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AngelicSheShe 04-16-03 01:39 PM

SEXual.....Only for Mature Adults... 17 and up!
 
Its a midsummer night dream
where nothing is what it seems
you close your door and pray for light
and to your demise it stay's night
A closet full of dreams and hope
all hung outside on a tree of rope
full moons bring lust and desire
sensual love sick kisses bring out the fire
tentalizing shivers of the one you crave
driving you further towards your grave
crying tears of anguish missing that sexual feeling
blends all your love into a sexual healing
driving faster towards the goal.. loving every bit
squeezing out emotions never going to quite
orgasmic sweats break out of pores
nails driving down the doors
pleasurable screams seel there fate
The heavy breathing means it was great...


ummm yea.. trying something new... OoNnEe

BlUnT-MC 04-16-03 01:53 PM

wtf... damn girl, you need to get laid.. come up to toronto, I'll hook you up.. lol.. j/k, as far as a rhyme goes it was pretty good,

"driving faster towards the goal.. loving every bit
squeezing out emotions never going to quite
orgasmic sweats break out of pores
nails driving down the doors"
^ pretty descriptive.. lol

I liked it, should be longer tho

grimey won 04-16-03 03:09 PM

u son of a bitch. actually i ain't gonna hate on chu cuz u got a tight ass pussy and u need a cock even if its battery operated. Stop trying to pull that "Oops, oh my" shit. Only Tweet run dat okie. Get yur mind right u horny bitch. If I was yo daddy i would of whipped out tha mutha fuckin telephone cord and beat yur obscene ass. Fuck U, u can't rap so stop posting. I HATE U and yur fucking style. And change yur name u slut, cuz u ain't angelic if u thinkin of veined up cocks and "she she" eh? maybe u dun need cock but u need a wet pussy. And i hope when u eat dat shit its all infested wit disease. BITCH.

AngelicSheShe 04-16-03 03:51 PM

look you need to check yourself first of all obviously ya'll aren't confortable with your sexuality. I live with my man so don't worry I get plenty like it any of your buissness.... grimey... you need to shut tha fuck up... dont dip into tha kool aid unless you know the flavor... I dont GIVE A FLYING FUCK IF YOU LIKE MY STYLE CAUSE AT LEAST I"M REAL . Dont reply to my post if you dont like them.. hell dont even read them.. dont consider my name to even be up there you up tight superficial cock muncher.. I am who I am... you just mad cause you aint me... OoNnEe

Tha Linez Drawn 04-16-03 05:29 PM

Hey Angelic...Umm...Do you think it is godlike(angelic) to talk about sex and admit to tha whole world that you live with a man and fornicate in your words 'plenty'? Then you expect People to take you serious? Hey, I respect your drops alot...But this makes my respect for you drop a little...You aren't as angelic as you seem...If you want to be nasty...be nasty, if you want to be good...be good...But in between is a hard contridiction to explain. Love ya though...peace.

AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 12:58 AM

Look Nobody here is understanding.. we're all adults right? Well atleast some of are.. I live with my man.. I'm engaged to my man.. I have a ring on my finger that say's our love will be forever.. Sex is part of a healthy relationship. No matter how you put it. I'm not a kid anymore and I'm not ashamed to talk about it. That's all that matters. I'm not a slut. I don't fuck around so to speak. But there is nothing wrong with sex. Especially when your with the person you love and will be spending the rest of your life with. OoNnEe... I have nothing more to say on the subject except if you don't understand then you have more growing up to do.

Kapone 04-17-03 01:14 AM

lol ^^^^ @ horny ass niggaz,

im all for ur ryhmes girl, QUIT FUCKIN WITH HER talkin directely to yall, linez shut the fuck up with that god talk, no one gives a fuck, if they gave a fuck they wouldent do it in the first place its not ur place to judge and bring to attention the sins of their ryhmes, werds are werds man, quit fuckin with her, im for ur ryhme grrl its descriptive and phat, and if anyone disagrees fuck yall, she gunna keep doin what she doin reardless if she crosses a wire with YOUR religion, what if ppl dont belive in ur religion, back off with it all, good drop grrl, uppin this joint

KnightShade 04-17-03 06:59 AM

wasnt x rated enough :( lol just fuckin with ya, its a nice drop discriptive..

keep doing ya thing angel.

