W2 DIZZY D [0-0] VS Crook Ed [0-0]
 

Check, Im doin 10 bars since Im guessin this man'll no show..

LOL, why you think i wont show??? Checkin in. I never miss a battle esspecially not one in a league or tourney.
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Yo, lol...Sorry, thought you'd no show cuz Ive never heard of you, thought you were a newb..

Ayo-
Dam Right hes Dizzy D, Knockin em 360 degrees
Sure you'll beat me, right after Amish people start usin electricity
And Look! His record in the Past is accurate up to date
Well lemme give you a glimpse of the future.. can you say, 64 and 8?
Why do you state that wack shit in ya sig..must be a herb fa real
Im sure KING O and FireSquadGangsta are extremely ill
And you run with a mafia man they musta made a mistake
Elmira?! Who would roll with D, he made a whole city Bitch Made
And you claim you make assasinations toward American cultured Races
And yet your a white boy, Before I kill you...you gunna make a suicidal escape?
Fuck this ape, copy and paste his verse that took hours of time
Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines
And to the herbs on this site, Please dont follow this Wack Bitch
I mean he even reps a Fuckin crew that aint even Established

lol...

Add em up...Post when you can... you'll die when you do..

eD

LMAO. Wow you should of studied on me. I heard you was an ok emcee. You really should of came harder. Be up in a little bit.
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Ayo....

Contradiction to your afflction proves you wrongly predicted, heavily addicted to your self esteem leaves you intensely restricted//1
Inflicted from your whole nervous system leaves you blinded from wisdom, confining your bodily functions prism making you suffer in great cataclysm//2
Great anguishing torture, throwing punches in shells out of a mortar, making your head crooked with third degree burns like an african scorture//3
Eternal blood dripping and organs ripping is all thats left of tha corpse, eclipsed bandages manages to slow the process but it still vastly absorbs//4
Swelling fails to cease, heavy pressured under spot light with no release, darkness over~comes.....your survived by your DNA on tha soaking sheets, rest in peace//5

5 bars equal to 10 lines so same as he did.
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Vote Crook Ed

He actually attempted some punches.. Some were nice

Dizzy-D no disrespect or anything but you basically dropped on Open Mic... Its good to use volcab but not if it doesnt say anything

Ed
Fuck this ape, copy and paste his verse that took hours of time
Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines
And to the herbs on this site, Please dont follow this Wack Bitch
I mean he even reps a Fuckin crew that aint even Established

Dizzy-D no disrespect or anything but you basically dropped on Open Mic... Its good to use volcab but not if it doesnt say anything

Yup......

Crook Had Some Punches But None Really That Caught My Eye...
But HE Did Have Punches....

My Vote Rook

Retun the Favor....
Vote On My Battle Against .Sand.
Peace

same views as above
dizzy what u playin at??seen u throw punches but u didnt have any man...
crooked won this purely cos he had some

Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines

liked the play on russian there was good
didnt have any oustanding punches or anything but at least u had some Dizzy d that was good stuff but not in battle

WTF? dizzy what was u thinking, lemme let u in on a little secret, PUNCHES WIN BATTLES not hella word play and nice vocab
but if this was in open mic i'd give u two thumbs up lol
u lost, u had no punches Crook ed won becuz he had punches
nice verse tho dizzy, dat was sum good shit homie

vote crook ed, his opener was dope , it made me laugh

lol.. I didnt try to hard... Good battle Dizzy..

mane i didnt try lol. I would of ripped you but i made a bet that i could rip your wack ass verse with out any punches. looks like i fuckin lost 5 dollars. But yea i figured i lost and if any you people knew what those words meant you would see that my shit was intense and ripped him in everythang except punches and personals. But i guess good job even tho that was a wack ass verse you had lol.
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Think what ya want altho your opinion doesnt count, I dont expect herbs to understand my ish...But anywho, I win!

Good luck to you in up coming rounds... And if we battle again Ill make sure to rip worse..

LMAO, claimin it was a bet.. what a cool guy...

