Probably Too Complex For You
 

Me, myself And I will acheive shelter high, above your helpless skies/
I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/
till you become the filthy beast within you/
pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/
two decades deep, rememberances of my entrance into this endless sentence/
my clock ticks at the pace i walk with, slowly stagnated, half sacred, lock smith/
master of my own akward processed concious/
These heathens pass me by,with their glassy eyes/
masses drafting lies with massive ties to their graphic reliance science defied I/
left divided, a hybrid eyelid blink my liveable pious tries/
with fires beside this tired wire bone skeletal expired sellable buyer of hell/
full of medical swell my heretical spell disembowellement of edible realms/
i eat my flesh and return as the same/
entity tempted and tainted by empty centuries/
painted the stench of me destroys this polluted void that entered me/
since i was loin juice..if i fill myself with thoughts/
will it reach the top, explode and speak to God/
letting go of my peace, the fraud i teach/
father me out this martyred beast i call/
me, myself and I acheiving shelter high, above your helpless skies/
I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/
till you become the filthy beast within you/
pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/
I'm still giving more, and living slow/
will time passes me by like my grasp of life drastically/
i guess it has to be mine, and yours/
skin pores leaking my sins for people ive been before....

Nope Not For Me.. :D

Dope Shit Bro, I Really Got Into That..

**Reads Again**

thanks N...your shit is complex and i like readin complex verbals...problem is not too many kats in here do though...its all gravy though...good looking out...wahid

check your pms dunny

uppin

Whoa I Liked This Piece Alot.... I Like The Way The First Part Is Repeated Again Towards The End.... That Shit Was Ill, Seriously..... Do Ya Do Audios?!?



Keep It Up Man

dope!!!!whoo - complex.. Nice 2 see sum1s writing shit that means sumtin u no wat im saying - deep . great pik of words. That had me intrested ....

This was ILL...Realy feelin this right here...

thanks for the replys...and to answer your question methane yes i do audios as well...good looking out...wahid

uppin

shit was ill narc,loved the ending starting htis,shit was deep as the abyss,totally my style nahmean,definite put this on a mic...nice nice nice....
bismillah

Shukran dunny...good looking out...wahid

real good use of vocab man, really showed off ur skill and knowledge
one thing i gotta say is i couldnt really get into it, i understood it all none of the words were over my head or nething like that but i just wasnt feelin what u were tryin to put out,
neway it was still a good piece that showed a lot of talent
return the favor and hit up my post

That had less vocab than I'm used to from you.. but it was still pretty good. OoNnEe

good shit was a lil too complex for me, not the ryhmes the meening, goos shit 0ne


everyone puts sum weird languange for close so

hola como estas

thanks for the replys...that post was about greed...guess i shoulda gotten more complex lol...good looking out...wahid

it was too complex for my but i still liked it

ah...i didnt feel it too much... i mean
it had nice meaning...but it was complex.
which is ill if you are into that. but i like
straight forward things a lot more..but
thats just how i feel...it was nice...but i
have seen better from you..

nice job on dis Narc.When i read a post 2 myself and dis flowed real good,I got into it like crazy.Ill stuff,Stay ^
-Avi

thank you....thats just my complex side coming out...you should hear my audios they are more complex than the shit i be writing in here...anyways good looking out...wahid

Yeah thats dope man, understandable whilst being complex and still maintained it to be spittable..the first five or six lines were the best, came straight flow and rhymin and still bein complex, good shit dunny..

Peace out Yo!!!!

This Was A Dope Peice, I Liked it...
Link Me If You Turn It Into A Audio, Thanks

thanks...wait till i start posting some more complex shit...good lookin gout...wahid

your aesop style reminds me of my own
preech on bro
we are a breed of few
peace

i love this shit narc,cats that spit ill shit and get about 23 replies with about 2000 bveiws nahmean,its buggin me,should come out with a list of all the cats that peep the shit and never repliy coz the shit is too long and they cant be bothered coz htey is lazy cats,if we had ta tlist we could obliterate them nahmean...like my last post had 155 veiws or osemthign and 33 posts,shits annoying as fuck...ah well,sall good,them cats are the ones that are gonna be hating on cats coz they didnt get anywhere coz they didnt put the effort in,i mean shit,if you veiw the shit even if you didnt feel it you shuld say somehitng shoudnt ya??damn

Holy WAH! Gotta chick... they like that shit.... it was tight...

^^lmao...thanks for the feedbacks...sorry i aint posted nothin new cuz im hella busy with shit...so look out when my new shit drops...wahid