Narcicyst 04-17-03 07:05 AM

respect angelic...i havent read anyone post a drop like that since i joined this site...dont let these other people get to you namsayin...keep elevatin girl...wahid

p.s. i bet grimey won's idea of a threesome is wackin off with both hands...retarded fuck

Kapone 04-17-03 07:52 AM

lol, never heard that before

Atetrack define' 04-17-03 08:47 AM

hahaah narc...wasa nice drop angelic,im into my religion but i still fornicate plenty nahmean ahha.sall good.haters cant be choosers so forget the hate...keep posting,keep trying something new everynow and then,cant hurt nobody.

*~BaKardii~* 04-17-03 10:20 AM

LMMFAO@ ni99a'z....period!!!

Wqaz up my ninja? this post was coo to me seem like you created a bit of a riot with this one, that's when you see that everybody aint grown up yet, but "swear to GOD?, Satan, or the holy sword of Hova...(whoever the hell they worship) that they mature enough to handle lyrics like this or that they "fornicate" a lot more than they do.....the shyts amusing to me LOL
but as far as ya post this was real cool nice descriptive werds fa sure, the postw as hot mommie keep doin what cha do

:::styll LMMFAO at these ni99a'z::: I'mma bust a gut laughin in here!!!

AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 11:50 AM

Thank you.. finally somone understands lol ...

Kosta 04-17-03 11:56 AM

well. i dont really know. about anything.
but i know that i enjoyed reading this.
you had some good points. not really my
style though. but i felt it. i am only 15.
sorry i couldnt resist the terrible temptation.
to go check this out because of the title.
i felt you could have "expanded" on certain
points but it was still good. and linez drawn
does have a point. but no one really cares
about it. well anyways. good job... 8.6-10

pcrook 04-17-03 12:12 PM

im 15 wit a child(soon ta be) but im feelin them otha catz hatin ma

AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 02:23 PM

Ty for the encouraging comments lol... too bad some people just dont understand. OoNnEe

BlUnT-MC 04-17-03 02:23 PM

lol.. you stirred up quite the contraversy... I ain't know why people are hating on you for this.. I liked it as I already said.. they just mad they ain't gettin' any.. lmfao.. yo, straight goods, I like how ya mind works..

The End 04-17-03 03:28 PM

Yeah, umm.. this is my response because she is telling me to respond to it. :p I thought it was good. Grimey's post is shit, but Angelic handled it very well. Like everyone else said though, I thought it was going to be much dirtier than it actually was.. *sigh*

Kosta 04-17-03 03:30 PM

end.....AHHAHA.....hit me up on AIM..
Sand Of Night... OR CHECK Ya Pm Box!

Dadi Kewl 04-17-03 03:46 PM

yo fuck grimey he jus' all pissed cos everyones gettin some but him...
Really nice piece liked it alot My Girl Thinks it was good an says you an her should collab when she joins tha site...

AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 04:02 PM

lol sounds cool... get at me... and say your group taking along time to decide something.. OoNnEe

Master Blaster 04-17-03 04:54 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by KnightShade
wasnt x rated enough :( lol just fuckin with ya, its a nice drop discriptive..

keep doing ya thing angel.


Fuck Laughing...No it wasn't

SEXual.....Only for Mature Adults... 17 and up!

^^^^^^^When I read this I thought about some Sexual Shit
not some Def Poetry Jam shit

You talked about Sex using Big Ass Words...That does make you
above the rest for taking in another direction

But at the same time I fealt let down...I was hoping to read a
verse talking about Rape, Anal Sex, Oral Sex, Regular Sex,
Doggstyle, You know something kinky

O well...Do your thing Women

~1~

The End 04-17-03 07:06 PM

You consider rape kinky? You are more fucked up in the head than I imagined.

