Whigga - Real Quick Rhyme - G3n3sis
 

Real Quick Rhyme By Genesis .. T.l.a

Whigga

I use to think that Hip Hop was for all Races //
I put one cd into my stereo and you shoulda seen there faces //
I new that if i played one CD out loud so it was bangin //
People would gather round my house like they where goin to a hangin //
I tryed to explain that its me , i just like Rhymin //
They just kept laughin until they started cryin //
They say that only gangsta rap is really coo //
But ima show yah what a whigga can really do //

( chorus x2 )

So what im a whigga but look where i am now //
I bet yall are gob smacked and wonderin how //
All of you where sayin OH! hes just a white foo //
But this just showz yah what a whigga can really do //

( verse 2 )

And being from England didnt help either //
I wish everybody would back off and let me have a breather //
And they wont give you one until you prove them wrong //
And thats why i started to write this song //
And any you other mutherfuckers want judge me //
Come do it and ill make you pay the fee //

( chorus again x 3)
Whigga

Yo man this is dope i no this is like yo 2nd rhyme, yo 1st was pretty ace especially for a beginner and yo contiueing 2 build on similes and metas well done keep rhyming

I'm feelin this 2. it doesnt matta if u black or white cause im white and i won all my battles so far. and all of the kids were black

lol sum1 bann him

how u claiming english hip hops racist when theres peeps like skits, taskforce braintax ect and just about every DJ

they probably laugh at u cos u suck not cos ur white

thats where you wrong .. they think that white people cant rap so dont give me that shit

HEY FUCK U U FAT BASTARD, HE AINT TALKING ABOUT DA HIP HOP SCENE HE TALKING ABOUT PEEPS OUTSIDE IT, AND PEEPS NOT RELATED 2 IT. THIS IS HIS 2ND RHYME DUDE GIVE THE GUY HIS PROPS U CUNT!!!

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Peeps judgeing him coz he white and listens 2 Hip Hop, u know wot i meant u feckin ars

yeh and im saying if he was black hed still get clowned, its cos hes wack not cos hes white

and u shouldnt give sum1 props cos its there 2nd time otherwise how can they elevate

put it this way would u admit to listening to him if he was sighned

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hey dude i gave him constructive critiscm 2 elevate, but i seen yo shit your jus as bad cmon. jus cut the hate check my pm

Keep uppin bruvaz n sistaz

aight ya'll go eazy on da kid damn.... hes a beggina so he still needs sum tim 2 get his shit workin, keep dat in mind. any ways i thought tha drop was aight, u gotz skillz, i'm white too so, i kno where u cumin 4m, but instead a rappin bout dat ur white and u can rap, rap bout wats goin on in ur heart and u'll rip it, use sum metaphores and wordplay and u'll be aight kid, and dont worry bout otha peeps dissin on u, jus drop tha "provin a whiteboy can rap" cause i think em already proved n e one can rap, from all races, i wanna hear more from u, u got skillz, much love playa

Thankz for the advice .. and the response :d peace and respect

i dont want this slept on even if it iz shit

it aint shit dude sorry i wernt here 4 ya bud but its a good rhyme fuck all the haters & if they got a problem tell them to shove it & tell there momma that shes shit in bed but makes 1 hell of a breakfast apart from that its good

Needs work, but with a little tuning up, and a little better flow, this could be good, I don't like the chorus, but I can't tell why. (???) Oh well good shit.

thanks for da responses ... still uppin

umm yo vocab was shit, and whats this fuck about ppl sayin white ppl cant rap there's tons of white rappers with skill, u shuld get banned fo thinkin that u can make songs that say that "yea i'm white but people doubt me" and shit liek that

Im not saying that all people think that am i .. no!

DoNt Fukin sleep on this

returning the favor...

this was OK... you still new so its alright... work on ya vocab, throw some multis in there and you'll be a vet in no time!

ok thanks:d

tRiLL leave tha kid alone thats his first eva rhyme he feels like this in his area so what he is rapping about is what he feels. so doint say its shit ive seen some of ur shit & it a\int that good m8.

Dont was tyte I was feelin it props to ya man

Thanks man .. still uppin

St|ll uppin

I agree with fat man.. I ain't gonna give no props on this.. shit was weak.. not 'cause your white, I am too.. you need some serious elevation to ever think about not being laughed at.. sorry but it's true.. look at the quality of the rhymes from people who actually get mad props from vets, then compare to yours.. you suck.. sorry but that's why they call me BLuNT.. htat's why there's something called elevation..

1: your bars are too short (so are your verses)
2: no-word play at all, no sick multies
3: some lines don't rhyme, maybe they do with your accent but not with mine
4: using simple rhyme words like "Bangin', Hangin, or Faces, Races" is elementary.. it's alright to use them but u use simple structure like that thru-out..
5: keep it simple, you're trying to be complex but you havn't reached that levle yet..

^ that should help a-bit

LmaO..Whigga? hahahah

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STFU up u saladin id destroy u