Chrit vs Dejuretheraw (vote and we'll peep urs)
 

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checking in...good luck bra

ill vote on this when its done

check mine and poll vote on it

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41681

thanks

Lets Go...

Let me start out by saying "Nice Try", cause this battle was done BEFORE IT BEGAN//you still woulndt blow,if you was one STEP AHEAD OF SA-DDAM//who SAID THAT YOU CANT, give hand outs, I'll SERVER YOUR HANDS//even if you sinned your whole life,than died, you wouldnt be one HELL OF A MAN//you just Half and Half, but I'm Hot, so I'll LEVEL YOUR TAN//you wouldnt have enough, to leave cuts, with a MEDICAL GRANT//
you wouldnt get votes with a TECHNICAL SLANT...I RIPP THIS PRICK//said you was competition,then spit weak, your such a HIP-A-*CHRIT*//
but I'll BUST GLADLY, and CRUSH HAPPY//the Production cant help... cuase you wouldnt even Shine if your PRODUCER was PUFF DADDY//

C'MON

this dude shouldnt be SPEAKING AT ALL,HES DEFEATING HIS CAUSE//becuase his sig, aint from battlen nigs, he got 14STREAKS IN HIS DRAWS/eww/
Chrit, hot?? man you COULDNT HEAT ICE//you lil boy scout,but even while helping ol'ladies cross the street, you still WOULDNT BE NICE//

No NeEd foR ThE LaSt LiNe..Its OvA....1

up for chrit...1

oyea when chrit dropps..plz use this to vote

metas
multis
punches
flow
technique
wordplay

thanx..1

Forget constructive I offer nothing but destructive criticism
I'll use Dejure like a tool with illegible verses that a remenisent of schism
How'd dejure get that record that sig reeks of nepotism
Introduce raw to war I can flow mimmicing dyslexia
You ryhme to eat? Dejure most likely suffers from annorexia
Over 300 hundred wins and this kids still raps on the net
Dejure's a has been or never was... kid gets none of Chrit's respect
You's washed up, like a beached whale, chances of survival slim
Dejure's intellect is too dense for this battle of sink or swim
No losses since you comeback, Chrit will make that column begin
You bound to hell bout to diss the lyrical god, man thats a sin
Chrit has some words of wisdom, its a dog eat dog world
This battle's a pitbull vs a lapdog... you's about to get mauled
What goes around comes around that applies to my losses
First KO in a streak of four, karma's a bitch thats my hypothesis

remind me never to battle at work

writer's block is even worse here

up for votes

aiight......i liked the battle.....chrit had some nice flows....i tried to stay wit it but wasn't really feelin it.....thats wierd cause I usually follow some of his battles and he fades alot of cats.....Dejure basically ripped the battle....especially wit the 14 streaks in his draws......that was funny as hell.....so all in all....i'm goin wit Dejure.....good battle though

0-1 uppin

DeJureThaRaw got my vote.

"even if you sinned your whole life,than died, you wouldnt be one HELL OF A MAN"
Damn!!!

"but I'll BUST GLADLY, and CRUSH HAPPY//the Production cant help... cuase you wouldnt even Shine if your PRODUCER was PUFF DADDY//"
Damn!!!!! Again

Chrit your's was aight but i've read better from you.

2-0..up

uppin

vote=dejure
this was a close one. I like chrits verse, but it lacked substance, and dejure had some siick punches in there.

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41614
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One Love

damn.. good battle man

3-o Ko

close this

a yo chrit ur rap was tyte it had better hits in it than dejuretheraw so vote=chrit