LightWeight Title: Jay Pana [vs] MeNTiLL
 

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wow first week and i already get a title shot?? i feel special :D

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^WTF? LMAO....So we at it again huh Jay? Post this time tho...LoL...Good Luck....Peace

lemme post my verse before i forget. good luck Mentill. here u go,

Mentill'z Illness iz Artificial, Hiz Skill Iz Unmentioned...
If Hiz Intelligence iz Perfection, Why Iz It Alwayz Questioned?...
Mentill'z Flow Getz Him No Where Like High School Drop Outz...
He Getz Ignored Like Closed Threadz, Alwayz Gettin Blocked Out...
Hiz Skill Iz Unheard Of Like Blind Midgetz Climbin Monkey Barz...
Him Beatin Me Iz Unlikely To Happen Like Paraplegicz Becoming Track Starz...
Why Would Mentill Even Think He Has A Chance To Win...
When Kidney Stonez Iz Tha Hardest Thing That'z Ever Came Outta Him...
Hiz Rhymez Are More Played Out Than a Micheal Jordan Come Back...
It'z Like He Wearz Dickiez While Writin Hiz Versez Cuz They Alwayz Slack...
Rape This Kid Lyrically LIke A Kelly-Jackson Tag Team...
Hiz Versez Are Like Wack Horror Moviez, I Giggle Before I Scream...
Hiz Versez Put Me To Sleep Like Watchin Re-Runz of Krusty Tha Clown...
If He'z One Of Tha Illest, It'z Certain There'z No Skill In Beantown...
If Mentill'z Tha Future Of Hip-Hop, We're Doomed To Fail...
Hiz Flow'z So Dry Hiz Quote Of Tha Week Should Be, Drink Ginger Ale!...

16 linez...match it, good luck to ya. oh and if u don't get tha linez don't fuckin vote!

sorry for freepost, anyway to delete this? lol Much Luk To Both Emceez. Do Da Damn thing.

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To make it worth, I'll use one werd to sum up ya whole verse
Wack! Now 4 respect I'll send U 2 ya moms in a gold hearse
Jack, Jay, Gay, Shit watever tha fucc this kids name is
U thought U was intelligent by gettin' fucced up Uranus
Ya brainless, I'll leave U nameless, Next time think b4 U act
This kid aint got tha balls to not cum wack, He should be a Reservior Cat
Ack! Fuccin' homo, Was really countin' on me to no show
But oh no, That's a no no, Now I got U lookin' like an idiot sittin' on a pogo
Ya verse was simple as fucc, Me not get it U gotta be kiddin me
Pana's lookin' 4 his 1st win, But won't get it like celibate kids losin' virginity
U can't scar me, How'd U expect not to bring an army and win?
This kid ain't old enuff to get tha LightWeight belt he's still playin' wit Barbie and Ken
One thing U lack is structure, U need to use right designed bars
If rappin's ya way 2 get out, 4get it U'll be livin' ya life behind bars
Now here's line 15, Tha next one normally would be a finisher
But guy's Im sorry to disappoint U there's really no need to finish her


Blah a quick 16 to match yours....Peace

GOOD
He Getz Ignored Like Closed Threadz, Alwayz Gettin Blocked Out...

Hiz Flow'z So Dry Hiz Quote Of Tha Week Should Be, Drink Ginger Ale!...

PLAYED

Wack! Now 4 respect I'll send U 2 ya moms in a gold hearse

This kid ain't old enuff to get tha LightWeight belt he's still playin' wit Barbie and Ken


Hiz Skill Iz Unheard Of Like Blind Midgetz Climbin Monkey Barz



Ok battle, but JAY took it with harder and more mature punches . . . Mentill didnt really havve any metaphors or similes. . .

good battle y'all

my vote

JAYpAna



yo y'all go vote on battle against Mic Check, its gettin slept on . . .

Lookin' for similies go peep tha Poetry forum bud...LMAO...Uppin' for more votes...Peace

uppin...

just listen while i tell y'all my story </br> everything was fine, was all honky dory <br/> i was fucking three chicks while performing at an orgy </br> 6 months later they try to play me like they know me </br> saying they prego and i'm about to be a daddy </br> what's that Biotch? </br> that shit didn't come from my crotch </br> so just shut the fuck up </br> i got my nuts tied shut </br> i can't spit seed </br> you better check yurr panties, i think you're about to bleed </br> ain't from your period though </br> i'm about to stab ya, you stupid hoe </br> go find yurr own place </br> get outta my face </br> whatchya gonna do with the bottle of mace? </br> ahhhh ahhh ahh my eyes are burning </br> i was told to stop slapping hoes with my hands wearing boots with steal toes, but i'm not quick on learning

^herb azz mutha fucka...WRONG THREAD!!!

anyway...

can we get sum votez? quit sleepin ya'll

im giving this to jay cos less of his lines were played, over have both urs have been used before, there were a few decent lines like jays finisher, this was close tho i could be wrong with this

vote-jay

p.s. ur verse is due jay...

i was feelin jay and mental. Menal the only thing that kept mefrom votin fr u i waont inkin y ines to much and ya wordplay was wacky. Now jay shit was fire. I was stutterin with all dem big words but this shit was straight up nice i was really feelin



Hiz Skill Iz Unheard Of Like Blind Midgetz Climbin Monkey Barz...
Him Beatin Me Iz Unlikely To Happen Like Paraplegicz Becoming Track Starz...


that line had me right there straignt up nice


vote

Jaypana

yo jay got the title by ko!
match dun or wut?

vote jay cuz he had better wordplay n better punches n better flow

Jays lines i liked

Mentill'z Illness iz Artificial, Hiz Skill Iz Unmentioned...
If Hiz Intelligence iz Perfection, Why Iz It Alwayz Questioned?...
Mentill'z Flow Getz Him No Where Like High School Drop Outz...
He Getz Ignored Like Closed Threadz, Alwayz Gettin Blocked Out...

MeNTiLLs Lines

Ya brainless, I'll leave U nameless, Next time think b4 U act
This kid aint got tha balls to not cum wack, He should be a Reservior Cat

yo this was close, both of uz were good mentill had mo punches but that was only near the end but i have to give my vote to Jay cuse his rhymes had mo meanin

i vote jay, becuz i felt his punches was well put together, and
thought out,
mentill had sum coo lines also,
coo battle, good luck neck week

Jay... verse was blah... there were roughly 3 hard punches and the rest were blah...


Ment... You honestly could have had this if you had taken the time to let your lines flow into one another... there was no carisma... nothing to keep readers wanting to read... Jay beat you on that solely...




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