Battle 3: Mad Man Vz Tru Liez
 

10 -20 bars due by Sunday at 12 pm yall no the rules about BS

Whatever, I'm glad, I just did 5 battles today, My mind is just blank.


Checkin In

i just battled today to but im ready and awaitin ur drop good luck

Yo Word Perfect is goin' down right before your eyes/
You know it's the 'truth' don't you 'LieZ'/
But what's worse is it was your fault for challenging us/
What you goin' do cry and fuss/
You didn't quite get what you'd expect/
Cause after this rhyme your gettin' fuckin' decked/
See the only chance you have of bein' ill is copyin what '50 cent' said/
And it's true cause 'Many Men' from Word Perfect want you dead/
See this'll be like 'Holyfield vs. Tyson' fight/
The only thing you can do is fuckin' 'bite'/
10 lines already and this one's in the bag/
No not closet, don't come out now fag/
I won't even stick around to see how this kid fared/
Chalk one up for VD cause this kid's fuckin scared/
14 lines and I'm done cause I know your rhymes are crap/
And I'll call you 'Timmy' from now on, cause I gave you a 'handicap/ Timmy from South Park


Yo 16 bars= 16 lines right? If not, could that be the rules?

Feel free to take your time.

this 'manz mad' because he had to 'recycle one of my old lines'//
tried to use the bar against me like it wasnt 'orignally minez'//
spit 'criminal sublimbinals' ur thoughts still wouldnt be 'most wanted'//
you tryin to 'diss yourself' so ur 'closest' isnt gonna be 'confronted'//
your 'mic' was my 'first to fall victum now i guess ur whats next//
im gonna rearrange ur 'cells' so u can finally claim u can 'text'//
ill 'double down' ur 'record' so ur 'streak' comes out of 'Pair-a-dyce'//
this 'election' couldnt have be won wit the 'florida votin device'//
'kidd' acts like he dont take this serious when 'net' is his life//
the only way u will become a 'legend' is if i make this 'classic'//
'punch u in the jaw' that way u dont have to say u got ur 'ass kicked'//
ur aint 'ruthless' enough to defeat me with ur 'fatal actions'//
u 'posted first' u must have wanted some 'male reactions'//

i edited my explinations because some choose to bitch about them so if u dont get any bars just ask what i ment by them cuz i spit mostly personals and yea i had played line as do most people

How could I have used that line against MiC ChEcK, ours was a topical battle... Spreadin fuckin' lies. And I didn't need to explain every line of mine.

Good battle nonetheless.

No i said i used that against Mic Check if u dont believe me ill dig up the battle and prove evidence of these bars an i never lied cuz i had no beef wit u but lets keep this professional only votes from here out if u got somethin to say my aim: aballaztail

Mad Man didn't come too hard here....best line was...

"See this'll be like 'Holyfield vs. Tyson' fight/
The only thing you can do is fuckin' 'bite'/"

^That was good, funny but you weren't consistent enough, the majority were fillers...

Liez....Used some good wordplay, and punches came a bit harder..good use of wordplay on his crew with the ruthless/Mic Check & Dyce lines...Overall Liez was more consistent throughout and gets my vote..

Vote=Tru LieZ

weak battle
mad man gets my vote purely cos he didn't explain half his lines (u shouldn't have to do that tru liez) and also his lines weren't as played as tru liez.......
tru liez if u hadnt explained more than half the verse and come with so many played line
ie....the kidd and nets line.....elections thing.....i've seen u do better
vote=mad man

im not tryin to make this sound like beef but it seems like u voted against me cuz i didnt vote for u i could be wrong but it seem like u came in my battle mad cuz i voted on urs and didnt give u my vote i explined everythin to u and it was just the style u went about ur verse that i didnt like im sorry that u felt u had to come in here and to repay me but common there may have been a few played lines in mine but common he had way more played lines then me and his whole verse was basically fillers

Now you editing your posts man, what's up wit you. :mad:

no i edited that cuz i made it sound like beef and i took out towards Fgee and i dont have beef just confused cuz it sounded like he was mad for the vote i gave in his battle and i took out the explinationz cuz u didnt like it ill put them back in if u want

yo tru liez no beef at all......i gave an explanantion^
just saw this needs votes so i voted.......and thanks for your vote on my battle

See this'll be like 'Holyfield vs. Tyson' fight/
The only thing you can do is fuckin' 'bite'/
^^ good one...

i have to go witt mad mann he was just more to the point a couple of truez punches didnt make sense,,,,,,,


vote-madman

Yo since polls closed, we goin' with explained votes, (still have elite rules) for their vote to count they have to have 200+ posts.

no offense but the tyson bite bars one of the most played bars next to cum lines and the reason u dont get my punchs was because they were personal punchs and i had them explained cuz u wouldnt get them but people said due to me explainin them i lost the battle

Damned if you do, damned if you don't. Yo I like the Tyson line, it's been a long time since anyone's said anything about it. Yo you keep this goin' and count explained, or you wanna call it a tie?

Vote-True LieZ

I was feelin his verse more,he just had more punches and they hit preety nicely.....multiz was nice,good wordplay and all

other kids verse was preety simple but it had some nice lines

but True Took this one in my opinion

~KroniK~

naw we can keep it going but for real u kno thats a played bar

Yo I'm actually pretty new to rappin' so when I thought that up, I thought I was a fuckin' genious. But there you go. lol

Both verses were below average (thats just my standards, but
then again I havnt done text in over a year)

Punches were weak for both, but the first cats lines were
rediculously played. I mean was that Mike Tyson, Bite line
a serious attempt at a punch? Wow... Second cat had below
average lyrics, but a tad above the first cats level. This tru
got this simply for slightly better punches, and a much better
structured verse...
wasnt a very exciting battle, but I think

^^^ umm yeah : anyone who voted for Mad Man should be bitch slapped!

He has one ten battles with that shit?

1. His flow was extremely inconsistent
2. PLAYED
3. Read One and Two

True:

this 'election' couldnt have be won wit the 'florida votin device'//

this was pretty good: but still much better then mad man

Vote: True Liez

Talk about played out, but whatever uppin.

if u count pollz with the other votes i won 5-3 good battle alot diff. then i expected

2-1 WP winning........