|
W2 Lightweight Title: Champ JayPana [1-0] VS Mind Theory [1-0]
|
hehe . . .
CHECKING IN HECKING IN ECKING IN CKING IN KING IN ING IN NG IN G IN IN IN N :cool: yo uh yi-yi-yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo uh yi-yi-yo chicka chicka chicka YO! aight Jay Pana . . . the best of luck, lets make it good . . . |
checkin in...
|
this is a battle i will be diff votin on and i dont wanna freepost so ill edit this to my vote once yall battle and check out mine against mind theory old oppenent mic check
|
yo uh yi-yi-yo . . .
Quote:
yo yo yo uh yi-yi-yo chicka chicka . . . Mic Check 1, 2, 1, 2 . . . It's like bombing Iraqi muslims the way that I kill the wraps (raps)/ You contain wackness in your veins . . . plus you're a hemophiliac// Your verses byte so much, that my computer can't hold 'em/ While my punchlines stay connecting waaay quicker then Cable Modems!// It must have been a loooong fall when you dropped the bars that I quoted/ ^^^ Because that shit was soooo WACK, you must of been high as fuck when you wrote it!// You got more bitch in you than bitches themselves . . . how can it be??/ My verse will lock you down with pressure, and make you frantically key// You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/ You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows// (win-those) Jay Pana is the true definition of the American Fag/ My punches leave more stars circling your head then the American Flag!// You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/ YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . // :eek: I put you down so much, the grounds fed up, 'cause your rhymes are dirt cheap/ Sticks and stones may break my bones . . . but your words couldn't hurt fleas . . . // I'll mash your rhymes like potatoes . . . with gravy on top . . ./ I'll even write this line in red, hoping that maybe you'll STOP// My lines will leave you violated, it'll hurt worse then the dick/ You must digest your bars before you drop them, 'cause all ur verses are shit!!// I'll fire punchlines that blind your sight . . . without looking/ The only time your verse is raw is when I eat it . . . without cooking// No more kiddie games, either face the Truth-or-Dare to get hurt/ You know I'm ill, you're stalling like horses cause you're scared to spit first// Thats aight, whether I spit first or second, you're filled with fear/ Your spit's like the creator of this league, because ya Skillz dissappeared!// You claim you spit sick, but its more like you're choked with Ebola/ When it comes to winning battles, I'm "Always . . ." like Coca-Cola// :cool: . . . sizzle . . . :cool: . . . By the way, for the voters who failed English class, Hemophilia is a genetic disease in which the blood lacks the gene that controls clotting. So the when a hemophiliac starts bleeding it is almost impossible to stop because the blood doesn't harden to dry out to form a scab. Hemophiliacs are known to have died from blood loss from minor injuries such as nosebleeds and papercuts . . . . . . aight ur turn to drop JAy Pana, try to do it soon cause the sooner you drop the better voting we will get . . . goodluck :rolleyes: EDIT:: I unitalicized Jay Pana and changed FAG to Fag due to kids claiming I was explaining a punch . . . |
this kid better not fucking no show on me . . . I'll cry . . .
|
lightweight champ no showed ?...what an asshole.
|
He's Not Gonna No Show......But I Believe It's A Chance U Will Get D.Q'ed Mind Theory Because U Made U'r Punches Stand Out.....If U Would Have Read The Rules.....It Clearly States That.........'
And Jay Is Gonna Murder U -OuT- |
hes right mind..............
|
i dont know what y'all are talking are talking about . . . the only lines that i could see that u could possibly be talking about is . . .
You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/ YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . // I capped STANDABLE not to highlight a punch, but because Jay Panas name was under it, and I capped it at the end to show it was the same word. I'll even write this line in red, hoping that maybe you'll STOP// . . .I wrote this line in red cause thats what the line said. duh. When it comes to winning battles, I'm "Always . . ." like Coca-Cola// I quoted "Always . . ." because thats how it is on the cans . . . No more kiddie games, either face the Truth-or-Dare to get hurt/ I dashed Truth-or-Dare because its a game, so all the words go together. Explaining a punch would be where you quote or highlight two seperate words or groups of words to show that they have an inner meaning that relates them to each other . . . such as:: It's like bombing "Iraqi muslims" the way that I kill the "wraps" or While my punch"lines" stay "connecting" waaay "quicker" then "Cable Modems"!// ^^THAT would be explaing a punch . . . I didnt explain punches in my verse at all. It probly wont matter seein how this kid is gonna no show on me. . . . AND GET OFF MY DICK SYNIKAL |
here u go,
His Flow Iz Dumb And Simple Like Retardz Eating Instant Rice... In Hiz Mind He'z Ill But In Theory He'z No Where Near Nice... He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light... Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight... Hiz Versez Are Like Novelz, Long But Are Never Bestsellerz... Hiz Audioz Put Me To Sleep, It'z Sad Cuz He Won't Get Any Better... He Thinkz He'z Popular Cuz Hiz Battle Last Week Wuz Viewed Tha Most... It Wuz Mainly Him, Tha Word Uppin Wuz More Than Half Of Tha Postz... Hiz Flow Iz Intolerable, It'z Almost Like A Catastrophe... Everytime I Listen To Him I Think I'm In A Tragedy... LIke Neutral ATomz, Hiz Flow Never Producez Energy... If Rankz Were Based On Wackness He'd Alwayz Be Ahead Of Me... His Skill Iz Fake, It'z Nothing But An Act... I Thought He Wuz Gangsta 'Til He Said Bustin Ninez Wuz A Math Fact... He Claimz Hiz Versez Sizzle But It'z Still Getting Cold... Hiz Punchez Are Like Burnt Out Candlez, They're Used And Old... Hiz Chancez Are Diminished Like Tha End Of Hussein'z Reign... Treat Him LIke Def Jam Did To Murder Inc., He'z Singin In Tha Rain... if u don't understand anything don't vote. and don't vote cuz he has more linez than me. quality winz over quantity. start tha votez. |
wow.. Quite one-side, despite the attempts of Jay's partners in crime to dig up dirt on MT's verse..
