Pestilence \/s. Chrit
 

10-15 lines/barz
no crew votes d/r the basics check in.

Aight... lets do this

you spit first since you did a call out.

Aight look....

I see you read my first ryhme, and although i failed to truly shine
You done fucked up becoming the next fool in line
Cause you sound too much like a fake nigga that pulls nines
But when it on its on, I’ll use a fist and a mic to get mines
I’m grimey dog, I’ll track through this room caked with mud
Cock but one fist back and soak your shirt full of blood
So I’ma paint a picture dog and make it panoramic view
Make this shit managable for you while I off your crew
Cause I’m that breeze behind your back the one that makes your hair stand up
And when you walk faster that chicken wire slits that neck up
I wish this rap was in person so I could take 30seconds and make you bow to me
but on this shit you’ll take 15 bars and turn them into 3 pages and a glossary
So I’ma take these last couple lines and not get long-winded
Then when these kids get migranes they can say pestilence did it

ok
 

ok checkin in verse but up in a min

ok
 

I admit your verse was hot but mines leaves third degree burns//
Yea iam next in line but you still waitin your fuckin turn//
you like a nigga wit a smelly dick youll neva get a-Head//
Iam like a mechanical pencil I always click the lead//
And leave you dead like niggaz in scary movies //
I spray the uZi 50 shots...You feelin real woozy//
so get yo looseleaf and go pre-write on somone else//
say you an emcee and go celebrate wit yoself//
betta check yoself before you see an angray black//
pull out my gats fuck it perhaps a baseball bat//
no need to waste my shells on this wack kat//
the fact that Iam the best made you wanna start to rap//:D

Chrit won this, he actually made sense when he rhymed, and wasnt all simple, had some good punches that i liked, PeS, u need to practice more on usin wordz, n turnin em into punchlines, n be more creative or suttin, not tha wackest verse, but not good enuff to win this battle

Vote-Chrit

yea iam dissapointed wit myself on this one.....oh well POLL VOTES PEEPS THEY THE ONES THAT COUNT I HAVE 5 BATTLES AND NO REPLYS ON NONE OF THEM ON THE POLLS WTF YOU ASKED TO BECOME A VOTER WELL DO IT.

thought pestilence switched it up nicely in the first few lines but the rest was a bit weak
chrit u had some alright lines but again nothin special;
Cause you sound too much like a fake nigga that pulls nines
But when it on its on, I’ll use a fist and a mic to get mines
I’m grimey dog, I’ll track through this room caked with mud
Cock but one fist back and soak your shirt full of blood

those were your best lines i thought and u get my vote but it was close

1-0 up this one

up it again.. whats the deal with nobody voting???

uppin for a ko

Pes gets my vote. I didn't like either verse, but his seemed to flow better in my head.

Vote: Pestilence~

2-1 but 0-1 in pollz pleaze vote in the pollz uppin

sick of uppin my battles

yo pestilence. ima read this and vote on it in a min. vote on my battle with chrit in return ::: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36198

yo if you can poll vote do so but ima vote

i just reached 200. i pmed Pestilence for poll voter status. im not registered yet tho. I have to give this to Chrit. Chrit won.

Pestilence try to get off all the gun rhymes and rhyme about some things take are harder to think of.

Ive seen chrit do better . . .

good battle' ya'll. thanks for votin too.

AND

aight mind JU? don't free post

up again

up this one

I wish this rap was in person so I could take 30seconds and make you bow to me
but on this shit you’ll take 15 bars and turn them into 3 pages and a glossary

that was ill, chrit, u really did shine on dis one

my vote = chrit