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white rapper
My rhymes r sophisticated enough for a scientist
But u can understand them I can promise this From the glory to the glory to the money to the money I was always were. Were it was sunny I didn’t have to grow up in a rough neighborhood And I didn’t drop out of school I kept it cool Especially on the mic Get shot at I don’t know what that’s like So the only thing I have in common with the average rapper is skill And the way I talk might have appeal Put I’m the average white boy out of the burbs I didn’t grow up freestlying on my friend’s curbs My parents had jobs they rolled in the dough Now I am doing it 4 the way I can flow Y is that bad I don't know don’t u think that that’s sad I had 2 have a bad child hood to rap Or better yet I would have 2 b black I did ball in the playgrounds I no this But they were in Trumbull wit white kids U no all we did was shoot And when he did sumting nasty we didn’t hoot We didn’t have r du rags in the air Because we didn’t care Next point wins that's all that matter And getting into a college and having an Alma matte I got all right grades and I didn’t flunk out And now when I rhyme I don’t pout I just keep it real And tell you how I feel I got every meal I got everything from breakfast to dinner But I have 2 admit I was a little sinner But I kept rhyming instead or killing people dead When I had a test I made sure I read NOT But I did formulate the plot To get out of school And go 2 Florida 2 swim in a pool I haven’t lived it yet but I will Not a straight A student but still I will pay da bill when i go to a bar and grill And have a burger with fries And I paid I didn’t cum up wit lies So 2 end it here I had a good life adn im white y do u care So that's my story and I’m out tell me what u think gimme a shout |
try to keep the bars same length as much as possible... not a bad attempt though
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man u were bitin some shit outta 8 mile there man
"scar and kill, bar and grill" "im outy, now u know all there is to know about me" that was just changed a very little bit plus the rhyme scheme was simple and so were the words come up with some of ur own shit |
im sry if i did, i didnt notice it man, when sumtin fits or ryhmes things cum 2 me i just write em down, if i truely did i didnt mean 2 man ima change it right now thne ll just edit it
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yeah..just sorta noticed that you are trying to be to much like em,
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hes my rolemodel when it cums 2 rap i have the same way of rhyin and i sound like him its weird, i shulda knows it was stolen im mad man
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i got another song its liek a depresed song here it is
When darkness falls upon me im not in control of my life i feel like grabbin a knife and goin slice it cant b dis way i cant feel this way i wish this was just another day its not cool feelin like this ur moody sad and very pissed u cant even put all ur poblems on one list its like happiness left and blew u a kiss but da kissed missed mide as well just punched u wit its fist there aint nuttin 2 luk 4ward 2 just more pain, what else is new u wanna give up and call it quits cuz ders always sumtin in ur way like a wall of bricks u wish ur life was like what u c in flicks perfect, happy and everything in between but really its mean, glutany, and greed and the pain and sorrow grows in u like u feed it u wanan beat it but u cant defeat it Chorus: u wanna beat it but theres no way no how and u don’t have a way out rite now and it wont let u get up cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get up and jump It’s a new day But u still feel da same way Feelin like death is certain Like sum1 is closin da curtain And darkness falls upon u It sneaks up and surprises u and yealls out BOO And u have no way out So u start 2 pout Ull do ne thing to get away So u get on ur knees and start 2 pray Hopin god is rite there hearing what u say Hoping he understands u and says ok Then u start 2 c da light And u no every thing will be alright Now u don’t even wanna go to da knife U start luvin and appreciatin life u wanna beat it but theres no way no how and u don’t have a way out rite now and it wont let u get up cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get and jump |
Ooooh Text Choruses Are So Guuuuuuuuully....
Ooooooooh |
guly?
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"the white rapper" my god...
You bit. You actually suck...omfg...this was sad.. sorry, I shouldn't rag on you, but give up... |
u have 2613 posts Bruklor
and u havent battled once, y the fuq r u at this site if u dont battle pussy, can u even fuqin rap? and ill abtlle u and fuq u up bitch |
Oooooooooooh J's Merking
Oooooooooooh..Haha Hasn't Eminem Got Enough Wannabes As It Is? |
^^^hahahahahahahaa
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lmfao, I don't battle you fucking Eminem cock sucking wanna be. I can rap, ...and it saddens me that you are at RB rapping, where I rap. I shouldn't have to be around wackness like you. |
Take A Good Look At Me, If It's Time To Face Your Fears
Tha Day You Beat Me, Someone On The Simpsons Will Age A Year who have u beaten man?? |
gimme on of ur raps Bruklor
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I can see how this gunna turn out... Da Lyrical Ninja is gunna say sumink like this...
''Yo everybody from the 313 put your mothafukin hands up n follow me, look, but while he stands tough notice that this man did not have his hands up'' ''Ohh shit... i didnt realize em said that, he's my rolemodel n when i write stuff comes to me, didnt know it'' I can see in ta the future |
Kid you couldn't afford one of my raps...Like a poor man walking into Taco Bell.
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Why Did You Quote That?...LoL Irrelevant..
I Don't Even Battle On This Site But Im Sure Ive Beaten More People Than You.. Do You Have An Em Hairstyle? |
hey methane
dont gimme blame for drivin u so FUQIN insane just cuz ur rhymes r lame u can c into da future man O SHIT CLEO IM U BIGGEST FAN fuck u bitch ur in rappin denial u think u can freestyle cuz u saw da movie 8 mile |
OK, here is where I'd put a very witty and smart ass comment.. but I think they'll be enough in here as is, so I'll be moving right along..
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Em hairstyle- umm kinda not a short, and i dont bleech my hair its naturally blond,
to poor for one of ur rhymes- taco bell, dats the reason ur soo fat and i bet i got twice da money u do |
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LMFAO!!! oh shit! I'm gonna have a fucking heart attack! Oh Shit, To fucking funny!And you actually said 8 Mile, lmao, thats the only reason you ever picked up the mic, lmfao, oh shit, these little hurrbs. |
Whats Money Got To Do With Anything?, Were All On A Ghetto Internet Forum Kicking Gangsta Text Punches..
Equal Opportunities For Everyone So On A Scale Of 1 - 100 How Much Do You Want To Be Em??? 100 Being His Personal Jock Strap |
^^ personal guess is 237 on that scale
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umm i dot wanan b him like a 0, he smy role model cuz he succeded through adversity, and he came out on top, and cuz he is white and raps it gives us a connection, but i get pissed when sum1 says i wanan b like him, even htough i sound like him when i rap dont mean i wanna b him
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EMINEM SUCKS!!!!
...lets see if he cries. |
bruklor ur last post,, were u makin fun of me or sayin it was gud, cuz uv been mad sarcastic
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Be eminem? he is eminem...
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n also a 'MAD MAN' |
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when u said like holy shit funny stuff |
IT WAS HORRIBLE
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give the guy a break..
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Yo I See Em Atleast Once A Week.
I Could Ask Him Where He Gets His Aftershave From, You Know If You Wanna Get That Authentic Marshall Mathers Smell. |
haha watch out Bruklor, this B Rabbit right here might get his 313 boys on ya.... cheddar bob n that...
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man y u jelouse of my skillz all of u r except RythmicTendicies, and methan yea ur really ghetto, SOUTH LONDON, say hi to da king and queen for me
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He talked shit. No.
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huh? |
Oh i forgot you live in a trailor with your momma, how did that song go? sing it man.......
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who talked shit?
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nah, shit i dont live wit my mom, i live wit urs every night
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