Mind Theory's Highlights: "You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/ You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows// (win-those)" NICE WORDPLAY, A RARITY THESE DAYS.. "You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/ YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . // " HA HA HA, COMICAL, MY BOY.. UNBELIEVABLE WORDPLAY AND PUNCH IN ONE.. PERHAPS THE TWO-LINER OF THIS FORUM SO FAR.. These were only a few of abundant examples of all devices of writing which clearly won the battle for you.. JayPana's Highlights: "Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight..." DECENT PUNCH, I IMAGINE.. "LIke Neutral ATomz, Hiz Flow Never Producez Energy... If Rankz Were Based On Wackness He'd Alwayz Be Ahead Of Me..." VERY GOOD, SHOWS INTELLIGENCE.. However, I think the size length (or lack thereof) of you piece did come back to JayPana, even though he doesn't want anybody to say it.. Mind Theory had more quality punches, a consistent flow, better multi's and captivating wordplay.. JayPana did take the vocabulary, though.. The creativity is what seperated the two.. Mind Theory's ideas were all new and fresh, as opposed to basic punchlines seen from Jay.. I look forward to reading more from both in the future. VOTE: Mind Theory |
vote: mind theory
he had the punches and all that other shit down....i cant put a couple linesi n herre cause i liked em all..... -mind i was wondering if you wanna join my new crew.... 'ReStLeSS TaKtIkS' members so far: -me -P.L.A.S.M.A |
Good battle from both emcees
"You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/ You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows// -Mind Theory gud wordplay He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light... Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight... -JayPana simple punch but funny How I saw it. Punches: Jay it was close only reason ppl wud say it was Mind Theory cause of tha amount of lines he put out and Jays were more hard hittin in my view Flow: Jay he kept it short and direct where as Mind Theory had it strecthed in order to put out tha punch Complexity: Mind Theory coz he didnt need much use of similies to easily put out tha punch where in Jays part had a lot of like which was alright but so so Creativity: Jay by a bit coz of how each new bar was a new idea Mind Theory mentioned some punches that were already brought in his verse Enjoy: Jay though it was a simple lay out some of tha lines had me laughing. Final Verdict= JayPana no hate or d/r dats juss how I saw it much respect to both |
2-1 hiz way...uppin fo votez...
good verse mind. u had sum decent punchez even tho i've seen half of 'em before i.e. tha microsoft line also u did sorta make ur verse stand out...u used italicz, in tha rulez it said u can't use any of that wut so ever...u also put sum wordz in all capz, i'm not talkin bout that standable line eitha. Quote:
^there'z tha rule rite there uppin... |
WACK, FAG, AND STOP are the only words capped other then standable. None of them have anything to do with any hidden wordplay or anything, the caps were just takin the place of exclamation marks.
Jay Pana is the true definition of the American FAG/ there is nothing explained in that I'll even write this line in red, hoping that maybe you'll STOP// This word is just in caps cause thats how they appear on stop signs . . . not explaining anything, but if what im refering to has the words a certain way ima write it the exact same in a battle. Its the same thing as me writing Microsoft Windows, instead of microsoft windows. Because that shit was soooo WACK, you must of been high as fuck when you wrote it!// WACK was capped just to show the extremity of wackness involved. nothing to do with a punch, the punch is in the second part of the line after the comma anyways. You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/ YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . // Jay Pana is the only word italicized, its not explaining a punch at all. In fact it actually has nothing to do with the punch at all. I could see if I italicized "under" maybe . . . or maybe if I said . . . "tear" through "flesh" like a "cannibal" . . . trust me, if i was explaining a punch you would know . . . so I hope this will end this discussion . . . |
Now that thats clear . . . 2-1 me . . . upppingg . . .
|
MInd's Tight Lines....
