MBenz reppin the elements\/ Wil'con
 

iite look rules are:
no hate votes
no crew votes even tho u got no crew
between 15 and 20 lines
u knoe the rest ur spitten first.........ill be waitin

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additional rules make sure if you give a text vote also add that vote to the poll.

rule fix there is no limit of how many lines u spit fuckit do wut u want

When I bring it I bring the heat/
You spit like an amateur when Im done with you im moving up to elite./
Ill take you out close range never needin a scope/
Let the bullets fly leave you holier then the pope/
Put a bullet in your chest, sit in watch it steam/
Fill your wound with salt just to listen to you scream/
I got this battle won like Jordan with the bulls/
Have you whistle when you spit when I fill you with all them holes/
This kat think he going to beat me he must be delirious/
Wit a name like Mbenz you rhymes must not be serious/
When the beat drops I flow nasty like the hudson river/ (the Hudson river is polluted)
After this battle youll be shriveled up like an alcholics liver/
You aint lyrically fit to step up to the plate/
Im preparin my lines for the win, checkmate/
Mbenz rising my wins like Los Angeles crime rate/

your turn drop

iite feel this shit,
look dog u think u culd rhyme better than me well alrite/ i culd tell by the way u that u spit, ur white/ an i dont care if its nite, i still got heat to make it seem like midday, in LA/ Will'con stands for "Will" get raped by a "Con"vict in jail/ look dog i dont care if he sticks a broomstick up yo ass i aint payin for ya bail/ and im takin care of your girl, so dont get mad if u dont get no mail/ well acctually, you'll be gettin plenty of male/ one thing u need to remember is to not drop the soap/ i cant beleive u went to jail cuz u are wut you snort and you had a little dope/ if u get my drift an u knoe wut im sayin/ they sharpin a piece of drift wood and the next person who touches you, slay him/

* u add extra lines here an there u can tell by the first poll vote look at how it was before fuckin cheater

uppin votes

yo if you vote write who u r an explain why u put ya vote

vote people vote please well hit up on yours

my vote goes to MBenz he had half decent punches but Will'Con didnt n if he did they were wack lines none of them flowed

MBenz Lines I liked

so dont get mad if u dont get no mail/ well acctually, you'll be gettin plenty of male/ one thing u need to remember is to not drop the soap/ i cant beleive u went to jail cuz u are wut you snort and you had a little dope/ if u get my drift an u knoe wut im sayin/ they sharpin a piece of drift wood and the next person who touches you, slay him/

Will'Coms lines i liked

None

Wack Lines

When I bring it I bring the heat/
You spit like an amateur when Im done with you im moving up to elite./
Ill take you out close range never needin a scope/
Let the bullets fly leave you holier then the pope/
Put a bullet in your chest, sit in watch it steam/
Fill your wound with salt just to listen to you scream/
When the beat drops I flow like the nile river/
After this battle youll be shriveled up like an alcholics liver/
You aint lyrically fit to step up to the plate/

the last 2 lines of yours were the best but i still didnt like em

Poll Vote if it aint obvious MBenz

ok ok up for votes 0,1

Comeon people we need more votes
If you hit up on ours well vote on yours

yea listen to the man vote ppl

Drop more votes

VOTE please we hit up on yours just leave it

MBENZ HAD PUNCHLINES BUT THEY DIDNT FLOW.I FOUND MYSELF REPEATING THEM SO THEY CAN SOUND RIGHT.I LIKED WILL'CON'S VERSE. I DONT KNOW WHAT KILLA KOBRA TALKIN ABOUT.I LEAVE YOU HOLIER THAN THE POPE.THAT WAS GANGSTA.
MY VOTE=WILL'CON

M BENZ GOT THIS WITH BETTER STRUCTURE
BEST LINE="Will" get raped by a "Con"vict in jail/
VOTE=M BENZ

yo i voted on da polls n ill vote here ya can see ma name n dis was easy one yo mbenz took it ffully wit punches flow everything yo vote=Mbenz

keep votin people we still need votes

Im preparin my lines for the win, checkmate/
Mbenz rising my wins like Los Angeles crime rate/
good close by willcon but he just couldnt pull it out

Mbenz...
not a good verse either
redeeming qulaity was the few wordplays in there, one with his name was good
but you didnt have anything deserving of the win either
this was a tie

peep me vs kawtic
and me/fgee vs scottyC and bazzy when it drops

my vote is for mbenz he didn't have to edit his, and his flow was clownin'