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Sk!llz & Spiritz Collab-Wanna Be Like Us
well this is a collab we did for fun na mean lol
we did this shit pretty quick but its good ahaha so dont front ok Spiritz go first in the hook first and me then him back andd forth then 2nd verse its me then hook again Wanna Be Like Us-Lo Fi Wanna Be Like Us-hi Fi there we go Uppin -------------- p.s some peeps cant play soundclick so i uploaded it on dmusic aight http://skillz.dmusic.com/ its the only track there |
spritz needs emotion and a better rhyme scheme both flows were choppy and the chorus should be better. I don't know you said you were gonna do it over so that what I say you should do
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thanx for replyin
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yo yo this was coo, both had nice flow 4rill
lemme hear sumthin else |
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iight dawg imma peep
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1st verse i wasnt feelin. the flow was too choppy. second verse was pretty nice. The 2nd half of the chorus was Really off beat. but anyways keep it up. return the favor ya'll please. Peep God's Breath.
Mind Theory - God's Breath: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35586 |
It sounds like you could use a new mic too
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which one it was 2 people
thanx for the replys |
first verse = first person
second person = second person |
lol
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Mind Theory.. From St. Pete? Hmmmm... Do I Possibly Know You?
anyway i replied at R-S.. |
durrr
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KEEP IT UP YALL... I AINT A HATER BUT KNOW WANTS TO B LIKE YALL... THEY WANNA BE LIKE ME.... GET AT ME!
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LOL
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lol
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I Already GAve U My Opinion, TWICE!!!! :D
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