just for starters
 

yeah yeah check it out/
im the female version of Norman Bates/ Slice your head off ,with two rakes , put it in a box and deliver it to your mates/Finish my first music video in like two takes/when im in the forum my raps give you the shakes/I hate it when the rest you muthfuckers make mistakes/It just a waste of time when you could be eating 5 chocolate cakes/I drop bombs so hard that even tupac awakes/The whole murder INC is a pile of fucking fakes/Ja rule when hes at home he wears his wifes dress and fucking Bakes/Ive wrote so much rymmes that my hand fucking aches/ive more friction under my feet than the best car brakes.....


Just playin around but wait tilll you see some real shit


peace
FEMINEM

yo holla out at CITY LIFE forum

"I drop bombs so hard that even tupac awakes"

decent drop!

Um...well your in need of a name change.

hhahaha i kno right ,, her name is whack , , ,get a new name Hunny

I dont think theres a problem with my name ....have you not looked at you own ...just cos i can rap like eminem

hahahahahhhahahahhaha , , , ,she said that she rap like eminem , , hahahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahah ahah

yo sit back bash/with a name like yours i can tell you wont make much cash/go put cream on your nappy rash/the only cooked meal you get is bangers an nash/spill and kill you in a flash/ dump your body in my pool , listen how you go splash/ you not gonna make it to your next birthday, Bash

thats so fuckin wack im not even goin in to detail.

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**Takes Breath**

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Itsa a Female Version of da Lyrical Ninja

Feminem?...Just gay.

see feminem i'm not da only one who thinks that you're whack

^lmao hay its was cool drop a line http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41581

damm..... with this first drop you definitely gottah be playing around... shit was really short... you only rhymed with one sounding syllable.... man... the whole thing was simple...
You say yous coming up with some better shit... well... next time you post something I'll peep it... you know... to see if you ain't just talking... cause right now I'm pretty much doubting what you saying... so come on girl, proove me wrong... lol...

Peace

Gurl, basically u aint wack, but your subject matters awful, stop tryna be like someone sound like someone etc

...Still Laughing At This Title....But It's So True,..."Just FOR Starters"....

To All The 'Starters' Out There....Do NOT Follow In These Lyrical Footsteps Or You're Doomed To Get Sonned (dissed, shitted on) For A LOOOONG Time!

Come Holla At Me, A Veteran Of Lyrical Art...I'll Take Care Of Ya....

ok..... where should i start..... alright, i checked out ya drop, and it was decent, wat u need ta do is put sum metaphores and smilies and wordplay in dere, and put ya lyrics in bar, but let me tell ya dis, dont even say u can rap lik eminem, i dont giv a fuck if u were messin around, even if u wrote sum shit dat was 100 times betta den dis shit, u aint neva, eva, eva, eva goin rap lik em, im sorry it aint goin happin, eminem is one of da best rappers eva in da game, and i dont even lik him all dat well, but u sayin u
rap lik him, shit dats a insult gurl, and if i soun mean oh well, it looks lik u jus were listein ta em w/ all ur lil friends w/ all ur posters of him in ya room, den got on da net and tryed ta rap and soun lik em,and heres anotha thin, eminem even in a verse as short as ur drop right now, nev only rhymes one word, i mean c'mon gurl, ask any one of da vets on dis site and they'll tell ya jus wat im bout ta tell ya now so listen up, u hav to be eitha raised rough, or had a really fucked up life ta rap, u hav to, and if u culd spill ur heart and tell bout ur life on paper and hav otha peolpe feel it, ur on da right track, cause rap is not bout sayin how bad u r or how many people u hurt, its bout REAL LIFE shit dat has happened befo' not a lil pretend story, dat u made up ta soun hard, tha way ur rap was writtin it looks ta me ,and alot a otha peole lik u aint been through shit, a yo i could be wrong, u might of been raised harda den me and half da peeps writtin to ya, i dont kno, but wat were sayin is stop bein eminem, stop bein pac, and stop dissin on ja rule jus cause em and 50 dont lik him, and most of all be ur self NOT feminem, change da name, r u'll get laughed at every time u drop, start bein u fo' who u r not who u idolize on mtv aight, look we aint dissin on u, we tellin u dis shit so u'll get betta, and we sayin get rid a dis feminem shit, or get da fuck off dis website....... i'm expectin ta hear betta 4m u, i kno u can write betta den dis , now prove it ta us......peace eazy

return da fava and check out my drop " Dear Dad" maybe u culd learn sumthin , much love

It was aiight sista

I peeped dis...

I dont know what say...Rest easy on da gurl....
Everyone doesnt start off with stars around there head, i thought it was ok....
True what soilder said. We have our idols mine is gangstarr...But i dont try rap like him
thats for sure, i never could i dont want to..Cause you gotta have ya own style,
and flow...Rap to me is where i'm coming from the shit i see in life...
The fucken shit i've been put through..I never reckon anyways hard ways
should be a competition at all...Cause what we go through is ours in ourselves
ANyway keep it up, write some shit down if ya have to..
But be yaself not anyone else..