W2 Heavyweight Title: Champ Quotient [1-0] VS Avalon [1-0]
 

OH SHIT... Merk Squad vs Merk Squad..? This should be a fuckin nice battle here people...




Get ready...





Avalon...

Ha ha. Here we go right here. Good luck fellow Merk member. .

Let's get this done by tomorrow... I don't wanna make these kids wait naw mean..?

30 lines... max... Don't know what I'm gonna do... *shrugs shoulders...* might do 2 lines... might do 30... depends on how I feel later...


Good luck...


Avalon...

Aiight dog. I'll just drop whenever you do and match ya. Good luck man. Merk Squad is in this.

Let's go... 1 line = 1 bar...




Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...
And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...
I'm hostin vital scripts that corrode the hopes inside'a kids
..couldnt make a name for yourself.. so Av provided it...
so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...
you're history dunn.. it's the truth kid.. this victor is heartless
after thanks are given for replies submitted... Q'll no show quicker than Evolve did...
when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...
this ya twelfth match, so if you post then they're lines for nothin
..cuz I'll prove that ya wins in battle only come a dime a dozen...
ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...
so practice tactics.. I'm usin full force to slice this cunt
once I get this party started.. Av's pull cards 'n spikin the Punch...
fools'll get deaded when Professor Av is schoolin contestants
I'll make you play Russian roulette wit the bullets you sweated...
this duel is regressin.. you'll feel the rapture as gays disperse
you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...
Av is the realest with.. rhymes.. so expect me to kill this bitch
way I shut this dummy up you'll think Av's a ventriloquist...
I'll fold-this-fuck & whoever said Him was nice as me
..& after I show-his-blood.. I'll make Hemocyte to see...
this guy's a jock.. face the tyrant & move in a state of violence
you & ya crew are nothin but mimes so I'mma break the silents...
showed this geek I'd blow his steez & wont show fatigue
your only chances of bein champ are in the poetry forum below the league...



GOD DAMN..!


30 lines...


Good luck...


*walks out...*

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//
I came into this match expecting something but it's all the same
. . Merk Squad blows like a storm, but I'm Rocking You Like A Hurricane//
I see your hand on the bible but that really won't save-ya
. . And I'd say I'm a fan of your work man. . but I don't sport an Ava//
Smash this kid, until I use his vertebrae to eat my salad
. . Av was never in Superb, but it always fronts on Average//
I'm not a net thug but just wait until lead hits
. . Yea I guess that line was dope, at least until I read it//
Avalon is ok but still I stand before him, Quo is tops
. . Cuz face it, this kid sucks like old ladies at truck stops//
Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//
Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//
Avalon is quick to smell defeat and this verse was sent scented
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//
Fuck a slam, I'll peel up the concrete to bash Avalon and his ghostwriter's faces
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//
What's next ? Aww. . we're just now at the appex
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//
I'll be walking away from this battle. . after Avalon is in a hearse
. . This battle was as miss-matched as the lines I write in my verse//
Avalon is really putting his nose the grind, until I make it as smooth as slate
. . And lets pause for Avalon to gather his cents like a collection plate//
Stomp this kid so hard I'll be pulling Avalon out of a hat
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//
Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

DAMN! you both tore this shit up. too close to call

Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//

i really loved those right there, The wordplay was hittin and it was hittin hard. avalon i didnt like yours cuz ya punches were no where man. It was real plain and it just had flow. Nothin really stood out to me..


Vote

quotient

accidental post, i will edit this with my vote.

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...

you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...

Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

^^^ tight ass punches


ima have to give this to AValon.

ths was a really close battle and both of u had hard hittin punches, but avalons hard hitters hit just a lil harder.

good ass battle y'all.

1-1... OH BOY..!

Both you guys came hard. This was a dope battle. It is really hard to call

Av

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...
this ya twelfth match, so if you post then they're lines for nothin
..cuz I'll prove that ya wins in battle only come a dime a dozen...
ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

Dope ^^^

Q

Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//

Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started

Nice

So.... Being as i have to pick one.......................
VOTE: AVALON

avalon, not being mean but ya gotta read..its 2-2......

and my vote is......*notice tension*....i think avalon took this....


Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...
And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...


^^^nasty lines, wish i coulda thought of em.

vote: Avalon

3-1... Tek has 1 post... so Mic Check you're tellin me... that this kid signed up for Rbbl and replied to this thread... with... 1 post.? *shakes head* Even so at the time... there were only 3 votes... would have been 2-1... but dunny isn't in the league... I mean damn good break down... but he isn't in the league... Damned if I know where you get 2-2 from... sorry bro...



now... like I was sayin...


