Whiterap19 vs. DeJureThaRaw
 

Rules:
You Spit First.
Whoeva is ahead on the polls when they close wins.
Explain your votes pleazz, but if you can't it's aight.
20-30 lines max.
No hate votes.

Good Luck G! I'll post afta you do!

any time limit?

Yea you have 1 hour to spit. and it's 12:50 right now my time.

You can't prewrite the shit though don't forget!

Dawg if I post a battle how u gonna get offline? Don't prewrite your shit if thats what your doin!

Im on stealth mode so you cant tell when im online...and oyea i dont prewrite....and i dont battle prewriters..so set a time limit

Post right now. There aint no time limit. I have 2 hours to post after you do. But, I gotta get offline at 3:00 o'clock and it's 1:08 now. So post as soon as you can.

Juss movin it up. Dawg it's 2 o'clock. I got one hour hurry it up.

OK...lets go

You couldnt spit fire or be tha bomb even with HUSSAINS CHEEKS//cause Like Aneresics nutting there GUE PLAIN SKEET , YOU CAME WEAK//Only way you'll get Bi(by), is going both ways like TWO LANE STREETS//using CAPLOCK, just to make *BIG WORDS*..*BIG HERB*..YOU AINT *DEEP*//dont care if you MOBBED wit "PRODEGIES" or causing "HAVOK" wit BEATS//Fuck your rap *PAPERS*, your Heman matress, the only way you "CLASSIC" wit SHEETS//I'm son-ing you, your no longer a BASTARD TO ME//your like a comedic chef, cause of the way PEEPS..LAUGH AT YOUR BEEF/lmao/
I'm showering punches on this ass-face, CROSSING HIS CHINS//making Whiterap treat *TOWELS* like *SALADS*...He TOSSIN IT IN//Victorious, OFTEN YOU END, but ALL CAUSE YOUR FRIENDS, with voters, and your opponents always have more LOSSES THAN WINS//
Oh Sh*t I LOST IT AGAIN...turned into the MIC CLAPPER//RIGHT AFTER I make "eminems" out of this WHITE RAPPER//but I know him being white shouldnt or even MIGHT MATTER//battling me,reminds him of eating Comps at WHITE CASTLE. he BITES FASTER//
I heard your a *animal* wit mics,like HANNIBAL WIT BEEF//well your battling a *VET*, I put ANIMALS TO SLEEP//your like a calendar, ANNUAL 'N' WEEK(weak)//you wouldnt be *grand* if a nigga just HANDED YOU A *G*//
you should *change* your *papers*..like being in Custums with LOTS OF LOOT//because your flow is about as tight as a Bottom Bitch PROSTITUTE//unless a Arsonist ends up CALLIN YOU, I dont see a way that you'r words will ever become "HOT IN BOOTHS"//

Its already over, but I know-fashow, you'll B'NICE//because it dont take 3 hours to FIGHT...Unless its a PREWRITE

**prewriting bastard**

ItS a WrAp....1

*edited for misspelled*

Omg, Hola up and stope the beat,he’s wastin his time, there goes anotha sheet.//
Flyin through the air like you some fly dude, put your body through the meat grinda and grind it up into shrudes.//
Fuck this man, DeJureThaRaw honkin his horn, he sucked someones tit from the day he was born.//
Ass is torn up, this kid creates a new meanin fo Whats Up?//
Crazy son of a bitch, runnin around like Canibus actin like some kind of snitch.//
Y these motha fuckas seem to think Im playin, DeJureThaRaw took me to dinna and no I aint payin him.//
He aint got layed in a while now, becuz when he sees R.Kelly he dick jumps up, like he was Elton John tryin to use a Penis Pump.//
You know who you remind me of? Ja Rule… so fuck his fake ass and fuck you too.//
You and him should collaborate on a track, watch it drop on the charts, make a remix and elaborate that.//
I hear that you think I got lots of loot, when I step to the mic you start screamin Truce! Truce!//
Chaos in this battle is fuckin nuts, juss like the kinda of things I stick in DeJureThaRaw’s sluts.//
DeJureThaRaw’s ass is unfire, fuck rap battles, your betta off singin in the quire.//
Aint no one showin you the money so sit the fuck down Jerry Mcguire.//
This kid aint got notin on me, he calls himself an Emcee, every person on this site has to disagree.//
And dawg you make white kids look bad, o wait you aint white, but you sure as hell aint black.//
You aint makin shit on this playa, Ima ill rhyme sprayer, and the white fuckin devil so say your prayers.//
The big words you use juss confuse people, see you like a Fred Durst suckin on Leathal.//
Dawg you aint got no game, and when Im done wit you O.J. simpsons gonna be ashamed.
Listen up punk you aint in no position to diss, your in the posistion to sit in the sewer and drink yo own piss.//
You juss anotha Mc. Comin onto the hit list, put down the weed and let somebody else hit this.//
And guess what dawg you aint a veteran, it’s sad that you getting beat by Eminem.//
Aight get out from unda the covers, I'll be fuckin bitches while DeJureThaRaw recovers!
I hope this battle was good enough for you, whats that I can’t hear you? O yea and Fuck You Too!