Maven 04-17-03 07:37 PM

this was really nice, kinda short, but what does that matter? I like dthe vocab and the flow was sick. Maybe your next rhyme with a title like that'll include some harcore action

or maybe some of that kinky rape...:rolleyes:

MisterEThoughts 04-17-03 07:49 PM

damn for real this was hot
haha got me all horny hahah but
yea
this was no doubt nicely written descriptive just
what i like everythin flowed nicely keep doin ur thing
girl
1

AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 10:29 PM

rape? anal sex? good lawd.. lmao.. you are in need of some help.. some uh.. straight jacket help lol.. but still thanks for the compliments and shit... *thinks to herslef* That's the first nice thing Master Blaster has said to me.. hmmm...

DarkHisTory 04-17-03 11:53 PM

this was nice girl im feeling it, u got skill fareal i enjoyed this alot,
hey maybe u can help me bout gettin this crew thing going
holla back

Master Blaster 04-17-03 11:53 PM

1 Attachment(s)
First...Yeah Rape is extreme but what about being Ceran Wrapped & Getting stabbed with scapels...(to much tv)

Second

Quote:
Originally posted by AngelicSheShe
That's the first nice thing Master Blaster has said to me.. hmmm...


No problem...I have a way with the ladies

~1~

p.s. ~ Don't ban me for my stupidness...I'm just having
fun please take this as a joke

kinky69 04-18-03 12:01 AM

yo.. I got respect... that was some good shit... need some more of a rhyming scheme... yo... don't let these tight pussy's dis... they be haters.

Kapone 04-18-03 03:35 AM

i consider rape kinky, i also consider bondage, all types of masticism, as well as canablism, eatin people is kinky, remember kids, if u want the good stuff, u have to eat the woman, cut right down to the bone because the first 2-3 inches is fat and generaly disgusting matter, so dig down deep, also it doesnt hurt to boil, or at least soak in alcohal b4 eating, [what if they have herpes?] so with that said, peace out

Narcicyst 04-18-03 10:39 AM

^^hahahahaha

AngelicSheShe 04-18-03 12:14 PM

Omgoodness... what are you doing with my pictures!!!!!! Damn there to look at not play with!

Freestylemyrhyme 04-18-03 12:44 PM

angel i fuckin hate you, i'll battle u anytime...come on today or acutyally tonight sometime and i'll battle u, I'll pM \you when im on

Atetrack define' 04-18-03 01:23 PM

ahahhahha kapone,but you know the disgusting matter can make good pan oil for the rest,so dont waste it nahmean

AngelicSheShe 04-18-03 02:17 PM

whatever you say man... how people can decide to hate someone they dont know is sad. Actually here's a better word PATHETIC! but anyways you wanna battle I'll set it up.. be there... OoNnEe

Messiah 04-18-03 02:26 PM

my word, people be like on some crazy tip i swear to god...

keep doin ya thing SheShe, tha real folks understand ya, dunt worry...

ya piece was actually dope as well, it took a more "mature" mind to grasp it, and understand tha fullfillment, but hey, its written for you, not for these folks...

keep droppin gems

peace n god bless.

AngelicSheShe 04-18-03 07:01 PM

Like you really mean shit to me lol.... I love you all to... you hate what you dont understand ... and your ealous of what you love... give it a break lol OoNnEe

B--Red 04-18-03 08:29 PM

Straight goods I liked that rhyme because it takes something as personal and secretive as sex and brings it out into the public domain. good flow and rhyme schemes
keep it up girl

server 04-18-03 08:33 PM

question: if we mean shit to you.. why bother responding to our post?

hm...
someone's contradicting theirself, again.

how's that make you feel? i ask again

AngelicSheShe 04-18-03 08:42 PM

you have nothing better to do than to worry about somone you hate? hmm... contridiction there to... yea I'm the dumbass...


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