It's like bombing Iraqi muslims the way that I kill the wraps (raps)/ You contain wackness in your veins . . . plus you're a hemophiliac// It must have been a loooong fall when you dropped the bars that I quoted/ ^^^ Because that shit was soooo WACK, you must of been high as fuck when you wrote it!// Jays Tight Lines..... He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light... Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight... Jay- Almost Every Sentence Began With Hiz or He Or He's....... It Felt Like I Was Reading A Poem Not A Battle..... You Had Nice Punches Though Some Were Played Out...... My Vote- MInd Better Punches And It Held My Interest..... |
this was a c00 battle i think mind theory won with betta punches n shit, jay had dat one line that was funny to me tho
He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light... Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight... lol my votes goes to theory becuz i felt his punches was betta both was nice tho, good luck next week yall |
yea i gotta say i seen more played punches in mind theorys verse than ever. the stop line was creative though. jaypanas flow was off but his punches were better i felt. he had more personals and his punchlines and complexity was better.
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
_________________________________ Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
For those that dont kno, Def Jam kicked Murder Inc out their building in atlanta. Good Battle For Both, Seen Both Come Better Though... vote - jaypana less filla more punches creativity - mind theory complexity - pana personals - pana punchlines - pana |
thanks for voting y'all. uppin 4-2 me.
|
i vote jay i liked his style on this shit
he had sum damn sick lines His Flow Iz Dumb And Simple Like Retardz Eating Instant Rice... In Hiz Mind He'z Ill But In Theory He'z No Where Near Nice... He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light... Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight... shit, dat was damn good, mind theory had a nice verse but jay came nicer |
dunno if im aloud to vote...but jay gets this shit..both battle verses came really strong on each sides but I felt that jays shit was more personal an direct than Mind's. Mind's had alot of punchlines which kinda through of his efficient directness at his opponent.
vote - Jaypana jaypana comin along better since ya earlier battles here niccah. keep up. |
No doubt about that shit, Mind won in a blowout (even though he did explain his punches) My vote goes to Mind Theory "Long live the King!"
|
^^ dont know if they count none of em were explained, but if they do then 5-4, me.
|
this is the last day of votin. lets get some votes in this biatch.
|
it shouldn't matter if they're in tha league or not as long as they make an attempt to explain why they voted on whoeva they chose. atleast cannabarz explained hiz vote. mad_man didn't at all. i don't think mad_man'z should count for that reason. don't think i'm tryin to cheat u out a vote or anything cuz if sumbody voted for me and it wuz unexplained i'd take it away myself.
uppin for votez... |
i never said anything about bein in the league
|
i never said anything about bein in the league
they have to have quotes was my point. i was talkin about my vote also. uppiin. |
i kno wut u wuz talkin bout...i'm lettin it go, i'm gonna bitch about a vote.
uppin... |
Aight, I added up all the votes that count. The ones that have an explanation and quotes. Being in the league does not matter . . .
Mind THeory - DaLyricalWhiz, Billy, LyricALI, and Mic Check Jay PAna - Flipninjah, Mystery Murder, Dark History ^^These are the votes that Nefarious is gonna count cause they have quotes and an explanation. We each have a vote that doesnt count. NOTE:: Mic Checks quote was my whole verse as he stated in his vote. so 4-3 my way, UPPING!! |
Yeah, NICE battle...
Both verses where cool with nice flow and puch lines... but mind theory gets my vote for more metas **better Metas**.. But other than that a prettty evenly matched battle... Keep up the good shit both of you... Fav Lines... "My lines will leave you violated, it'll hurt worse then the dick/ You must digest your bars before you drop them, 'cause all ur verses are shit!!//" Vote = Mind Theory |
thansk for the vote Quick. 5-3 me upperoo . . .
|
sorry jay. i was really thinkin that u would get this one
vote=mindtheory mind theory u was hittin with punches like bloaw!!!!! ya wordplay wasnt really there but the multis was also there u feel me jay u ws hittin with mad personals and u also had wordplay but i dint like ur multis. so i wanna do a draw but i jus read em ove and left ou the punches and personal just went by multis and wordplay feel me |
the windows line was on ok concept but worded horribly, and jay pana never showed any skill.. his lines could've been wrote by a two year old.. both verse4s were incredibly horrible flow wise.. and pana's verse was even worse concept wise.. at least mind theory had attaempted punches were as pana used generic and horrible disses that never even hit hard, i mean obviously if you say hes wacker than you he'll be ahead of you uin a rankings of wackness.. thats just a wack punch
vote - mind theory |
7-3 me thanks y'all. uppin!!!!1
|
Mind Theory Sux hahahahahahahahaha
|
lol what up kid
|
hI
|
MIND THEORY WINS.
7-3. mind theory (2-0) jay pana (1-1) |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:00 PM. |