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i spit ma lyrical tactics like a strand of elastics//
and condemn all unworthy emcees 2 dey muthafuckin caskit//
ma vocab iz so enhanced, dey say ma brain iz IBM compatible//
lyrically ma words is mo destructive den a Black Panther radical//
I percisely split linez like a fire drill at lunch time//
ma mouth iz always thirstin to swallow emcees like its crunch time//
ma lyrical skillz is beyond safe boundries//
im lyrically inclined 2 tumble dry emcees like dey ma laundry//
i write 2 relieve ma mind and all of ma tension//
and im lyrically known 2 put ma demeanors on suspension//
lyrically i castirate niggaz like a muthafuckin deamon//
cuz i lyrically cut off dudes breathin circulation without no reason//
im a psychotic lyrical menace 2 dis fuckin society//
ma wordplay and vocab comes in all shapes and varieties//
it disguist me 2 c so many fake emcees//
so what ill do is disguise maself and rip dem in lyrical combat and do maself a good deed//

uppin 4 comments now!!!!!!

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....wake up yall sum fuckin feedback shit!
where ma MP niggaz @??????

sup hommie... a'ight spit.. flow an' what not was pretty tight.. I'd like ta see some mad creative shit come from you yo, you got mad skillz but rhymin' a played topic.... ne-way.. peace dawg

iight zeen nuff respect ........^^^^^uppin fo mo comments now.

this iz a good rhymes but sum of yur shit dun make sense, and u keep sayin lyrically this....but overall it was dope

wtf......i only said "lyrically" 6 tymes!

^ LMFAO!

this was a sub-par drop....
elevate your mind man...write about something that people can actualy relate to....
why do you up this for comments?...you need to improve your writing skills...there's the coment of the day

Thats a lot...

Ok, first, read this, and don't come back with some "fuck you" shit or anything...Learn from whats being said.

Listen to "-opia".

The whole "lyrical" this "lyrically" that is 1- Play, 2- Old, 3- "Newbie"ish, 4. Boring...

Basically listen to what opia said.

BLAH BLAH BLAH..........all that comes to mind when i read these bullshit ass boring rhymes

i believe that MicDareall said it best...lmfao

bun u u fuckin hatas... yall fagets probably couldnt do betta.

Gettin ragged on...and you stutter? lmao

And what did I say? "Ok, first, read this, and don't come back with some "fuck you" shit or anything...Learn from whats being said." ...And what did you say? "bun u u fuckin hatas... yall fagets probably couldnt do betta." ...Kid, grab a book...read...smarten up...and maybe then you can come back.

yeah dogg, they tryna help u lol

lmfao

hahahahaha...play, you cant even see the level that im on from where you are.....stack your skills and your smarts and then try talking shit....otherwise you just make an ass out of yourself...
go look at my verse....you couldnt fathom

Fow was shit hot but be a bit more creative it would kick it up a level

yeh more creativity up in dis piece wuz needed.u had like 2 decent punches but it didnt make up for tha lack of originality or the repitious use of 1 word.Elevate sum kid,not hatin jus helpin U out.Stay ^
-Avi

i have an idea, if your going to talk shit to people tring to help you get better then why dont you just leave?

you dont come here expecting every one to think your nice, if we think its wack we will tell you its wack, but we dont say it out of hate we tell you to try and make you better. listen to waht everyone say and put it into the next thing you write to make it better.

but the way you are acting now i dont think anyone is going to reply to anymore of your open mics cause your acting like a herb

Exactly^ Thank you Myk.

And play so you know, I just said that to someone who I've beefed with.