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"7 Deadly Rap"
Sloth, Lust, Greed, Envy/
Pride, Wrath, and Gluttony/ These are the seven things that can destroy a rapper's soul/ trust me, I already know/ cuz Im......... Im....... Im the most gluttonous muthafucka you've eva seen/ always ea-ting, but never once ever hun-ga-ry/ glut-to-ny's, got me/ de-vour-ing/ ev-er-y thing I see/ filled with greed/ and avarice, Panda-ris/ Box was locked/ (Pandora's Box, changed to rhyme with avarice) til I wanted more/ and exposed it to the whole fuckin world/ you could give me earth, and it still wouldnt work/ could give me the universe, and it still isnt worth/ what I really want/ which is what this other guy's already got/ cuz even tho Im greedy, Im more envy-ous/ try as I might, the grass will always be greener on the other side/ born of absolute desire and green eyes/ but no ambition cuz Im the most indolent prick you've never met/ "fix the fence?" shit I cant even pitch a tent/ here u can have my fuck/ cuz Im too lazy to give it, so Im givin' it up/ more sloth then the animal if it was passed out and drunk/ and since I dont have it any more, I can honestly say "I dont give a fuck" 7 ways to lie, 7 ways to find, 7 ways are mine/ here just let me have a try/ 7 ways to rhyme, 7 ways to cry, 7 ways to live/ and 7 ways to die/ Im back with an inordinate craving for pleasure/ my horniness is off the charts...can't be measured/ attracted to shit that's not the norm/ beatin' off to bizare, hairy, fat, chink porn/ always humpin and fuckin and rubbin one out/ never humpin or fuckin, but Im cummin out loud/ walkin around with a permanent erection/ cryin out "OW", with this permanent infection/ Im a wannabe porn star, u dont even have to pay me/ cuz Ima still be lustin even when Im eighty/ Ill be cummin on teens like Arthur Fonzarelli/ no one but time can tell me/ how good Im gonna be/ shit right now I see myself as the baddest emcee/ already better then Pac, Slim Shady/ B.I.G., Nas and Talib Kweli/ (I dont really, just to show Pride) not gonna even try blah, blah, bla-blee/ this goes beyond words, goes beyond rap/ cuz God dont know the wrath/ of a foresaken emcee/ I butcher double-crossers in life and in their dreams/ a vindictive vengeful muthafucka killin in tha streets/ rage with absolute passion/ look at me wrong, bitch u just askin/ for 7 ways to lie, 7 ways to find, 7 ways are mine/ here just let me have a try/ 7 ways to rhyme, 7 ways to cry, 7 ways to live/ and 7 ways to die/ .....and thats how we live and end our life, .....7 ways....Hooligan X...520.....peace.... |
damn why niggas be sleeping n shit, this was sum nice shit dogg
hook was co0, lyrics was on point liked the second verse u should tryna put this in audio |
thx a lot for uppin
ur right fuckas sleep like a bitch in here |
returnin tha favor
nice topical verse homie.Real diff subject and its good to be original.Switched it up a lil to tell bout 5 different stories @ once but it came out real hot.Stay ^ -Avi |
thx for uppin
everyone else that is sleepin WAKE UP!!! I posted on a bunch of threads so please return the favor thx |
this was nice, had great vocab and it didnt sound forced, i like the whole thing, but the 2nd verse was better the start of the first verse kind of threw me off.
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thx for uppin
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i thought that shit was good, and the verse was hella tight too
i agree w/ d.l.w. i think u should think about recordin that in an audio, thx 4 writin 2 me , peace soilder22 |
thx a lot man
and I will keep peepin ur shit everyone else c'mon I need some fuckin feedback Im just lookin for one or two more responses thats it, Iwill peep ur shit in return if I already havent |
yeah nice piece man
same reasons as given above^^^^ |
if i knew a lot more on the seven deadly sins and what they meant the rhyme probably would made a whole lot more sense to me....but everything flowed perfectly....i liked it.....
mad uppins |
thx for uppin
lookin for one more |
great choice of words...def one of tha best i read all day! it had alot of meanin..i liked it.. :)
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thx for uppin
go vote on my battle against 512 |
its tight cuz its original....but i cant go off like the rest of the katz in here bout how great its written....jus got boring
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hey everyone has their own opinion
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Yeah, 12, it's nice...but you know me you lose points for tha negative line about God...but if you can control these sins then maybe you could get into paradise...couldn't be too hard it's just 7 demons
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was a tight peice,liked the topic and all,the ending withthe 7 days and lies and shit was nice...peep my shit sometime...propz...
bismillah |
thx for respondin
Drawn dont get me wrong I didnt mean any disrespect to God Ive been a devout catholic since I was born hell I wrote a rhyme called "Portrait of a priest" I just did it for dramatic purposes |
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