Can you say.... Battle??

well there seems to be quite a debate over who won this battle. well here's a crazy thing i learned on other sites it's called explaining your vote i'ma try it like this

fav. lines(pick a punch from each guy)

crook-"Dam Right hes Dizzy D, Knockin em 360 degrees" great way to open a battle nice and direct punch

dizzy-"Great anguishing torture, throwing punches in shells out of a mortar, making your head crooked with third degree burns like an african scorture//" not much of a punch but the multis used my lord!

breakdown of rest of match

flow- crook ed gets this he's was just there and easier to find not that dizzy wasn't good just you know

punches- close here outside of the opener crook didn't have much i'd have to say it's a tie

mutlis- dizzy every line had something rhyming and it was alot of high sylable stuff too not rhyming bat with cat or nothing dizzy gets this

volcab- you know i gotta give this to dizzy with all of those multis and big words

overall- dizzy d took this bout the only thing that really hurt him was crook's opening line aside from that dizzy had it the whole way through

I beg to differ . . .



DIzy didnt have any punches . . . punches and wordplay wins battles . . . Crrok had some, D had none . . . Crook wINS . . .


The only thing DIzzy got Crrok on was a nice flow, but I wasnt feelin all the big words tho, it makes ur style seem artificial, and it just looks like ur tryin to hard . . .


GOOD battlE GentLemen . . .


Ya Prewrittens are shit, To save face he says hes always Russian his lines

best line of battle^^^

everything else was . . . blah . . .

Eternal blood dripping and organs ripping is all thats left of tha corpse, eclipsed bandages manages to slow the process but it still vastly absorbs//4

worst line of battle^^^

Ok i lost. But let me explain something i had punches just not as many as crooked. I had no personals and crooked did. And mind theory if your sayin that you wasnt feelin them big word then you dont know wat they mean and how they're pronounced. I hooked this verse up wid some dope lines. Every word maid since look tha words up in tha dictionary. I'm sorry that i was blessed with a big vocabulary. And crooked, did you want me to say battle or sumthin??? is that a call out??? Cuz if it is then PM bitch and i wont hesitate to give you a fuckin real ripping experience.
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I didnt say it didnt make sense. If I wanted to I could write a verse with twice as many big words, but I dont want to cause it would sound like shit. I know what the message of ur verse was, just in my opinion ur punches were weak, and I'm am not feeling ur style . . .

Crook Ed Wins By A Fucking WHOLE LOT...
Dizzy man ...WHAT WAS THAT?

wow.. Dizzy, you only hurt your cause with the post-match excuse-bearing innuendo.. That makes you look really bad to certain people. Just take the criticism (and the loss that came w/ it), and put it to work for the following weeks.. I agree with what everybody else said. Although the vocabulary was cool, the punchlines are the true entertainment..

Highlight of the Battle:
Crook Ed: "Why do you state that wack shit in ya sig..must be a herb fa real
Im sure KING O and FireSquadGangsta are extremely ill
And you run with a mafia man they musta made a mistake
Elmira?! Who would roll with D, he made a whole city Bitch Made"

some nice personals there along with punches.. Dizzy, ya have potential, but multi-syllable words don't bear the weight that a nice punch or two does.. Plus, it severely hinders the flow..


Vote: Crook Ed

This ish should be over..

awg that shit dont work. and that really shows that u new u were goig to lose and it let you opponen see that he had to victory. Dont ever do that. It broadens herizons for your opponents and it lessens the for u. U lose all your focus when u do shit lik that.


vote=crooked

hekilled it withthe personals. His wordplay was really killin. Punches multis it was rea understandable nd the consistency was there. He never got off track and he stayed on his target he never got off for one minute.

now dizzy he had ur ass dizzy. I believe that if u never would;ve posted that^^^ then u prolly wouldve had a chance. U prolly didnt reaize it but your confidence went down a whole lot even if u were just joking

stop it man. Juyst stop it dawg how can u actually say u were blessed with a big vocab. Son those are not big vocabulary words. The average sixth grader could tell u those words straight off man. U wanna enhance ya vocab READ READ READ. Then when u come across a word u dont know underline look it up then u can use it in a sentence and memorize the word and the definition. Thats not strong vocabulary man. U wanna see some vocabulary when the votes for ya attle is finished ten you can come see me and fuck PUNCHES since thats ya very weak point we'll do vocab,wordplay and multis battle now wheres ya heart reall at.

crook ed wins. 8-1

crook ed (1-0)
Dizzy D (0-1)