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Narcicyst 04-17-03 05:36 AM

My Memoirs
 
aight i just had to take some shit offa my chest....


the higher learnin/
i wanna retire and feel the fire burnin/
to kill off this burden, i try to reside workin/
teachers succumbin and all/
man pawns, marked by these jaws and paws/
but still screamin HAMDULILLAH/
laws faced in my raced/
that dont belong to them in the first place/
eat myself away, the worst taste/
detatched from my birth place/
snatched rhymers is spoken/
held on so tight i think i might've broke them/
envokin mics, i think i might have awoken/
some sort of short comin, stuck in sentences like court summons/
this mortifying coke is throat numbin/
envisionin beduan ways/
in airport lobbies with sand spread on my face/
a breathful thru the hateful statements/
fate will never be a statement/
i'm waitin for human awakenin/
maschoism, nationalism, fought this rational livin into nationally driven/
pass your wrathful of prisms, and half my tactiful given talents/
its a risen violence, hating this silence/
prison of color paletes/
skin abrasion taped on to immigration papers/
they say they give shelter, but it always takes them back to the point/
live thru a bottle and pass you a joint/
model citizen, shitloads of ignorance, difference, and inference/
livin next to kids that syndricate incidents, we argue/
scarred cuz its hard to spar thru Jihad... the host of this fight/
struggled and rustled thru most of my nights/
tryin to sleep thru my deciet, with troubles in sight/
escape the idea of this matrix that we find here/
feel with my hearts hands, and listen with my minds ear/
but conned me to stand in line/
mental plans are refined but said the lands are foriegn plans/
my stranded confidment is the central mission/
i spit these bars so you can walk thru my mental prison/
to send my ambition, in a box ready to end this system...as we know it/
if you got love, then do nothin but show it/
theoritically let it roll, poetically heroic....

Narcicyst 04-17-03 06:48 AM

uppin

Atetrack define' 04-17-03 08:57 AM

theoritically let it roll, poetically heroic......feeeeelttttttttt....cat thdi shit was nice nice nice,wallaa i felt it...props hamdullilah

Narcicyst 04-17-03 09:05 AM

thanks ate...that shit was straight from the heart...hit me back on a pm dunny namsayin...one

Narcicyst 04-17-03 10:22 AM

uppin^^^^^

AngelicSheShe 04-17-03 03:18 PM

I figured out why people sleep on you. Its not a good reason but it is a reason. They dont like reading the long peices lol. I love the long peices though its nice... you get a good story telling. This wasn't one of your best but it was still alright OoNnEe

Ancedote 04-17-03 11:55 PM

^^xactly...nice shyt aonce again narc..u doin ya thang out here..well on here...lol..n e wayz..i was feelin all of it..it was kinda long..but it was interestin..so i didnt mynd readin it...keep droppin that nice shyt..

my stranded confidment is the central mission/
i spit these bars so you can walk thru my mental prison/
to send my ambition, in a box ready to end this system...as we know it/
if you got love, then do nothin but show it/
theoritically let it roll, poetically heroic....
^^damn..datz all i can say...

feelingz xprezzed well

Narcicyst 04-18-03 06:15 AM

thanksfor the feedbacks...you if i make the verse too short they say "ok coulda been longer" lol...its all good though...good looking out...wahid

Atetrack define' 04-18-03 06:30 AM

sory for the free post cat,just chekc your pm box

bismillah

Narcicyst 04-18-03 06:42 AM

np kat...i will hit you back dunny..wahid

Narcicyst 04-18-03 09:12 AM

uppin

Narcicyst 04-18-03 10:06 AM

why do kats always hate on complex shit...uppin

Narcicyst 04-18-03 03:00 PM

lol...uppin uppin

Narcicyst 04-18-03 04:13 PM

uppin

server 04-18-03 06:13 PM

first of all: who cares what other people say in the first place if you feel a post needs to be short make it short

second of all: that's true about the long ass posts, no reason to carry it out say what you gotta say and bounce

third of all: ..not hating on anyone in particular, but everyone doesn't need to say "One" or "Stay up." to sound gangsta, get your own style, spice something up at least

server 04-18-03 06:14 PM

timed out...

i liked it, above all else

Av1r3x 04-18-03 07:02 PM

nice drop homie,tha half-verses were done real good.When we bouta collabd??I wuz gone awhile cuz of sum ish,but lemme kno aight.Stay^
-Avi

~RuThLEss~ 04-18-03 07:40 PM

Nice Drop yo i liked tha contend...........


peep mine

~my Thoughts As A Man~

Narcicyst 04-19-03 04:38 AM

thanks for the feedbacks....and i promise i will peep your drops namsayin...good looking out...wahid


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