" How Many": A quick song I wrote
"How Many"
{Verse 1} Blame it on my mama I'm a thug to be you wanna get your dada thats fine with me It's gonna be some Mortal Kombat shit I'm gonna see you bleed it might freak you out but it's normal to me I've seen drive-bys I've been caught up in those bitches richochet of the blade niggas die from the itches Thugs do shit like that to get all the riches they'll hit with a bat and leave you for the ditches Rollin down the street nigga try to creep to get pass me you really gotta creep So you wanna be a dada too bad there is no nana Crizizone bana I'm done with thee(you) {Hook} How Many times have I told your ass How Many times have I showed your ass How Many times have I kicked your ass I told once before you'll never reach my class How Many times have I told your ass How Many times have I showed your ass How Many times have I kicked your ass I told you once before you'll never reach my class {Verse 2} Haters, Masturbators, and Master Debators don't wanna see your ass cuz you a consinplater Walkin around with a hole in your cheek too bad the mutha fucka didn't make you sleep If you wanna get payed I suggest you go to work and never forget to whistle while you twork He said somethin funny that made me go berserk when I rocked him in the face a bitch called him a jerk The words sound unique when I rap to the beat instead of usin their hands niggas clap on their feet Do you know what that means, cuz I don't know what it means I guess it means you'll clap even if you're wearin blue jeans I know what I just said didn't make any sense but you know what makes sense is bliss in ignorance {Hook} How Many times have I told your ass How Many times have I showed your ass How Many times have I kicked your ass I told you once before you'll never reach my class How Many times have I told your ass How Many times have I showed your ass How Mant times have I kicked your ass I told you once before you'll never reach my class {Verse 3} So you wanna start beef go ahead my nigga against me fo' sho' you's a gonna nigga Why are you doin Michael Jackson's tip-toe a lot quicker? do the moonwalk nigga and a fake ass twister Get the white glove to match his race and spin your legs like windmills and keep up the pace You see I ain't the one, to diss where you're from but when you act like a fucked up nigga you is stunned now get the gun carrier and a bullet proof vest if you don't wanna come back with a hole in your chest you see I keep it real, I'll never break a deal get rich or die tryin man I know how it feels I'm a professional nigga and you learnin the basics you're in the unphenominal catagorie, or the niggas who's racist only fucked up niggas try to get in the Outlawz the mutha fuckin niggas who fuck in the waste stalls {Hook} How Many times have I told your ass How Mant times have I showed your ass How Many times have I kicked your ass I told you once before you'll never reach my class How Many times have I told your ass How Many times have I showed your ass How Many times have I kicked your ass I told you once before you'll never reach my class |
"I know what I just said didn't make any sense
but you know what makes sense is bliss in ignorance" ^that was my favorite line man... this actually wasn't that bad... Alot of the rhymes are pretty simple though... so is the topic... it's been done... but you flowed decently with it... I guess thas your style... it sounds a bit like Big L's style... but that's my opinion... like I said, shit wasn't that bad... not all that... but not bad... keep spittin man... -1- |
thanks dawg
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This was aight..u got potential duke..
keep at it |
thanx yall
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UPPIN FOR VIEWS AND OPINOINS!!!!!!!!!!
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this drop was aight dawg , , u stayed on topic , , but u could have done better
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i agree it was a good piece but you could've done better keep on writin' n you'll make another piece twice as better as this
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thanx dawg
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yea wat was said befo' u gotz potential if u put ya heart ta it , i kno u culd rip it up, aight im out, mak sur ta return tha fava and check out my drop, "dear dad" much love,
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Yo pretty good rhymin ... return the favour drop a message at ma rhyme
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42217 |
Thanx yall
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come on THIS IS GETTIN SLEPT ON READ UPPIN FOR OPINOINS!!!
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Come on THIS IS GETTIN SLEPT ON!!!!!!
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COME ON YALL THIS IS GETTIN SLEPT ON!!!!!!!!!
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COME ON PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!
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NO SLEEPING ON HIS PLEZ!!!!!!!!!
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Come on people read this plez
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another nice peice... as I said before keep elevating and you will be on a supreme level.. also.. write me a short one to read one day lol.. OoNnEe
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lol ok thanx for readin it DONT SLEEP ON THIS PEOPLE!!!!!
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that was pretty not good and well it was sorta "I'm a gangsta/thug u cant fuck with me sorta rhymes
and the chorus was wack hit my shit up its called "Remaining Unrecognized Part 1" http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8513#post398513 |
aight thanx
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