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Narcicyst 04-29-03 12:44 PM

Clash of the Titans (9th Majesty Collab)
 
Atetrack Define:
what function has a cat like me got in this modern day sound junction?
none by the looks of your un positioned malopropism,time for luncheon...
system downloaded a unconditionaly intensive program derived//
from the unkept and unknown manifestation of lackluster lives//
who strive to provide praise from the stagnant evolution of the human race//
the face and shape of things to come,reverbarates like drum,and those from//
the abyss will then advance some,grow weapons,cultured in labaoratories//
its supposed to be savage for me from the faculties of tradgedy vacuumed into anarchy...aasabchi`
everylight i saw was somethign of a remeberance,and everythign abstract of that was something of a presence//
aftermathed multieplied by a tyrant hybrid of smashed hydrants,torrent upforth with polaroid vibrance//
its silence...when its quiet you hear your heart beating you feel the uplifting of heavens wings//
heaven sings a chorus,of course its morbid,droppin forces of evil onto the people and explorers//
deplore us somethign forceful and call up to the frontlines of the remorseful...semi portal...
gimme something horticultural to grow from,and come from that wich is supposed to be not won...

(talkin:-and then some...yo...elevate something like a monk meditates,with synnergy at the apex of your abilities...
and come back and then your aiight with me,stop trying so hard...its not worth it...put some clothes on girls
you dont need to reveal that much...i mean damn...why...whatever...vainess leads to suicide...yo,yo....)

ive greatly increased the space at with i place my dissapointment,sacrificed my happiness//
the overlappin factors mixed wrong and i couldnt handle the challenges of the kindgom,calculate the averages//
and bear down on barebacks like savages with a lust for offspring,scavenging,ravaging the scramblim//
landscapes to innitiate the fate of the entire caveman race,your out of place,erase your entity//
to watch the feelings mix of fealties to the deity(who might be),lieing,scribing,backin up an dieing//
in an alleyway somewhere with a seer watchin over shaman style scryin.........antisocial,focusing on the focal point//
of the master peice i plead you please rest in peace with these vocals,ill scatter the locals,and open battle portals//
unleash a broadside of devistating destructive total into the city of angels death and ultra coastal...
and she chanted them more some in a rythm,pacifist,immaculate,algorithms....they need it....

i dont write songs cat,i drop epics...dont forget it.

khanjar stab you cat...9th majesty
yall cast just jealous cos i got narcel in my arsenal


Narcicyst:

eternal struggle,juggle the rubble,subtle rebutals/
with puzzles in tunnels, thrustin into shuttles like verse of hubble/
the longer the distance, Narcy increases with harsh verosity/
marvellin varcity,matserin archery,debauchery/
aim for you arteries,disarmingely,carvin a monoty/
stompin your monarchies,turnin your strips bloody mahogony/
the ghosts are hauntin me, but the vengence after the ritcheous slain/
you tryin to fight the pain, while 9th Majesty annihilate and hibernate/
a cyanide gernade stronger than cosmonavs with molotovs/
larger than autobans, force like hearts are bronze and octogans/
inside museums seen by the weakest heathens of deacons/
releasin a secret deep and coherent like freeing demons/
this speech is a theorum, point of no return/
courtin the overture, avoidin the tortured verbs/
on joint scripts, cursin you its what you deserve/
graduated with honors from this rap academy/
battle me, thatll be a tragedy, this verse has gotten me tauntin you/
so now you respectin 9th Majesty?/
two hardest warlords, Rapbattles militant Generals/
decorated with medals,made of diamonds rubies and arrows/
and with a wrath of a viking, we laugh at you tryin to fight us/
so call your troops, immoblize your forces for the Clash of the Titans....


that was the combination of two diobalicle forces.burning souls like crosses for transpassing on our fortress...

Namsayin...for all you gahbas that be sleepin on us like we were sheets and pillow cases...yall Sharmoutas need to wake up...Kos Umkum...wahid

NH 04-29-03 12:52 PM

hmmmmm first kid needs work...his flow sucks ass his bars are too damned long most of the time...improve kid

second guy was aight had some multies and flow was better structure still needs a lil work..and vocab needs uppin a lil all in all not a bad collab

pz

Narcicyst 04-29-03 12:58 PM

it prolly went thru your head dawg...Ate's verse was better than mine you just dont understand it thats all...a newbie tryin to tell me that i need work on my sentence structure when its obvious he couldnt comprehend 3% of the shit that was written in those two verses...Kos Umak namsayin that shit was mad ill...wahid

NH 04-29-03 01:03 PM

LMFAO at newbie LMFAO

kid i been rhyming for two years

i grown up with better emcee's than u will ever be

on RM i am one of the top ten topical heads now please be quiet

Narcicyst 04-29-03 01:05 PM

yah dawg whatever let me hear you audios and shit then start talkin your dumb ass away...two years i have been doin this since i was 14 and im 22 now so go back to your wanna be ganster fascination type flows...wahid

