the keystyle by atetrack,peep all yall
 

ermmm ok yall,this is a real quick keystyle whatevr you call it,it aint checked ove ror nothing,thought id just post it,so dont get picky coz ive mispelt shit or something,like i said its quick...open to all your critique also!i dunno the subject,just something i wrote out , enjoy,oh and if you havent already gimme a comment on my other open mic peice,im looking for comments,i got 100 something veiws and like 30 comments,dont make no sense...blah.

bismillah


ive been trialed and styled to public for treason//
acts of heresy on the subjects of no apparent reason//
contemplated how many of the four seasons ill be released on//
im speechless,i demand freedom,dammit its peasant hunting season//
in two days time yall consider that species non existent//
ready to fight for they rights but willin to uphold little resistant//
knowing that its futile,they stop they commitment their arguement non persistant//
lobbing neanderthol projectiles,deflected effortlessly off riot sheild equipment//
sobbing chemical viles bacteria pregnant,resented merciless for yeilding malignant//
pigments shades of red and blue,violet ochre and green//
reflecting on every angle like in a angelic dream,seemelessly intergrading into the scene//
even though its robot and projected onto a white screen,it cant tell the difference//
science screaming we even got nature beat,revelations tears of joy an screams//

ermmm....yeah...ok i forgot my line...right erm fuck it ill change it...ok.

(uh) incoming,troopers flag down a another mother ship and open fire before inspectin it//
rejectin git for sardine fodder unimpressed by it,detonate it...uh...cast and crew present//
the picture went black,and everyone relaxed,inhaled asmatic breathes no benifits//
an hour of happiness were noone in the little tight knit television soap opera esqu family had to think, no regrets...except//
moments form now they wont remeber the begining and in doing so cautiously rejoing the line//
reusin gtheir tickets,stealing and by their own free will subject themselves to brainwashing//
erm,yeah its a vicious cycle yall.alot of shit now days is evil.i only use computers to spell check//
coz my academecs(Academics)are something of beauty,even one of little intellect would respect//
congregate form massive rally round the novel burner,spit on the epitaph,or light a match//
either way is taken as an insult to some,and the signs of a structural community collapse//
relapse back to the dawn of the attacks and remap the acurate lack of defensive positioning//
pause at the moment of gunfire christening,zoom in on the crazy man in the crossfire whistling//
( hell no!)vice prez subjected the detect and misdirected his intents,(cross reference failure)//
illhuminati.....
ill change the order in wich things are done,ill make the lungs swap to the sun,questions the question marks//
and theyll question themselves,and ill horde all the answers for myself,ill be a think tank,horde it all to myself//
introspective,as we delve into the prisms reflective intentive directives and compromisse the outstanding objective//
targetin demory selected,left in desert dessert for vultures,oh hold on your death kicks are art,let me sculpture//
the big bad wolf is here to hear your fear,best get holstered.
one`

womans voice,robotic loudspeaker ((free verse failure critcal fault,meltdown imminent,destruction intent increase,repent...repeat...repent,repent for your god forsaken souls(bang,static) )

And thats how you shut the fuck up bitch,god damn.
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like i said mad quick hit me up something...haha make sense outta that,i know what im talking about

on the realthis guy is the best kat spittin in here...no offense to anyone but this kids got mad shit on his mind yo...nice shit for real...much respect man...one

thankyou narc,i never though of myself as any good before i started posting on these boards..mad love...
bismillah

SON THOUGH THE COMPLIMENT WILL HAVE HIS HETRO~SPEC QUESTIONED HE GOT A POINT YOU NEVER FAIL TO AMAZAE ME

thanks words perfect,ima boutto be droppin in on the hit parade anthem right now...thanks for the comments
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lmao at word perfect

This was Preety ILL yo...im feelin this

Keep Spittin Em Flames Son

yo narc check your inbox

Say you do got some skill... but uh... you call that a short keystyle? lol.... nothing short to it.. that's alot to read but I enjoyed it so nice work ... OoNnEe

thanks angelic,much appriciated,well i know it aint short hahaha,by short i mean time taken,10-15 minutesa t the max,most of my peices are liek this...only osme get the look over nahmean,...
thakns saladin,i peeped your peice earlier was tight...propz
bismilah...

ups ups ups

man i have a feeling that if you didnt write your head just might become to tight because i can see there is more on your mind than hair ive read lots of shit here and there but few campare to what i just took in just incase i missed somthing ill read it once again

thanx for the free art

thanks for the love usual

up up up

wow, this is a damn good piece. but just to make me feel better, tell me you wrote that, cause if it was off the head that is fantastic. good piece. lyrics were nice and so was the topic. keep spittin.......also, sorry it took so long to hit up your verse

nah cat sorry ima ruin your day or whatevr that shits off dome straight nahmean,if you want a written peicce try my first spit...thanks for the comments cat...sall good bout the times an all,no need for an apology.keep peepin my shit eh

bismillah

yes this was a short keystyle u dont understand that if u rapped like me [like BONE] it goes up like gas an a match it lasts about a minute or 2 and a good production lasts about 3:30 i am uppin this joint i loved the end, yall peep out suicide letter and an upcoming Kapone Production: Militant Mind

foreal cat i know what you mean,man if youve got the bone style,ima definetly peep your shit when it goes audio,the suicide note deserves to go audio forsure...itd sound so tight..i been listening to bone since i was real real small,like 1990 or osmehitng with faces of death,shit had me hooked from the get go...thanks for the comments

i dunno wat to say that hasnt already been said. pre-written or keystyle this is incredible. U got a good head and serious u should use it to get u urself sumwhere in this game. ya vocab was tight and ya flow was themes were heavy. U rappin in an OZ accent? hope so cos it ruins things if u dont do it in ur own accent ya kno wah i mean.
anyway cuz return the favour and check mine and Jonny6feet's collab (i kno i said i wasnt up on collabs but we from the same city, merseyside so we just kicked a couple of verses)

yer i kinda have this australia accent,but living overseas for such a long period of time without returning home ive lost it a little,kinda sounds like a mix of a arab american spanish thing ahaha,if that makes sense,but im sure in due time my voice will correct itself