3-1..! OH WEE..!

Haha, Avalon your getting soned..
Avalon got this hands down,I can
sit here and quote shit from both.
But rather not. This is how it is..
From start to finish, Avalon came tuff.
Q, you fell off, And punches were
soso. Had the right idea..But it just
didnt work for you dogs. Aint trying
to play any of u's just calling it how i
see it..So there for. My vote goes to

Avalon!

i vote avalon i aint gonna qoute shit
he won because i liked his flow punches and i was feelin that verse

Either quote or your votes don't count. Not bitching Avalon and I are cool but I mean come on. A Heavyweight title match should have quotes you know where I'm coming from ? And no where in the rules does it state that they have to be in the league. He had a nice break down. So voting stands 3-2 until the rules change or something. Nice shit though Avalon. If this can sway someone. . DON'T READ IT. This post is for Avalon

Score: 3-2 Avalon is up.

lmao@if this can sway don't read it... that's my dog... Ok... well no biggie... I thought they had to be in the league to vote... so that's cool...
3-2...

I Am Keystylez..

Read The Rules If It Doesnt Contain Quotes It Doesn't Count .

y'all suck, check dis ill shiz out-
there once was a man from Peru, who dreamed he was eating his shoe, we woke with a fright in the middle of the night, to realize his dream was true-
b-otch

Ok now i have time to quote, Its as simple as this..

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...

^ Dope..

And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...

^I was felling that

I'm hostin vital scripts that corrode the hopes inside'a kids
..couldnt make a name for yourself.. so Av provided it...

^Dope and original

so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...

^Funny, not to hard hitting

you're history dunn.. it's the truth kid.. this victor is heartless
after thanks are given for replies submitted... Q'll no show quicker than Evolve did...

^ That was whatever

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...

^ I lol with that one. Funny as hell

this ya twelfth match, so if you post then they're lines for nothin
..cuz I'll prove that ya wins in battle only come a dime a dozen...

^Original, like the way that was twisted

ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

^ The dopest line of this battle

so practice tactics.. I'm usin full force to slice this cunt
once I get this party started.. Av's pull cards 'n spikin the Punch...

^ Nice

fools'll get deaded when Professor Av is schoolin contestants
I'll make you play Russian roulette wit the bullets you sweated...

^ That was really dope

this duel is regressin.. you'll feel the rapture as gays disperse
you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...

^ Cool

Av is the realest with.. rhymes.. so expect me to kill this bitch
way I shut this dummy up you'll think Av's a ventriloquist...

^Wasnt feeling that, thought it couldve been said better

I'll fold-this-fuck & whoever said Him was nice as me
..& after I show-his-blood.. I'll make Hemocyte to see...

^ Haha, for those who didnt get it, Pay attention in school..lol

this guy's a jock.. face the tyrant & move in a state of violence
you & ya crew are nothin but mimes so I'mma break the silents...
showed this geek I'd blow his steez & wont show fatigue
your only chances of bein champ are in the poetry forum below the league...

The ending was just cool, Overall verse...Dope



Ok Q,

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//

^No, bad start

I came into this match expecting something but it's all the same
. . Merk Squad blows like a storm, but I'm Rocking You Like A Hurricane//

^Where are you going with that punch?
Another bad one

I see your hand on the bible but that really won't save-ya
. . And I'd say I'm a fan of your work man. . but I don't sport an Ava//

^That was cool, but still wasnt hard hitting

Smash this kid, until I use his vertebrae to eat my salad
. . Av was never in Superb, but it always fronts on Average//

^I wasnt feeling that one

I'm not a net thug but just wait until lead hits
. . Yea I guess that line was dope, at least until I read it//

^ Feeding off his verse, wack!

Avalon is ok but still I stand before him, Quo is tops
. . Cuz face it, this kid sucks like old ladies at truck stops//

^ Noooo

Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//

^ were is the punch.Dont make sense.

Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//

^ Your trying to hard dogs

Avalon is quick to smell defeat and this verse was sent scented
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//

^ Ha, that was fucken pure dopeness!

Fuck a slam, I'll peel up the concrete to bash Avalon and his ghostwriter's faces
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//

^Dope beginning, but fell off a bit with the last line

What's next ? Aww. . we're just now at the appex
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//

^NOO

I'll be walking away from this battle. . after Avalon is in a hearse
. . This battle was as miss-matched as the lines I write in my verse//

^ was feeling that one a bit

Avalon is really putting his nose the grind, until I make it as smooth as slate
. . And lets pause for Avalon to gather his cents like a collection plate//

^ Nooo, Dogs were are you going with your shit??

