fgee v.s. blunt-mc
 

like I said.. 20 lines or 10 bars...
normal vote rules...
drop within 3 hours....

this herb's lame with a cranium capacity of a bird brain.//
the pain of this verse is surpassin' his worst day.//
mis-placed an' dazed afta I flip this rhyme and spin it around.//
switch tha style.. check it out...//
I got no need for-four when I got a nine.//
cock back one line an' fire with the aim of a sniper ta pierce ya mind.//
you eva been ta jail.. let me guess.. NO, bitch I'm-a lifer.//
29 timer, more to come, I can kill anyone with nuthin' but one punch.//
there it was an' you laid tha fuck out! get tha fuck out.//
you crashin' like columbia never touched down.//
ya, you bus rounds.. gat? nah, talkin' bout suckin' dick.//
ya got so much head it's a surprise ya-ain't got no brain, mahn's invelid.// (invalid... needed the soft e sound)
it's like god forgot to insert intelligence, 'cause anythin' you spit's irrelevent.//
your rhyme sounds like shit, fuck.. I could shit on my rhyme an' it would still embellish it.//
you need ta garnish ya cypher with quotations an' line bites ta ever sell tha shit.//
fuck this, bitch where you live, I'm-a make you smell tha fist.//
break ya nose flat.. take ya chain an' ya ecko hat.//
tha clothes off ya back, an' those russle simmons ya rockin' gimmeh dem.//
I told you this verse would rip you man.//


edited to add the bold parts....

u must be from japan cos u've sent urself on a kamikaze mission/
voluntary suicide i'm about to send u into demolition change ur features beyond recognition/
i therefore conclude ur retarded,cos ur limbs are about to be departed,how u supposed to move that wheelchair with no arms to start it?/
u'll come back with some fake gangsta shit, 'i'll put my glock in ur mouth and watch ya head split', bullshit just quit/
i don't need weapons,use my keyboard handin out 'CAPITAL punishment', got u all 'LOCKed' up ascend ur life into descent/
it's a well known fact u can't rap, reinvent ur image become a comic act/
just have to show ur face to make the audience laugh,they'll piss themselves n' split their sides in half/
an embarassment to urself and ur friends,u cock suck tryin to make amends, like saddam a dick-tator, your life on thin 'ice' like an overweight skater, ur life on 'the rocks' i'm not a hater,just have some respect for a rapper who's greater/
my rhymes are original with varied complexion,sharper than most like a serated projection, inflicting wounds causin mass infection/
kill u off quicker than lennox fighting a 10 year old,no second 'resurection' this lyrical 'aliens' body turns cold/
but lo and behold,elite front lines is barren of votes,and if u get any they'll just be misquotes

good drop
uppin this bitch

yea.. not too bad ya-self..

I can move this 2 front lines now.. I'm done one of my battles... so I'm-a see if one of the mods will do that...

yeah good idea cos it's gettin slept on big time in here

moved.

uppin

vote=fgee
this battle was real coo
fgee's lines had some good punches and multis
blunt mc was coo too but someone gotta take a vote so it goes to fgee
coem vote on
xplicit vs. vendetta
j.smith vs. vendetta

uppin

come on don't sleep on this,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

sleepers lick tate...

uppin'..

uppin again cos no one's voting
(half my posts are from upping battles)

same here dawg.. I really only got like 200..

fgee has elevated a lot!
I felt a lot of your lines, sometimes stuff gets a little corny, but there's a clear element of cleverness that Blunt is lacking.
I felt fgee's flow MUCH more than Blunt's.
Blunt has some good lines, but a lot of the verse seems like filler. I mean... I know you like the gun talk, but people really don't like it, newbs maybe...


switch tha style.. check it out...//
I got no need for-four when I got a nine.//
cock back one line an' fire with the aim of a sniper ta pierce ya mind.//
you eva been ta jail.. let me guess.. NO, bitch I'm-a lifer.//
29 timer, more to come, I can kill anyone with nuthin' but one punch.//
there it was an' you laid tha fuck out! get tha fuck out.//

Just stuff like that is offputting as hell.

I wish I could get some more personals that would instantly help both of you.

Blunt, you've gotta take the shit talking less serious and think about hurting someone with your mind. There's no intimidation in F9s.

Vote=fgee. Mos def, it would be a tragedy if this ended in tie.

uppin' 1ce more...

who the fuck voted without sayin anything?
that shit's suspicious as fuck make sure u say who u vote for
anyways appreciate some more votes in here

who'd they vote 4... I didn't think anyone even poll voted in this shit...

dis wuz a close battle but i feel like fgee to dis 1 cuz he just edge it all out and his punches wuz a lil bit
more on taget den blunt man verse..

vote fgee


vote on me vs dizzy d

3-1, but really 3-0 'cause I ain't think that vote 4 me in polls should count with no reason...

it's alright but appreciate u playin the game tru

I think both u cats was nice but if i gotta vote ill say fgee cause i think his pumches was a lil better

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<illest nigga alive

vote on my battle its just titled scarface capone cause he messed up but vote

4-1 UPPIN

lets see, blunt vocab was ok, but irrelevant is a negative werd not positive, the werd u shoulda used is relevant, irrelevant meens that shit dont make sense, i liked the kama kazie line

poll vote = fgee

why should I have used relevant.. I was say'n his rhymes were irrelevant.. meaning his rhymes don't make sence.. the set up was god forgot to give him intelligence... just to clarify...

whats that 5-1 me?looks like another victory

yep... an' another loss 4 me

yo vote on my battle between the specialist

can't i'm in the production's

fuck...

anymo votes?

uppin this bitch one more time...........

vote for fgee

better flow and punches

vote on mine ya'll
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