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..::Blaze Session's::..
yeh you know the dill, you want us to peep your verse BUT NOT VOTE and give our commenting on it post a link here.
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check this out and please give me some feedback.....
i thought it was a good battle ,... one http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=40959 |
From my R.B.B.L. battle ...... Let me know
http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=39807 Some reason I get numbers instead of the name rapbattles.... |
^^^...BreakDown...TS style...
"I got more Bars than penitentiary's your rhymes elementary// You beating me is like sayin mike Jackson had plastic surgery successfully"... You Opened With A played Bar...But Then Finished It Up Nicely With The MJ Joint... "Theres a method to my madness but I haven't figured it yet// Your minds in the clouds like a 7 foot russian space cadet"... Not Bad...Coulda ReWorded It A Lil...Still Not Bad Wordplay... "I'll terminate you like your Internet provider// with more deadly intent than those kids from Colorado"... So So...Might Fly Over Some Heads... "Hit You with a table and chair call me the chairman of the boards// I'll leave you strung out on rap like I was spittin guitar chords"... Not Bad Again...Point Made...Prolly The Best Coupla Bars In Ya Verse... "Don't care whut your name means and its only fair// Cuz in my win column there'll just be a number there// Please don't get defensive and bad mouth me// cuz this aint JerrY Springer, Steve can't help you B..." Pretty Much Filler Material...Kinda Simple...Jerry Is Played... "I'm comparing you to a game on my Atari system// so I can say you played out before anybody listened..." ReWorded and A Lil More Thought...You Coulda Killed Em With Those Bars... "I'm like a cheat sheet I come correct// My words are hot even when I'm doin a mic check// Bring you back to '92 kid Protect yo neck//" Really didn't Finish Up To Strong...If AnyThing...You Want To Make A Statement With Ya Opening and Closing Bars...Keep Ya Readers Attention... Jus TS'z 2 Cents... |
check this out,,,,,,please and i need opinions...
http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41469 |
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if u post a battle here u shud peep someone elses
otherwise there's just gonna be loads of links with no comments on them..... so i'll peep Chrits as it's after mine....... edit;shit it won't let me......... |
here's the break down for X
I'll Plow-Thru any "So Called Rapper" on this site, I Stay "Pumped" like Reebok's/ Even without a Beat-Dropped, I'll "Wear U Out" like Fat People who Speed-Walk/ ^good line with a good punch straight away usin half his brain, claim he's gonna grave "WHO?"/ please bitch...not even your memory card could save you/ ^liked this some originality its over...see X is lyrically sick/ damn you couldnt "Come Hard" IF YOU MASTURBATED WITH A BRICK/ ^the come hard lines are played out to the max dude needs to learn lessons, i'm raw in real essences/ battle ME, you get shook harder then Christmas presents/ ^coulda had a better punch to it son you really are killing me/ even if i had a body in BRAILE you still wouldnt be feelin me/ ^good but cuda said something about being blind to help the punch MUDEROUS, when words tossed in I drop bitches often/ you a NO NAME, watch me deal with this "NOBODY LIKE TUPACS COFFIN"/ ^wasnt really feeling this but thats probably cos i didnt get it...... Now be Honest-With-This, stop actin like this Rap shits All In The Wrist/ You-Gon-Diss? man You will be on the "Phone" with "Nicoderm" the way you be Callin-It-Quits/ ^good line nice punch So if ya wanna test what I'm speakin, this is just One Invitation/ Cause your rap's is Mathematic an I'ma Subtract it From The Equation/ ^maths lines are kinda played too....but was alright If you were compared to a bird id be yellin "Black hawk down"/ Cause your gettin removed faster than the Iraqi Generals home town ^not the strongest of finishes but decent......u won this already anyway........ |
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fgee thx alot on the feed bak i really appreciate it..1
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hey yo check out this blaze session
the best BS ive ever seen[pun intended] http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=41088 let me know what ya think |
wtf?^
good joke though |
lol, heres a real battle, its my make-dane-my-bitch battle
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=42647 |
this is my first blaze session n its vs dirty shanks in the RBBL
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42035 please could i have a breakdown of my lines please so i know how ive done |
^^^...TS Doesn't Have The Time To Do A BreakDown Now...But...
Not Bad...But Not That Solid...Punches Need To Be Harder...You Had Some Really Good Concepts And Set Up Lines...But Didn't Really Deliever That Killa Blow...A Step Up NeverTheLess...Personals Were There...Towards The End You Got Kinda Simple With A Few Bars/Lines... Stay Elevating Though... |
thanks i understand bout the breakdown but thanks for the advice
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*Ladies and gentlemen......announcing the latest blaze by UnEmceeAble*
Un... vs OnE.....its was a 5-0 KO so hit this..its hot! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45813 |
chrit versus madman
Watch King Chrit dismantle this one hit wonder, bring him to his knees/ ok opener^ He's a Champ now but still a new kid to me, joined VD in the hopes of infecting him self with a Victory Disease/ ^very nice follow up and personal Too bad he didnt realize with all those dick ryders he just contracted an STD/ ^more good shit Watched Malibus Most Wanted, bit an image and brough that shit to rb/ ^ok Took awhile to accept this and in writing his verse mad man's in no hurry/ Wouldnt accept a battle with Chrit last week citing the fact "Chrit would simply merk me"/ ^nice Watch for the lyrical sword making incisions with precision/ Had 16 shit votes an rbbl and only won by a split decision/ more personals always good^ Call me pyschic cause I'll predict all of VD votes on this shit/ What they dont know yet is all they'll be able to type is fuckin chrit ripped mad's spit/ ^ha ha good Why not just take that Bibby quote and just take those words to heart/ Just no show this battle son, cause you know its far over prior to the start/ ^weakest line so far....kinda filler Kid tries to join merk squad bringing a resume full of newbies and that Knightshade loss you delt/ ^again personal and hitting madman Faling to realize that vets hate you, hell... posting in braille is the only time your punches are felt/ ^seen that line a few times...... played Time to impersonate Roy Jones' and dismantle the champ in all the classes/ You heard the kid he's still in school, quoting my lectures from lyricist classes/ ^couple of good lines On a real note kid, just leave right now, go ahead start packing/ Cause your skill is like the melanin in your skin..... totally lacking/ ^funny shit...... Before you go, here's an autograph from me you can have it/ Inscription as follows: Keep this in your pocket so you'll finally possess some talent/ ^nice closer....liked that |
yo fgee, why did the poll of our battle closed...
poll votes are only 2-0.... now they closed and my record wasn't updated.. can you modify the poll or some so that people can continue voting...?? let me know.. peace |
i thought u just get a win as long as u are leading in the polls
fuck knows........i got a few wins that aint been added to my shit so i just did it under my sig |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
this was my 1st battle since i returned to rb, can i get some insight as to what you all think about it?? |
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