ill-mental vs $$ SKilo $$
 

i'll spit first
well explained votes
unlimited votes
no dick ryder/crew/hater votes
15-20 lines

ok hold on i gotta finish my homework. 10 mins

ya'll vote on mine and i'll get to voting on urs.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42546

skilo, your style is so generic, that you could buy it for a dollar\\
i go first in this battle, because you need a rap staller\\
i understand that you cant battle, it takes you a week to write a rhyme\\
but if you wait that long, i'll have you lyricly mind blocked by that time\\
I know you know the cliche of the typical white emcee\\
but my rhymes'll hit you hard,ill have you like "castaway" - lost out to sea\\
in this rap game all you is - is a little pawn\\
they wont let people like you in,cause you gayer than elton john\\
they call me ill-mental cause im sick in the head\\
i'll have you like a blind man with his glasses, seein red\\
i'm surroundin your head with Maniacal meanings, Leaving you with that nauscious feeling\\
I'll Have you in your favorite position, kneelin\\
This is the year that them bitch-ass ni99as gon' get theirs\\
You swingin from my balls, while you down there smell my dick hairs\\
Ya bitch, Cant you see that im a WaR LorD, and you just a little hoe\\
your rhymes are so generic you got em at the 99 cents store\\
you betta get ur money back, cause you got ripped off\\
but you cant it was a sale, you got those fuckers half off\\

ok ur turn

lol PUNKED!

Ok

I just read this shit hold on

It took you bout 15 min so I get the same amount

ok

Im gunna ask you would you like this to end later or soon,/
you better take one more look at the moon/
cuz your death is coming so stay tuned/
sorry dude I dont mean to be rude/
your lucky that I even let you choose/
so lets resume on your doom here we go 1,2/
yo, yo /
So you wanna battle?/
let me tell you though/
what I got you cant handle/
Ill blow you out just like a canldle/
then leave you in smoke/
your the audience im the host thats the way it goes/
point the trigger at your nose pull it slow/
then reload/
sorry bud you chose execution/
so I gave you the most painless resolution /
that was the only solution/
still very sorry about your face gettin ruined/
Dawg I really dont understand/
what are you doin coming up against the rapper who is just gunna make your game a just ol' nothin in the past/
It seems that you are proud of your little verses/
just watch out though cuz im droppin curses/
for no damn purpose/
your raps, are like a drunk driver who swurves on their track /
I really hope that your little story was a sloppy copy cuz it looked like a rough draft/
now im gunna have to do corrections and give it back, so you can keep up in my rap class/
i dont know how you made it this far now im gunna have to flunk ya/
but first im gunna wanna punk ya cuz your just a little boy who is lost/
like a little weak boy on the football team that just lost his spot/
now tell me kid have you learned you should be concerned/
cuz let me tell ya bud you just got burned/
SORRY I WENT OVER THE LIMIT BUT THATS HOW PLAYAZ DO IT

uppin for votes

15 min exact

ill got this one... wheres your punches at skilo? nice job as always ill... now go vote on my shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42625

1 - 0 uppin here

uppin here

You know it dont all matter on punches, flow ,word choice...

what? thats what a battle is judged on

THATS BULL SHIT THAT AINT NO VOTE YOU SAID YOURSELF WELL EXPLAINED VOTE, DONT FUCKIN CHEAT HE DIDNT SAY ANYTHING BOUT YOUR RHYMES FUCKIN CHEATER

lol what? by well explained i mean no poll voting without an explanation. lol

fine whiner... your style was generic. it sounded like you were lust spittin whatever words that might mean somethin gangsta to make it rhyme. It lacked creativity, and it wasnt hard hitting.

on the other hand... ills style showed lyrical skill that is well above average. He attacked you with disses that were creative and showed intellegence...

this isnt open mic...
its a battle, so fight

Whatever you say bitch, cheat all you want

thats alright... yo ill... his boy younggadget tried to play me on a battle.... check out his rules he made up..... yo his whole crew is phony.... peep it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42372

Damn... now im gonna get hater votes

sounds like dickrydin.... Lol... but i agree that Ill's shit was much more battle worthy.... other dude was lost in open mic land....but on the other hand some of Ills lines were played out.... an Elton John line here.... nothin we havent heard before... but he was still better. vote=IllMental

Peep my shit yall, i appreciate it- i peep yours too then

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42344

ok 2- 0 uppin here

upppin here

nice spit Ill that shit was ILL,,lol anyway go vote on my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=42246

ok 3 - 0 i believe thats a KO

upiin for some votesz here

uppin

ill-mental had better punches and better flow, i voted for ill-mental cause he was all over the scene, and u too generic talking about how ur gonna hurt him and do all this shit, and the same subject throught out flow is lame, and he came at u with a right and a left

ill mental took this for real just better punches his verse was just nicer kid peace


check my shit out against conspirancy
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43182

My nigga Skillo got this one... creative rhymes n varyin line length...

thats a dick ryder

^^^^ hell yea it iz

yo ill got this one easy its not contest if u read tha flos u see it BATTLES ARE ALL ABOUT PUNCHES so begot tha name BATTLES
not fuckin poetry contest

p.s. homey dont ever put "yo, yo in tha middle of a text battle its not possible to be THAT much freestyled

yo peep blas-fem-ous vs 1-n-gone(thats me by tha way)

^^^LMFAO

dude i won this shit, no contes, ur little dick ryder vote dont count