Fuck Concise- Drop Links
 

this is just a little song i wrote and freestyled last night its just like a 3 min. song just explanning whats really good..........
PEACE..................
Tell me what you think iight...........



MUSIC
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/thaproduca.htm

pretty good for a free,decent all and all,beat sounds westcoast but ill..holl back wwith a reply

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=40627

im not really with the underground vibe,but watevah right


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This joint was aight, not bad, not bad. The flow was aight, iont think it rode the beat that good tho. The lyrics was pretty good, it's good takin shots at niggaz, keep it up.

this was one of the wackest diss tracks ever!!! you wouldnt be in the newcomas would ya??
dude youre wack....
ill rip your ass if Cise dont before me!!

BIATCH!!

lmao

john paxon line was ill

whateva dawg....don't be mad cause you got dissed just get over it and get on with your life......it's just the net man........its not the street Corner or the school yard so just be a man about this shit......you probably didn't even get the john paxson line did u......its ashame a good metaphor was lost on this retard i guess i'm done with him.................
PEACE

ok man... What are you talking about? I respond to your thread
with ONE SENTENCE! And you tell me im mad about being dissed?
Dawg it was ONE sentence! and it was a COMPLIMENT! You are
a fucking moron! And your telling me "its just the net man" while
you spend some time out of your life to diss someone "on the
net".. Your pathetic...

Seriously though, why did you type that fat paragraph about me
being mad about getting dissed (by someone who i told to diss
me)... When i showed no signs of anger.. Lmao

<<Was completely serious...

Noticed the sutter creek and clinton road lines... Where you live?

No its not just the one sentence its the thread you posted of my diss under you name for some odd reason.....but thanks for the compliment.......i just want some excitement around this site...the audios have gotten too fuckin' borin' for me.......just spicing things up okay............
PEACE

I live in Ohio but i use to live in Cali and i know some people from Sutter Creek and i remember Jackson and Clinton road cause i lived in Cali when Clinton was in office it always stuck out in my mind..........
PEACE

and who do you know in sutter creek? gimme some names..
im interested..

These are boys from way back we still chill I know that David moved up to Detroit like three months ago but Marcus and Klavin still live in Sutter Creek do you know them????????

Marcus Foster
Klavin White
David Harding

PEACE

below me says:
Klavin White
David Harding
below me says:
recognize those names?
"in case you dont remember me i'll take your mind fo a lap around the blocc to jogg ya m3mory" says:
david harding
"in case you dont remember me i'll take your mind fo a lap around the blocc to jogg ya m3mory" says:
not the other tho

Interesting...

Im out... peace.. ummm.. pussy

yea.....i don't get what u just said but whateva goodnight sleep tight..........
PEACE...ummmmmmmm.......pussy

^^^haha, Beef, yo shit was pretty funny, in a lyrical sense, the hook was wack but the verses were aiight fo a diss... Hit ma shit up...

Peace Out Yo!!!!

Thanks its not really beef as much as boredem but if he spits something back then i guess it is but not really just wastin' time yo i hit ya shit back up man........
Still uppin...will return the favor...........
PEACE

listenin.....
 

like the beat...lyrics was straight, flow was ok...got better as u went on some punches was kinda weak....like ya flow ...hook played alot, flipped some tight lines tho fa sho....i think maybe u jus was strugglin to put the lines n the beat but if it was more memoried uda had it down....one of the better audios i've heard lately tho,


keep spittin ....beat was tight i like that typea shit

Thanks for the feedback.much appreciated.......uppin........drop links return favor.........
PEACE

Re: listenin.....
 

Not saying this was horrible, cuz the lyrics were sti8..
but wtf have you been listening too?

iiiight...man you critique tell me what you think as if it wasn't a diss towards you but just a normal track you listenin' to honest ans seriously put down what you think and that can help me elevate ya know............
PEACE

Beat = pretty ill.. You started spitting at a random spot on the
beat, you need to drop at the begining of the sample.
Flow was weak in my opinion, it took away from you lyrics ALOT.
Lyrics were 1/3 ILL... 1/3 MEDIOCRE... 1/3 RANDOMLY WACK.
Hook was extremely gay, and some of the points you made
were retarded. Quality obviously sucked, but I think you said
something about broken mic or something.

"Im so concise on a dyke" <<what?

The way you used my location, and the surroundings around me
was ill!!! I never would have expected 'sutter creek' and 'clinton
road' in a diss against me. Props on that...

Im tired so Im about done.. But I will respond

Cise

Lyrics = your definate strong point.. work on structure though..

Cise

Thanks............i'll look forward to your response..........
PEACE

My critique is what concise posted. really work on that.