Stomp this kid so hard I'll be pulling Avalon out of a hat
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//

^I think you still havent figured out what punchlines are

Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

^ Dope

Well this will only happen when its a Heavy weight match.
Will never do this shit again..

Overal Avalon verse was far better then Q's
I think most of these kids are getting confused
by Q's format. And i dont think everyone is
reading that whole shit.. Well there you have it folks

1ne..

Vote shouldn't count^^

The kid didn't even get my verse. And yes. . all my lines were punches. It's called personals. PLEASE IF YOU DON'T GET THE VERSE DON'T VOTE. That's all I'll say. So score stands

3-2 unless Avalon wants it to count. Fuck I don't really care. . just seemed like a bias vote to me. Plus he didn't get any of my personals.

And never once did I feed off his verse. Avalon can agree to that. It's called a punchline kid. Damn man. If you don't get the shit then don't vote. No bitching or beefing here Av. But yea. . people like that piss me off.

Stomp this kid so hard I'll be pulling Avalon out of a hat
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//
Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

Nice quotient^^^^^^^ That was my fav. part of your verse.

Avalon:

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...
And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...

Just as ill, this battle is going to Qou, overall his verse was stronger throughout.

Good Job, u both worthy of heavywieght titles.

Vote: Qoutient

Q... kid broke it down... so... I'm cool with it... 4-3...

That's straight I guess. I'm not here to bitch just wanting a fair match cause this is gonna be down to the wire by the looks of it.

4-3 NEED MORE VOTES

(And please explain and if you don't get it don't bother. Both verses were packed with hidden metaphors and personals so if the punch doesn't makes sense. . then obviously you don't get it. Just my 2 cents.)

AV: 8/10

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//
I see your hand on the bible but that really won't save-ya
Smash this kid, until I use his vertebrae to eat my salad
. . Cuz face it, this kid sucks like old ladies at truck stops//
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//
. . And lets pause for Avalon to gather his cents like a collection plate//
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//

Quo: 9/10

lol damn Triflin . . . you didnt have to quote the entire battle . . .



all u had to do was quote 2 lines lol

quotient, took it well, Ava came hard, but Quo edged it....

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//
good open,
Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//
Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//
Avalon is quick to smell defeat and this verse was sent scented
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//
Fuck a slam, I'll peel up the concrete to bash Avalon and his ghostwriter's faces
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//
What's next ? Aww. . we're just now at the appex
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//

I felt all this was strong, Quo took tha V to me,

Avas vurse was good too, but I fucked up an I cant quote it at all....
sorry....
But good battle

If i quote 2 lines then niggas will complain i didnt quote much.lol
Bottom line is, I understood every line you spit Q. Come on..
I wasnt feeling it, thats all. But hey its yall battle.. Yall can choose
Which votes count.. Its cool with me. I thought i'd do the favor
in quoting like what was asked.. Never mind.. Good Luck to both
of Yall..1

That was not necessary to post^ But yea. . whatever. I doubt you did.

Score is 5-4 I'm up. Damn good battle.

^ You a trip man..lol

same reason's both emcee's came very hard i liked this battle alot it should be made a sticky for other heads to peep and know where the skill is at, i was feeling this shit hard great battle you 2 enjoyed the read.

Vote....damn Its Sick Battle...both came hard as fuck....

Hard decision.....

let me break it down...

Av

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...

Comedy shit...hahahaha had me laughin..........


ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

Nice....

Q

Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//

Dope...


Yo got to go with AV.....eventhough i dont like him...lol

Good battle

Quite the entertaining battle, and I look foward to reading a rematch..

Avalon's Highlights:
"Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet... "
NICE OPENER

"so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin... "
HA HA HA.. Gave me a chuckle!

"showed this geek I'd blow his steez & wont show fatigue
your only chances of bein champ are in the poetry forum below the league... "
SOLID FINISHER


Quotient's Highlights:
"Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//"
HAHAHAHA.. VERY, VERY SOLID FEW BARS

"Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//"
YET ANOTHER SOLID FINISHER


Was almost too close to call, but my vote goes to Avalon..

SCALE
flow: quotient
vocab: tie
multis: avalon
punches: barely avalon..
wordplay: tie

VOTE: Avalon

Quo didn't come close to me.

Avalon just insulted him line after line. Further, Quo had some
punches... But some lines were just clever wordplay that really
didn't embarrass Avalon at all.

Examples:

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...

^Damn

so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...

^Damn

ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

^Sickness at it's finest... lol

this duel is regressin.. you'll feel the rapture as gays disperse
you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...

^lolol... Oh Shit.


It was just too many insults for Quo.


Vote=Avalon

7-5 avalon

avaon killed this