Concise - Ya feelin' me? (Free verse, takes shots at Crook-Ed and Statik)
 

www.soundclick.com/concisemc
Its the only track there..

Ummm.. I dont know why I did this, I was bored and very
high and started writing. Why take shots at these emcees?
I really dunno, just what I was thinkin I guess.....

Cise

Only reason I did this is cuz I realized I hadnt spit in like
2 months, and wanted to prepair for the rnr tourney.

yo..

beat is tight, its got a dope underground vibe. this is nice, its got a madd underground vibe to it...lyrics are pretty tigt...flow and delievery was good..nice track

This was pretty good... i liked the beat... i guess u dissed them but not really sorry..... too short...shoulda spit longer and shit but overall it was a 6.9/10 keep elevatin'..........

return tha favor and peep my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=40279

thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol, it wasnt supposed to be a diss track...

I guess if u try to diss someone and you don't then you say its not a diss track and all that, but 5 posts above you say u takin' shots at people so which is it....you gotta decide eventually.....man.....truth
PEACE

Lmao! What are you talking about? You never heard of
a free verse? Dawg its just a verse I sat down and started
writing, and in that verse, i took mediocre shots at some
heads. That is not a diss track... You are a moron.. End
of story...

Cise

Dawg, you talk like I made a serious lyrical attempt to go
at these cats. I guess you have never heard me before
because if I wanted to come at someone, I would do it.

okay.. calm, calm down no need to flip out but one word of advice next time don't ever not spit your hardest....always come correct and do tha bewst u can no matter what man...just remember that u never wanna look bad or lose cuase u were'nt serious.....
PEACE

Ok I respect that advice, but you really dont understand..
Im not gonna come my hardest and diss kids when I dont
want it to be a diss track. Do you listen to Hiphop man?

whoa

i think whut hes tryna say is how do we crritique it: "takin shots" or see it as purely a freeverse "takin shots"?...lol, see how confusing u made things !!!!!!!!

and since u admitted it was a weak verse, i concluded that u didnt come your strongest...
oNE...

It was aight, wasn't that great. The flow was real old school tho. Do u man, keep that.

whoa, fuck you man, do i listen to hiphop? what kind of fuckin' question is that you must be a little bitch to ask a question like that fuck you man...........it's on........
PEACE

lol "its on"... gangsta...

Just shut the fuck up and get out of my thread.. Fact is
i would murder you in anything lyrical.. So you can diss
me or something or do whatever you want.. just dont
hold it against me when you get worked...

Cise

How do you people not understand this? This is just a freeverse..
If eminem came on here and posted "Square Dance (Takes shots
at Canibus)" You guys wouldnt come in here saying "Well I guess
you dissed him, but not really" You are stupid, it wasnt a diss
track to canibus, he just randomly threw a shot at him "Canibitch
dont wanna dance with me"

Its the same situation.. faggots

Cise

so... you comparin' yourself to eminem....man you need to take a realistic look at yourself......you shoulda just said this is a freeverse you wrote and this is it and did i hear a challenge we can go man, no you won't kill me lyrically.....we can battle if you want just tell me....okay......
PEACE

very good point... moving on for a freeverse this was decent...

Flow- alright, coulda, shoulda been better

Lyrics- It was a freeverse... need i say more?...

Delivery- Alright...

...overall- Decent track...

Man, you really are an idiot. Yes i compared myself to eminem..
I wasnt comparing skill though jackass.. Your so retarded..

Cise

learn to spit...







there, thats what we mean...
-fIn-

Beats Ill...Flows Nice...Rhyme Schemes Kinda Basic..But You Were High...Decent Shit For A Quick Written..Turn Ya Vocals Up Nigg..