Bribeone<:Vs:>13th Disciple
 

3-0,,,,(ko)
First to five wins,,,,,,,,
only poll votes count..Explained...
NO D/r , hatin shit,,,,,,

'bout 15-20 bars?.......

Checkin in,,,,,,,

oh and both verses due in an hour,,,,,,,u spit first,one

tight.....you need an hour? i'll be done in about 10 minutes....

aight ill be up right after,,,

..(13th Disciple accepts no Bribes)....

a lyrical duel now its time to verbally fence
my flows are 'adebisi' keepin your anal cavity tense
ladies and gents/rhymes explodin like a 'bouncy betty' bomb
spillin' blood redder than two cents

your rhymes are shitty so i wipe it wit my lyrical 'charmin'
beat on your 'skillz' like i'm joe jackson you're marlon

now watch as i cock my spiratical illmatic/have you rereadin'
deletin' exposin' my tactics/sendin' hollow point rhymes
explodin real drastic/register you for class for actin dramatic
faggot/tighten my clutch realizin' you bout had it

hopin' for death but disciple waitin at the end of the tunnel
once again rippin ya up like a disposable funnel

now i grip my verbal glock bash your dome wit my hits
orally deliverin' blows rappin askin me to quit/cut your
sorry azz banana rhymes causin this battle to split/don't spit/
like bubba gump i had to tuck in your lip

You See my "bars" and u feelin "locked- up"./
"serving" u with a sentence" ,dont try an "bail "out... i know u nut -uff.//(not tuff)
from compulsive "jackin" u thinkin u a right hand "burglar"../
my impulsive shinin got your head no longer "square" its lookin"circular".//
u couldnt write "Blazin" text if u wuz a "Fireman" on a computer desk../
about to get your hopes-up... and dropped quicker than "Pepsi" did " Ludacris".//
i enjoy to watch youre pop-top-fizzle like a tea-pot when it gets -hot-u-whistle./
my words will bust bunkers and diminish anything like a missile..//
youll crumble like a pyramid of cards ..from me just breathing on you./
"fumble" your words when i "hit" you.. after "sacking" your girl and rhyme"blitz" u.//
wanna be "heard -n-seen" well go "yell-n-sing" witt a top-hat while doin back-flips./
gettin to the next level ?.......only by givin u piggy back lifts.//
"This-I-Pull"on many faggots who acting like U Disciple./
shove the Mic down your throat.... Shhhh!! not a word the Big-heads-in your mouths -full..//
if someone looks like a funnel its you, openin your big mouth lettin the greasy-shit-through./
13 just.bow-ya-head-down... be a good disciple-n-spread the word of what a Grizzly-hit-do.//

good battle uppin for votes....

good battle....

both had goood punchlines but ima ahve 2 give it 2 bribeone1
he had harder punches and a ryme technique good battle either way

vote-bribeone1

Shit that was a tight battle but i think 13'th disciple took it

yop bribeone1 it wont lemme post a vote poll it sayz it si invaid or sum shit damn.... but yo dogg word u won

uppin for votes,,,,,

yo my votes for 13th disipline, he had better flow, i'm all about the flow

ZzZzz need votes..

yeh both of yall was tight, but 13th took it cause he had tighter flow,

can u come vote on me vs. xtc, make sure to do it on the poll to please

aight stright vote....i thin 13th got this one his first bar was real nice....."a lyrical duel now its time to verbally fence
my flows are 'adebisi' keepin your anal cavity tense"

bribeone urs was good too i liked this line : "wanna be "heard -n-seen" well go "yell-n-sing" witt a top-hat while doin back-flips./
gettin to the next level ?.......only by givin u piggy back lifts.//"

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uppin for just opinions.....


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