NH 04-29-03 01:11 PM

LMFAO WAHID LMFAO BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

kid you are WACK please just shut up allready

i gave you some advice

its called critique honest opinion now if you dont want honest opinions then dont fucking post ya bullshit on here

if i told u i was feeling it then i would be lie'ing

now if you have been spitting for so long then your wack ass would know that ya bars need to be equal in length and no more than 16 syllables other wise it fucks up your flow big time

but both of u fucked that up

ah well...i just proved how wack u really are

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 01:15 PM

ahahhahahahahahahha kus umak ,ku ukt,kus ohtk,kus abb,yahoodi,shalmoot....hmm ok thats all out.now back to you ,aiight,what exactly is your name,nh?n,h??huh?what the fuck is an nh?dont call me kid....its stupid....all this coming from a gangsta...a gangsta??you prolly a wannabe gangsta aint you,just pretending to live in the 'hood' and shit,obviously pretending to be duckin from all the bullets and cops only got you hearing the lowest form of hip hop...the bullshit...wich you write...ever heard of somethign called abstract??or this that to big a word ofr a 'gangsta' to comphrehend,oops comphrehend another big word...my bad...my flow?my flow?cat you never heard my flow,you jsut opened this shit up,saw that it had big words,that you cant read right so you musta thought i flow like..all like ma mmm maa maalloo malo malop maloppr malopro,nah fuck it its to hard gangsta,ima jsut say its whack coz i cant understadn the shit,it aint spoon fed to me,i habe to think a little...shit i cant do that im a gangsta....i need work?hahahahhaa,ima jsut laugh at that no thought comment...i need work ahhaha,almost like sayin narc cant spit...ahhaha..sadness......my bars are to long!!!oh fuck my bad ill go shorter them! fuck im sorry cat...man you ever heard of a rapper that spits faster then fucking scarface???probably not,coz you a real 'g' or however you spell 'g',whatever...that shit would take me less then two mintues to rattel off cat,jus tcoz it long dont mean it long nahmean.proabably not but oh well.ahha vocab needs uppin...aiight well lower the big words so you gangsta can undertsnad it...ok?no problem...hahah did you actually read thi sshit,comin at us with such vigor(another big word) all like this is whack blah blah blah,then sayin,all in all nice collabo,you didn teven read this shit did you? you fake bitch,is you worth this reply cat??? nah herd ....oh fuck i found out what NH stands for....

bismillah shalmoot

Narcicyst 04-29-03 01:18 PM

i bet he be throwin up gang signs at the computer screen when he be postin rhymes or replies....with his herbified ass

NH 04-29-03 01:18 PM

LMFAO OMG

i never said i was fucking gangsta you dumb fuckers

i never claimed to be a gangsta LMFAO you two are soooo fucking dumb

and big words???LMFAO comprehend isnt a big word

antidisestablishmenttariunism

thats a big word so please shut

Narcicyst 04-29-03 01:20 PM

ohhhh brainy fucker....get the fuck outta here like bankrupt porno sets you wack ass half assed wanna be mc with no skill...and stop freeposting with your bitch ass.oh yah i just called your herbified ass in bitch slapped...lets see who will win that battle if you up for it...wahid

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 01:26 PM

ahah my bad i assumed you were gangsta with the shit i saw you post before ,all the stealin an dealin and shit...hahaha.my bad cat...you obvioulsy just bitin the shit....whats a lmfao omg?
antidisestablishmenttariunism
aiight whats that mean then???if you so smart and shti and not gangsta...??the shit aint even a word cat,go front on someone else that requires to be fronted on...
you dont have to say you gangsta yaknow,i canjus tell,that shit you writing in open mic,sound pretty fucking gangsta to me...
nah herb you talk shit.

NH 04-29-03 01:27 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Narcicyst
i bet he be throwin up gang signs at the computer screen when he be postin rhymes or replies....with his herbified ass


and you claim your 22???? riiiiiiiight

herbified what kinda fucking is word is that????

allmost as gay as you are im done wit u pz

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 01:27 PM

ima jsut stop now,i dont want you getting free posts on my shit,its being dirtied by your stupid ass inital derived name...and i dotn want you getting more posts then you deserve herb...

Narcicyst 04-29-03 01:28 PM

man we surrounded by nonsense and shit talkers like compost salemen hosting manure conferences dawg

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 01:29 PM

oh now hes to immature for your ass,whatever cunt,you a fool thats that,straight up get off this thread your herbin it up to much,

NH 04-29-03 01:34 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Atetrack define'
ahah my bad i assumed you were gangsta with the shit i saw you post before ,all the stealin an dealin and shit...hahaha.my bad cat...you obvioulsy just bitin the shit....whats a lmfao omg?
antidisestablishmenttariunism
aiight whats that mean then???if you so smart and shti and not gangsta...??the shit aint even a word cat,go front on someone else that requires to be fronted on...
you dont have to say you gangsta yaknow,i canjus tell,that shit you writing in open mic,sound pretty fucking gangsta to me...
nah herb you talk shit.


if you read it properly

it was for a topical league...it was one of the topics to choose from fucking idiot....

and actually its the second longest word in the english dictionary dummy

it measn to go up against the government to put it in short terms

and no im not a gangsta i have been through some shit that u havent even come close to...you dont know me so dont act like you do.....god you two are extremely dumb

all i did was critique ya shit honestly and you two just jumped up and started shit talking for no reason..if you cant take people giving you advice dont post simple as that

i didnt even intend beef so how am i a shit talker???

i gave an HONEST opinion and narcicyst or whatever started shit talking...so the real shit talker is him cause he started it in the first place

now i told you what i thought which is why u posted ya shit in here to see what people think bout ya work....and i never said it was wack all i said was u need to do abit of work and that was it...

