havent done this in a while
 

Havent done one of these in forever... Tell me what you think...:D

Steady stressin' with no sense on direction/
Roaming through life with a perplexed complexion/
Holding feelings in, pray for a confession/
Can’t take many more of life’s lessons/
What doesn’t kill you makes you stronger/
To hell with that, I don’t want to be here any longer/
Hitting the walls, throbbing with animosity/
Fuck the cat, and its curiosity/
The settlers came and created a city/
The place where everyone acts cold and shows no pity/
Ruthless and'll do whatever it takes/
I feel out of place in this bed of snakes/
Kicking over my ladder along with my hopes/
The angels came down trying to show me the ropes/
Tied it around my neck, turns out they were rivals/
Flew away prior to slapping me with the bible/
Influenced by my surroundings/
Can’t escape stress, feel him at the door pounding/
Pretend to not be home, but get robbed by greed/
Can’t pay attention to all, jump upon my trusty steed/
Slowly light him up and inhale his ashes/
Living life in the stopped lane, everyone passes/
Passes on to being CEO's and general managers/
Can’t make contact, just labeled as a damager/
Family gone, no where to be found/
Here comes my steed again, in the form of a pound/
He’s improved since last time, got 10 cents but cant afford a dime/
Scrawling on pieces of paper to relieve the feelings/
Stuck on the hook and the fisherman’s reeling/
Keeling, over with laughter/
Angry sheriff saying it’s his daughter I’m after/
Could go to school but I failed the entrance exams/
Was once an acquaintance with death, but we had a falling out/
Tried to get into his house, arrived at the courtyard and got kicked out/
I'm asking why? Just points his thin fingers behind me/
Hiding in the shadows? Light can you find me?/
Everything is alive can you feel the motion/
Can’t feel anything, drink down the potion/
Its been going on too long begin the long journey back to sanity/
Cant travel the roads, white coats are after me/
Divert to the forest, I can see sanity now/
Wait I’m in a desert, the white coats closing in now/
Injected into my veins a temporary fixation/
Strapped to the bed, I begin my contemplation/
Am I really here? Or suspended in a space station/
Life gone by, at the drop of a hat/
Cant anyone here me? If you can, tell me where sanity’s at/

contructive criticism please... drop links to your open mics and i'll be sure to reply :D

was preety good,

"Keeling, over with laughter/
Angry sheriff saying it’s his daughter I’m after/" - LMAO

ohh... party inspired by the following
1. depression
2. vanilla sky (the movie)
3. pootie tang (the movie)
4. aesop rocks bantering on dryspell

my man, that shit was dope and with a little funny mix. Your still a smoking gun homie..keep on trying out this incredible gift you have.you words is like lightning striking..

^^lmao... i thought about sticking a "wha ta ta" in there... but thats a little too much pootie tang in there...

haha^^ No doubt, one a ya best Inspire, back to reppin K.I Dogg, thats some trippy dope shit..Keep it uppin..

Peace Out Yo!!!!

feeling this...
the topic was creative and ILL...
overall, a very skillful piece..

uppin cause theres people in the forum again!

thats was the shit dawg

liked ur style

tippie tay my paddie meees.
whatever that means ahahha shits funny as fuck,nice spit inspire liekd the sheriffs daughters line was fucnny as fuck you a witty cat...dryspell is an awesome song foreal.ima bee looking for your next hit single " "...hahah ai love that fucking movie,i want a magic belt and shit.

check my new release "biggie shorty" :D... lmao

up up and away!

wha ta tay mey sadatay tippi taiss.......

^^^you more of a freeposter than me lmao
:whacky:<<<dopest smiley on rb.. spread the whacky

Yo i think that was real cool , didnt go to over the top with the lyrics ( id like to here it on audio fosure ).. check out ma crews rap.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=41581

yes it was cool.
i like it a lot.
too lazy to quote.
you like aesop?!?!

^^^if you dont like aesop you shouldnt listen to hip hop... of course i like aesop... and genesis, i prefer to use words i know instead of looking for rhyming words in a thesaurus... but thanks! im back at the top again :whacky:

yo that was ill and u know what i gotas ta say "sadatay" and make sure u get ta "sign yo pitty on the runny kine"

^^^Pootie Tang is the shit
...uppin...

i dont feel like going back to quote but i thought it was real good and i connected with the song which is always good. i would ove to hear it on audio maybe with like a sad beat behind it. overall really nice.
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good drop,had sumdecent vocab in there.hah crazy topic tho,Stay ^
-Avi

thight.

^^thight? lmao... well umm... yeah... thanks for the... erm... reply there... ya'll know its RB Legends material *in my mind....*ahahah :whacky:

uppin

:( looking for vet feedback

YOU ARE MY HERO..............SIKE!!! THE VERSE WAS TIGHT

^^shut up... and take them pics outta ya siggy...

A good creative piece.

^^^thanks... drop links people and i will reply... uppin... one last time!

ok... last time... fo' reel... lol... couldnt be bothered writing a new one so i'll just up an old one...

tight shit,it was definatly ill,keep postin that ill shit.

stop upping urself inspire.........this thread is mad old......even though its good........no i'm not goin to do anythin about it.............but stop it..............................its annyoing.............

yo good rap..........fuck u thrilll.......i'll kill u in another batle

^^dont make me come and beat your bangladeshi ass...

^killarappa... its tRiLL... and he would fuck you up in a battle...

yo, I liked it.. had some a'ight wordplay, imagery was really good.. flow was on for the most part.. honestly I'm too damn tired from being woken up at 5am by my girl to have sex, so I'm just going to say it was good.. 1

could you vote on my battle against bash:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50433 .... it's a hot battle

yo that was some crazy shit ive seen man hit me up at Take ya bitch

^^^liar...

sorry tRILL... i had to...