I felt the flow better, thats bout it everything else was to close to call but the battle was real good |
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