demonick vs. CLouis
 

yo.. we go 10 bars.. no crew votes.. spit within 3 hours of post because dis a freestyle not a story book... dat cool wit u

yea.. i aint in a crew anyways.. spit,
waitin on ya drop

peace

waitin for the drop...

yo whats up this is takin forever...

waitin for the drop

aight look....

CLouis is my first opponent, but its prolly still a joke
want me to go first jus so i can make you choke?//
ima trade yo life like your ray allen to seattle
you got 3 wins on the internet so you claimin u can battle//
you tryna be 50 cent but you aint worth 2 nickels n a dime
ima tryna rap fast so i can read yo nursery rhyme//
ill admit your shits legit but you to fake to spit
ima transmit my rhymes and speed it up a bit//
i can drown you wit my words ima lyrical flood
ima battle you here so you wont lose yo blood//
you claim to be real you ridin bikes wit no spokes
ima leave you feelin shorter than gary coleman on different strokes//
ima defy rap battles when i click submit reply
if i was you id jus log off cuz you been dominated by//
demonick, satanic, i laugh while you panic
eruptin im volcanic, sink ur life like titanic//
ive battled betta bitches beyond the bean border
decay ur raps like a dentist wita dull delayed disorder//
ima let u try to battle back before you start to cry
drop ya lines fuckin faggot its yo turn to reply

aight..

i aint gonna bullshit on my reply to try to win it,
also, i wont be like demonic and fuckin take like 30 minutes,
if thats ur excuse for tryin to rap at a fast pase,
the only thing you'll be quick at is fallin into last place,
congradulations on uppin to six from 5 post,
your better off hittin high notes than havin this guys choke,
low vocab, faggot couldnt conceive a better verb,
insteada tradin my life, quit spittin four letter words
you shouldnt have reached 6, post number should be still a five,
sink me like titanic? couldnt rock the boat if aliyah was still alive,
with a blank record, this kids sayin the best be me,
the only thing this faggot transmits is STD's
cant get the best of me, think you can attack shit aggressively?
this guys a fuckin pussy, someone get him a hystorectomy
this kids laughin while i panic, its official
hes packin a pistol, with a bullet engraved with my initials,
whos scared now? he pushin around "gary coleman,"
youll be askin 'what you talkin bout' by the time this starts unfoldin,
like to count wins? heres some shit for the spanish emcees you eat like nachos,
how bout you count this shit: uno, doce, tres, quatro....

uppin votes

come with the votes

stop sleepin........

come with it we need votes......

COME WITH THE VOTES

zzzz...

clouis i think u got this 1 with betta meda4s and flow

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...1342#post401342

VOTE ON THIS

aight thanks..

1-0

uppin votes

uppin..

stop sleepin on this shit..

votes needed

VOTES NEEDED

demonick all the way

votes need to be explained..

yo man i gotta vote 4 clouis on dis 1 his experience showed in dis battle but demonick i gotta say ya dun gud

either 2-0 or 2-1, cuz that andrew kid aint explain his vote..

so w/e uppin..

peace

vote for cluis, better rhymes
he stretched it


vote on my battle: gangstakilla vs. dice-roller

3-1.. thanks, uppin votes..

i give it to demonick its was a tight battle he spit smoother

aight 3-1 or 3-2...

uppin votes

uppin votes...

aight its been three days shit is now closed..

i won it

good battle

peace

CLouis won this one his rymes had more flow

aight thanks this battles dont tho

peace