Patrick Bateman
 

There is an idea of a Patrick Bateman; some kind of abstraction. But there is no real me: only an entity, something illusory. And though I can hide my cold gaze, and you can shake my hand and feel flesh gripping yours and maybe you can even sense our lifestyles are probably comparable... I simply am not there... Patrick Bateman


the sneak preview, hallucegenics that free evil/
make the feeble do obsessive vibrations from turntable needles/
stay on point without religion like burning churches and keeping steeples/
blaze mcs like forest fires, and my life's speaking of a sequel/
you thought you were walking in an airport cuz you tripped down so many flights of steps/
take the shape of any plane, many lays to your right or left/
i flock chronically smoke to provoke to spit the shoe shit out/
my lines are Fire when i'm Stoned like tires that burn like Houstons house/
these clouds of blunt smoke make my lungs hold to my chest/
take it in and get dumb red like retards holding their breath/
fuck over random people like serial rapists its a manogomy/
i'm the artist thats hard to see like the face of your partner during sodomy/
i've been on punch lines caught in lunch time snorting kool-aid powder/
tracks are matching, circle the highway at two miles an hour/
still tag a block, take a risk, no wonder they clock/
(who?) them cops, feel like a wrist cuz i'm constantly under they watch/
for better words, scroll back to the top and start re-reading this verse/
comprehending this is harder than reading license plates on cars darting off in reverse/
constantly bombing buildings/
autohrities want me killed or rotting in prison/
thats why i display sickness like lauching viruses in to the solar system/
put you money where your mouth is, i make you cough your cash/
then rip your face off like it was an Alphahydroxy mask....
TEST...the Patrick Bateman in this industry/
making you keep your head down like an erectile deficiency/
at tremendous speed, to hit you outta range, wha tthe main target is/
twisting trees like hurricanes, Patrick Bateman better known as the Narcicyst....

some shit i wrote in like 5 minutes....feedback please
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this was a nice drop. i felt the topic and u also had some nice wordplay in there. just work on ya multis and rhymescheme and ya ish'll be better. Keep spittin and elevatin. 1

thanks...i wasnt workin for a multies verse though for your information...and as far as rhyme schemes go i think it was pretty good...but i appreciate the feedback...good looking out...one

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I liked dis man it wuz hot.Ya had sum good vocab in there and it flowed pretty consistent.Ill drop,Stay ^
-Avi

thank you...you know i gotta be versatile with my shit cant be only flowin one way namsayin...its a new style i'm workin on for a new alias of mine...good looking out....one

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yo dog dat shit was tight, keep flowin man

thanks dunny

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As always it's a keeper Narc...them, theys tha sleepers...sleep on me too, if you wanna...Vote on my battle with Shadow: Linez Vs. shdow dog...you'll see what I mean...peace...good drop...

no doubt dunny...imma peep that shit and thanks for the reply...one

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still uppin this and it was from 3 days ago

patrick bateman?fill me in...he sounds like my type of cat ahha...nice spit for a quik 5 minute thingo,touch it up mad nicely and as always itll be on point like crossbow bolts with sniper precision...nice drop narc,hit me up yo,my bad i aint replied in ages have been moving house once again,but i is back now(hooray)yer i can hear cats cheer...pffft

thanks dunny...Patrick Bateman is my other alias...you should read the book American Psycho(the illest shit written next to Illuminati Trilogy)...Patrick Bateman is the main character in that book...good looking out dunny....one

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i just wanna know what this obsession with patrick bateman is, i read the ryhme, te ryhme was good, but damn man, u should start a cult or sumthin lol, i think i saw a movie called american psycho, but man, o well what ever floats ur boat eh?

thanks...the movie was wackness i thought the book is so much better and graphic...anyways its not an obsession yo if you read the intro of this rhyme it will tell you all you need to know...good looking out...wahid (one in arabic)