Narcicyst 04-29-03 01:34 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHA...manthat little bitch needs to check bitch slapped cuz i called his gay ass over there...he about to get fucked in every orphasus when im done with his ass...man i shouldnt be sayin raped cuz he prolly be crackin a kool-aid smile like micheal jackson at a daycare center thinkin that imma really bang him namsayin

Narcicyst 04-29-03 01:36 PM

dawg i dont put my shit here to get critiques i just post to get shit offa my chest ...only critiqueing i need is in my audios

NH 04-29-03 01:43 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Narcicyst
dawg i dont put my shit here to get critiques i just post to get shit offa my chest ...only critiqueing i need is in my audios


and what do you think i rhyme for????

i only rhyme to speak my mind and say how i feel get shit off my chest.....thats why rap was invented in the first place

i aint a battle emcee and i admit im not i dont like battling thats why...yes i can battle but i dont enjoy it

i didnt come in this thread with the intention to start any kind of beef i just came in to read ya work and give an honest opinion on it

and all of a sudden you start tryna bite me and shit for speaking my mind

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 01:57 PM

whatever cat,i dont understand your logic of having 16 syllables in a line...who cares??if the shit sounds ill who gives afuck about the syllables?as logn as hte shit is evenly placed out nahmean..yo makin it sound like you the supreme cat at this shit tryin to teach a class,why icall you gangsta,coz its always gangsta cats writing me shit like this...aww thi sis hack blah blah blah,they all frontin ccoz they dont understand the shit nahmean,that all.you sounded like that to me cat.now you acting like you know me cat sayin you been through shit wouldnt come close,you dont know the first thign abotu me cat,my life is an absolute fuck,rhyme is all ive got,my style is fuckedup crazy,and cats seem to hate on it,coz its not conventional,when a cat tells me my flow is off i get heated,they dont try to think about it in any other wayt but htat they hear on a conventional song.dont ever tell me i aint been through shit....
whatever cat im out,this shit is boring me right now,stop replying i dont care anymore.
wahid ithneen thalaata. allatool!
im out.

Oso Gangsta 04-29-03 02:01 PM

shalom

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 02:04 PM

...what?stop free posting.
comment or dont .

NH 04-29-03 02:06 PM

u like the word cat huh???

and my life isnt shit????look son i could tell u some shit ive had to go through and seen and seriously u would understand man...rhyming is all i have in my life

the reason i say 16 syllables in ya rhymes is because thats the best way to get a smooth consistant flow....the rhymes i say allways pass on knowledge and speak truth about the world around i dont spit "conventianal" songs or watever u call them

i rap about what is real and what is fucked up in my life or the world i never rap bout comercial shit cos thats boring

all i did was give some advice....some advice that would stop people hating...but i wasnt hating i was giving advice theres a difference

Atetrack define' 04-29-03 02:15 PM

aiight cat,i feel ya,i was jsut think in you was some fool comign to dis me again,its a problem here,cats with no idea come and diss my shit and they dont even read it.i thought you was one of those cats...i guess i do like the word cat...its kinda austomatic,i say it so much,i type it the same i guess.conventional shit,meanign the commercial shit you spoke about,meaning the straight up hip hoppy head type shit at times too...i dunno i cant explain it properly...but cat,i still cant find that word yo,i looked,amyeb you got a crazy thick dictionary...whatever haha.
different styles different syllable placement nahmean...case of mistaken identity...
bismillah

Narcicyst 04-30-03 05:16 AM

word dunny...people dont be understandin that our rhymes are always complex...who gives a fuck about how many syllables or words or how short or long the bars should be....just spit your shit and enjoy it, cuz in my opinion no disrespect to anybody but a lot of kats in here cant rhyme thats my opinion...tryin to sound the same is wack...and NH as far as your advice its cool dunny but we still gotta battle namsayin...wahid

Narcicyst 04-30-03 11:21 AM

uppin^^

Saladin 04-30-03 06:12 PM

That other dewd was some ignorant prick..

but on the real , this was ILL, i was feelin this...

Fuck them haters...they just don't understand..

peace
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Narcicyst 05-01-03 03:50 AM

good lookin gout dunny..wahid

Atetrack define' 05-01-03 01:43 PM

thanks saladin,much appreiciated...still cats sleep...sigh.....up up up up up! dafuck up!

Narcicyst 05-02-03 08:08 AM

man this shit is a hot collab Ate i still dont know why fols are sleepin on it...

Atetrack define' 05-06-03 11:51 AM

neither does i haha....


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