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da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:30 PM

white rapper
 
My rhymes r sophisticated enough for a scientist
But u can understand them I can promise this
From the glory to the glory to the money to the money
I was always were. Were it was sunny
I didn’t have to grow up in a rough neighborhood
And I didn’t drop out of school
I kept it cool
Especially on the mic
Get shot at I don’t know what that’s like
So the only thing I have in common with the average rapper is skill
And the way I talk might have appeal
Put I’m the average white boy out of the burbs
I didn’t grow up freestlying on my friend’s curbs
My parents had jobs they rolled in the dough
Now I am doing it 4 the way I can flow
Y is that bad
I don't know don’t u think that that’s sad
I had 2 have a bad child hood to rap
Or better yet I would have 2 b black
I did ball in the playgrounds I no this
But they were in Trumbull wit white kids
U no all we did was shoot
And when he did sumting nasty we didn’t hoot
We didn’t have r du rags in the air
Because we didn’t care
Next point wins that's all that matter
And getting into a college and having an Alma matte
I got all right grades and I didn’t flunk out
And now when I rhyme I don’t pout
I just keep it real
And tell you how I feel
I got every meal
I got everything from breakfast to dinner
But I have 2 admit I was a little sinner
But I kept rhyming instead or killing people dead
When I had a test I made sure I read
NOT
But I did formulate the plot
To get out of school
And go 2 Florida 2 swim in a pool
I haven’t lived it yet but I will
Not a straight A student but still
I will pay da bill
when i go to a bar and grill
And have a burger with fries
And I paid I didn’t cum up wit lies
So 2 end it here
I had a good life adn im white y do u care
So that's my story and I’m out
tell me what u think gimme a shout

RythmicTendicies 04-12-03 03:37 PM

try to keep the bars same length as much as possible... not a bad attempt though

caspah 04-12-03 03:38 PM

man u were bitin some shit outta 8 mile there man

"scar and kill, bar and grill"
"im outy, now u know all there is to know about me" that was just changed a very little bit
plus the rhyme scheme was simple and so were the words

come up with some of ur own shit

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:41 PM

im sry if i did, i didnt notice it man, when sumtin fits or ryhmes things cum 2 me i just write em down, if i truely did i didnt mean 2 man ima change it right now thne ll just edit it

RythmicTendicies 04-12-03 03:45 PM

yeah..just sorta noticed that you are trying to be to much like em,

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:46 PM

hes my rolemodel when it cums 2 rap i have the same way of rhyin and i sound like him its weird, i shulda knows it was stolen im mad man

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:48 PM

i got another song its liek a depresed song here it is

When darkness falls upon me

im not in control of my life
i feel like grabbin a knife
and goin slice
it cant b dis way
i cant feel this way
i wish this was just another day
its not cool feelin like this
ur moody sad and very pissed
u cant even put all ur poblems on one list
its like happiness left and blew u a kiss
but da kissed missed
mide as well just punched u wit its fist
there aint nuttin 2 luk 4ward 2
just more pain, what else is new
u wanna give up and call it quits
cuz ders always sumtin in ur way like a wall of bricks
u wish ur life was like what u c in flicks
perfect, happy and everything in between
but really its mean, glutany, and greed
and the pain and sorrow grows in u like u feed it
u wanan beat it
but u cant defeat it

Chorus:
u wanna beat it but theres no way no how
and u don’t have a way out rite now
and it wont let u get up
cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get up and jump

It’s a new day
But u still feel da same way
Feelin like death is certain
Like sum1 is closin da curtain
And darkness falls upon u
It sneaks up and surprises u
and yealls out BOO
And u have no way out
So u start 2 pout
Ull do ne thing to get away
So u get on ur knees and start 2 pray
Hopin god is rite there hearing what u say
Hoping he understands u and says ok
Then u start 2 c da light
And u no every thing will be alright
Now u don’t even wanna go to da knife
U start luvin and appreciatin life

u wanna beat it but theres no way no how
and u don’t have a way out rite now
and it wont let u get up
cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get and jump

N-Demik 04-12-03 03:51 PM

Ooooh Text Choruses Are So Guuuuuuuuully....

Ooooooooh

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:52 PM

guly?

self 04-12-03 03:53 PM

"the white rapper" my god...

You bit. You actually suck...omfg...this was sad..

sorry, I shouldn't rag on you, but give up...

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:55 PM

u have 2613 posts Bruklor
and u havent battled once, y the fuq r u at this site if u dont battle pussy, can u even fuqin rap?
and ill abtlle u and fuq u up bitch

N-Demik 04-12-03 03:56 PM

Oooooooooooh J's Merking

Oooooooooooh..Haha

Hasn't Eminem Got Enough Wannabes As It Is?

Narcicyst 04-12-03 03:57 PM

^^^hahahahahahahaa

self 04-12-03 03:57 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by da lyrical ninja
u have 2613 posts Bruklor
and u havent battled once, y the fuq r u at this site if u dont battle pussy, can u even fuqin rap?
and ill abtlle u and fuq u up bitch


lmfao, I don't battle you fucking Eminem cock sucking wanna be.

