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otic 04-04-03 05:58 AM

i'ma mother fucken killa blaze the duct freestyle
 
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Peep my freestyle out and let me know what you think just give me some feed back.freestyle

otic 04-04-03 06:23 AM

damn can i get some words on this shit

BLACK FLAME 04-04-03 08:29 AM

damn mexicanz

BLACK FLAME 04-04-03 08:38 AM

this shit was cool the voice is ill delivery very generic I dunno make a real track

otic 04-04-03 12:04 PM

black flame i'm fucken recan niga so dint play yourself nothin mexacan here

otic 04-04-03 01:34 PM

but thanks for comments

otic 04-04-03 03:07 PM

can i get some more feed back

icediggety 04-04-03 09:56 PM

u a mexican .. just like a mexican family, family reunion everyday of the week .. and why in the fuck do u got on that big azz jacket when dude in the back got on a t-shirt

CHAMELEON 04-04-03 10:02 PM

^^ cause he just got in the house
haha
the rhymes not too shabby loco

[) 04-04-03 10:48 PM

LADIES N GENTLEMEN fabulus's younger albino/anerexic brother


HAHAHAHA shouldn't a called me a pussy


u is loco

BETTER WRITE IN OUR BATTLE slick

otic 04-05-03 11:54 AM

STOP DICK EATIN
 
look man i aint a mexican and that jakect is a whool rich cost more then most of your cars and fabolous is hot thanks for the comment pussy

otic 04-05-03 11:57 AM

just give me comments on the freestyle i aint know i was that famous with haters. thats why s.d.e is STOP.DICK.EATIN

FiL-Be-iLL 04-05-03 12:15 PM

yo fuck these niggas...half these mufuggas come from England anyway...i dont beleive every single one of ya Location selections...


up ya mic game...u need more work on line layout, flow, all that...just work on that 'n u'll be cool...oNE...


oh an sick Northface son...i got the grey one wit white fur on the hood...reeeeeeeeeal warm.

ouT

otic 04-05-03 02:46 PM

fil-be-ill you seem like a throuh nigga keep in touch dog

BLACK FLAME 04-05-03 06:58 PM

Re: STOP DICK EATIN
 
Quote:
Originally posted by otic
look man i aint a mexican and that jakect is a whool rich cost more then most of your cars and fabolous is hot thanks for the comment pussy


Do you mean "which"?


Horrible punctuation, spelling and grammar; definitely a Mexican. LMAO j/p dowg, it's a joke. You need to loosen up son, and phil I'm not from no damn england nor is icediggety, so I do not know what you're talking about .

MiC ChEcK 04-05-03 07:15 PM

yo...you suck bad...you eatin the mic or rapping in it ?....and yur songs dont make sense either..i didnt hear a word in any of ya songs or so called 'freestyles' a.k.a. pre-written.

Kapone 04-05-03 07:33 PM

the beat was hot cuz, i got an audio commin sometime tonight or tommorow as soon as i getta chance to record, and the haters do need to SDE haha tru........... OnE

Kapone 04-05-03 07:34 PM

how you diss ur own crew g?

otic 04-05-03 11:03 PM

this nigga mic check just a haeter cuz i was gonna tear a new ass hole on him dont mind him he doesn't exist so poof son of a bitch

Ka-BOOM 04-06-03 06:03 PM

U know, dawg, I could learn from u. Keep the shit goin, but get a better mic, a'ight?

Concise 04-06-03 07:20 PM

you the one that stole my sisters jacket? fucker

Anyways, this was aiight... im too tired.. 1

otic 04-06-03 07:49 PM

thats was sup keep it gully and ka boom dog if u want i could be your mentor nigga

otic 04-07-03 02:38 AM

i been at dis since i was 10 and now i'm 19 yeah i put some work into it

otic 04-07-03 09:36 PM

sup can i get more critisism

[) 04-07-03 10:18 PM

YEAH



POST YA FUCKIN VERSE MAN, let ya eyes wonder to the battle thread



2min max

GET IT
my shits done i spit a freestyle it'll splitya tho don't trip


take ya time

otic 04-09-03 10:59 AM

nigga you better chill fuck is wrong with you

otic 04-09-03 11:00 AM

i never met some one so ancsious to lose befor


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