Uppin fo votes!

explained vote plz...

uppin

whiterap19---harder punches better flow

WTF is that^^^
explained votes plz
like

Meta:
Multi:
Punches:
Word PLay:
Sence:
technique:

No D Ryding votes

hands down i gotta give this to de, he just had beta punches,wordplay,multies. he just caught u slip'n on this whte. but stay up both ya'll
my vote=de,respect it!

vote = white rap 19

harder punches blah blah blah blah

nice battle whiterap19

ya see how all his votes is newbies..lol

up for votes...explained and poll...CMON

Meta:white
Multi: Dj
Punches:white
Word PLay: Dj
Sence: Dj
technique: Dj
Vote= DJ
nice ass battle that shit was nice though
YOU CAME WEAK//Only way you'll get Bi(by), is going both ways like TWO LANE STREETS//using CAPLOCK, just to make *BIG WORDS*..*BIG HERB*..YOU AINT *DEEP*//-----nice shit!!!

peep my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=41243

Uppin fo votes!
And I dont think that DJ made any sense at all but ok!
Uppin

3-2...me up

neither of yall herbs got shit on me

Thanx fo the comments. Lookin fo votes u guys!
pzz

Lookin fo poll votes! I will return the favor!

a yo u both were off da hook, but wtr riped da shit up, my vote= whiterap19

3 up...lets go more votes

whiterap takes this shit, he's right, bigger words don't mean shit it's all about the flow 2 me and it he had it

WTF ^^^^ what you hes right "big words dont mean shit..did you read the verses...I'm the one who said that.....R U shore you voted for the right verse...cause talking about mine...1

I beleive White be tellin these mufukas to vote
voters plz use this

Meta:
Multis:
Flow:
TEchnique:
Punches:
word play:

OKAY 1

up for votes

dejure and white both badasses but ill give it to dejure better punces You couldnt spit fire or be tha bomb even with HUSSAINS CHEEKS//cause Like Aneresics nutting there GUE PLAIN SKEET , YOU CAME WEAK//... that shit was hard u came out swingin ur fuckin bad 2 white

4 up.....Need more explained votes....1

VOTES PLZ....

both your verses were nice ...but see everyone sees it different
to me its about word play,punches,metaphors,,,,,,,not who can rhyme with a nice flow,,,,,,,peep the name of this site RAPBATTLES,,,,,,,in other words u aint gonna go to "batte" just to look pretty, u in for the kill,,,,,,,,,but i have to give this one to Dejure,,,he was on point in every line it was the kinda stuff you read over twice....

thats my two cents,,,,,,,,

Vote=DeJureThaRaw

5-4 its over.....and for the record i completly agree with you bribeone..thanx for clearing that up.......1

*edit*

oyea Good battle white.....somebody close this thread
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DejureTheRaw won

he had better punches and wordplay, though some of them made no sense to me. whiterap's punches were not very effective and I couldn't flow through his verse like Dejure's.

6-4 thanx but its over...1

LOL nice battle I got my first loss. This was a good battle becuz you won fair and square most of the time cats vote fo them selves thanx fo battlein dawg. I will check you some otha time. Thanx fo the votes u guys!
pzz

iight..good battle to you to...oyea..remember to put my name in your sig..under losses....1

i peeped both verses......both were well spit and punched......readin line for line for punches....wordplay....and what not....i have to go wit Dejure because he ripped it.....whiterap u made a hell of a comeback but I felt like Dejure all in all came out on top.....good battle though