I can rap, ...and it saddens me that you are at RB rapping, where I rap. I shouldn't have to be around wackness like you.

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:58 PM

Take A Good Look At Me, If It's Time To Face Your Fears
Tha Day You Beat Me, Someone On The Simpsons Will Age A Year

who have u beaten man??

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 03:59 PM

gimme on of ur raps Bruklor

Lokinator 04-12-03 04:00 PM

I can see how this gunna turn out... Da Lyrical Ninja is gunna say sumink like this...

''Yo everybody from the 313 put your mothafukin hands up n follow me, look, but while he stands tough notice that this man did not have his hands up''

''Ohh shit... i didnt realize em said that, he's my rolemodel n when i write stuff comes to me, didnt know it''

I can see in ta the future

self 04-12-03 04:01 PM

Kid you couldn't afford one of my raps...Like a poor man walking into Taco Bell.

N-Demik 04-12-03 04:04 PM

Why Did You Quote That?...LoL Irrelevant..

I Don't Even Battle On This Site But Im Sure Ive Beaten More People Than You..

Do You Have An Em Hairstyle?

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:05 PM

hey methane
dont gimme blame
for drivin u so FUQIN insane
just cuz ur rhymes r lame
u can c into da future man
O SHIT CLEO IM U BIGGEST FAN
fuck u bitch ur in rappin denial
u think u can freestyle
cuz u saw da movie 8 mile

The End 04-12-03 04:06 PM

OK, here is where I'd put a very witty and smart ass comment.. but I think they'll be enough in here as is, so I'll be moving right along..

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:07 PM

Em hairstyle- umm kinda not a short, and i dont bleech my hair its naturally blond,

to poor for one of ur rhymes- taco bell, dats the reason ur soo fat
and i bet i got twice da money u do

self 04-12-03 04:10 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by da lyrical ninja
hey methane
dont gimme blame
for drivin u so FUQIN insane
just cuz ur rhymes r lame
u can c into da future man
O SHIT CLEO IM U BIGGEST FAN
fuck u bitch ur in rappin denial
u think u can freestyle
cuz u saw da movie 8 mile


LMFAO!!! oh shit! I'm gonna have a fucking heart attack! Oh Shit, To fucking funny!And you actually said 8 Mile, lmao, thats the only reason you ever picked up the mic, lmfao, oh shit, these little hurrbs.

N-Demik 04-12-03 04:10 PM

Whats Money Got To Do With Anything?, Were All On A Ghetto Internet Forum Kicking Gangsta Text Punches..

Equal Opportunities For Everyone

So On A Scale Of 1 - 100 How Much Do You Want To Be Em???

100 Being His Personal Jock Strap

The End 04-12-03 04:11 PM

^^ personal guess is 237 on that scale

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:14 PM

umm i dot wanan b him like a 0, he smy role model cuz he succeded through adversity, and he came out on top, and cuz he is white and raps it gives us a connection, but i get pissed when sum1 says i wanan b like him, even htough i sound like him when i rap dont mean i wanna b him

self 04-12-03 04:14 PM

EMINEM SUCKS!!!!

...lets see if he cries.

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:15 PM

bruklor ur last post,, were u makin fun of me or sayin it was gud, cuz uv been mad sarcastic

Lokinator 04-12-03 04:15 PM

Be eminem? he is eminem...


Quote:
Originally posted by da lyrical ninja
hen it cums 2 rap i have the same way of rhyin and i sound like him its weird, i shulda knows it was stolen im mad man



n also a 'MAD MAN'

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:15 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by da lyrical ninja
bruklor ur last post,, were u makin fun of me or sayin it was gud, cuz uv been mad sarcastic


when u said like holy shit funny stuff

self 04-12-03 04:16 PM

IT WAS HORRIBLE

RythmicTendicies 04-12-03 04:19 PM

give the guy a break..

N-Demik 04-12-03 04:20 PM

Yo I See Em Atleast Once A Week.

I Could Ask Him Where He Gets His Aftershave From, You Know If You Wanna Get That Authentic Marshall Mathers Smell.

Lokinator 04-12-03 04:20 PM

haha watch out Bruklor, this B Rabbit right here might get his 313 boys on ya.... cheddar bob n that...

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:22 PM

man y u jelouse of my skillz all of u r except RythmicTendicies, and methan yea ur really ghetto, SOUTH LONDON, say hi to da king and queen for me

self 04-12-03 04:22 PM

He talked shit. No.

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:23 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Bruklor
He talked shit. No.


huh?

Lokinator 04-12-03 04:25 PM

Oh i forgot you live in a trailor with your momma, how did that song go? sing it man.......

RythmicTendicies 04-12-03 04:26 PM

who talked shit?

da lyrical ninja 04-12-03 04:27 PM

nah, shit i dont live wit my mom, i live wit urs every night


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