13th Disciple vs X Ecution
 

iight this is gonna be a good one....rules are like this....no d/r votes and no crew votes....only poll votes count in event of a tie then written votes count.....7-10 bars....(2 lines = 1 bar)....10 bars max.....lets go both verses due by 10 pm (eastern) tonite.... 1 check in 1st so i kno u aint a no sho.....go

........holla........

check 1 ...2

"Realistically" 13 aint got protection from me even in an armored vehicle/
The tires was "punch-tured" just like your 'lungs' which makes you unspeakable/

Even if you were surrounded by "Queen Bee's" your punches "still-wouldnt-sting"/
Disciple couldnt get the pussy wet even if I "dropped" you "in-a-spring"/

Your ryhmes are weak, burn out quick like cheap "cigarettes" /
And ma spits so "razor sharp" its sponsored by "Gillette"/

you and ya rhymes need "wheel chairs" im turnin ya "cripple"/
ma rhymes leave u so "shook" they maken ya intestineal oragans "ripple"/

I spread murder and mayhem across the globe like Jack The Ripper/
with hazardous rhymes like venom to kill yall quicker/

I can't lose to someone who's name don't exist/
Take a "pee in your shoes" so you can "walk around pissed"/

Like "canceled" acts you're a promised "NO SHOW"/
This cat couldn't "kick hard" rhymes wit "steal toes"/

the Slugs have ya "chest more exposed" than bitches on "girls gone wild"/
Meanwhile, I'm not ya parent, but I'll "son you like a foster child"/

This battles mine, 13 couldn't steal a W from a WENDYS sign/
You're homo like car "bumpers" you're always known from being "hit from behind"/

don't be afraid when people mention my name, refrain from the pain/
I know this isn't a game, you're not "CHUCKY" but this battle was "CHILD'S PLAY"/

where r u....its 9:38 u dun got alotta time...dont no sho me...1

...yo..yo..yo.....mic check 1.....yo....yo........


i'ma 'crown' u wit poisonous lyrical 'thorns' makin u the youngest
emcee to ever been 'persecuted'/verbal 'spikes' penetratin' and
piercin' ur limbs this crucifixtion will be perfectly 'X-ecuted'

prepared for this battle loaded my lethal weapons Disciple
steadily packin/victoriously 'stealin' yet anotha challenge call me
Pee-Wee Herman cuz I'm constantly 'jackin'

U had me fooled only fourteen years of age i peeped ur '1st time'
on Emcee Interaction/damn....two days later u be postin anotha
thread called' i woke up this mornin' wit signs of what I think is
ejaculation'

within two months this juvenile already got about ninehundred
and fifty posts/at night when ur parents are 'ghost' u sneakin on
the internet caressin ur 'host' but yet still findin' some spare time
to be droppin some votes

durin' battles i'm 'oldfaithful' verbally eruptin like Geysers
ur brain cells must be depleted from smokin that 'bud' cuz
apparently u thinkin ur 'weiser'

i know i bagged this battle for the fact no one will dare 2 'dick ride'
u/i mean do u know the consequences of underage rape to a cat
who just almost physically new

good shyt......vooootes 1

Take a "pee in your shoes" so you can "walk around pissed"/

LMAO

the Slugs have ya "chest more exposed" than bitches on "girls gone wild"/

Original.......Nice.......

This battles mine, 13 couldn't steal a W from a WENDYS sign/
You're homo like car "bumpers" you're always known from being "hit from behind"/


Nice.................

victoriously 'stealin' yet anotha challenge call me
Pee-Wee Herman cuz I'm constantly 'jackin'

LOL

U had me fooled only fourteen years of age i peeped ur '1st time'
on Emcee Interaction/damn....two days later u be postin anotha
thread called' i woke up this mornin' wit signs of what I think is
ejaculation'

Very Nice.......................Personal.........

ur brain cells must be depleted from smokin that 'bud' cuz
apparently u thinkin ur 'weiser'

Nice.........

Imma Give This To 13.....More unches And PErsonals......

Very Very Nice Battle From Both......
X, The Jack The Ripper Lines Are Sooooo Played Out Homie.......

Both Had NIce Lines.....

My Vote-13..........

beef aside . . .






car "bumpers" you're always known from being "hit from behind"/





13th ur lacking wordplay and metas. ur punches are too basic. i have seen better from X but he had better lines. and make sure that your lines rhyme. Interaction and Ejaculation sound nooothing alike. Good battle. VOTE - X Ecution.





Pleeeasseee BOTH of you go vote on my battle against OnE.

It's getting slept on like 2 dollar whores.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=41834

what the f@@k!!! okay..........beef aside..........i'll accept that......but Inter-action.....and E-jac-u-la-tion............what makes u think that doesn't even rhyme......seriously........1

1-1....more votes

in-ter-rack-shun


e-jack-u-lay-shun



the last syllable rhymes



but the words definitely do not . . .

okay......1

vooooootes

^^^

Yeah 13th...theory is right, it don't rhyme, that wasn't the only problem with ya verse but, the structure was fucked which made ya lines heaps stretched and lost flow...

& Dogg...

within two months this juvenile already got about ninehundred
and fifty posts/at night when ur parents are 'ghost' u sneakin on
the internet caressin ur 'host' but yet still findin' some spare time
to be droppin some votes

^^Don't ya think thats a bit hypacritical???

All in all, X came fucken hard...good battle...

Vote=X Ecution

Thats some pussy shit.........So now u judgin me by judgin my rhymes huh? Next person who votes.....I don't care if U vote for X or Not....because I respect him.....Just don't give me none of that pussy shit, "oh......don't u think thats hypacritical? cuz u got alot of posts in a shorter amount of time.." I don't want to hear that faggot crap......its a battle.....say what u want to say.......and please........no d/r...........other than that...........1

thx for the votes.......more ^^

haha shutup 13th, it wasn't no hate vote, I was just sayin man, Its like Eminem battling some other white kid and saying, "WHITE RAPPERS ARE FAGGITS, THEY SHOULD ALL QUIT!!" I voted honestly and all in all X had a much better verse than yours, in just about every respect...wordplay/flow/punches....

right.............ur on my pussy list for now on...............urs is commin....remember that.........matter of fact quote it right now......so when the day comes that i fade u............i want u to remember what i said..................faggot ass kangaroo fuckin foster drinkin crocodile chasin trick.............

haha get a life kid...

"faggot ass kangaroo fuckin foster drinkin crocodile chasin trick"

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LOL

WTF???

hahaha!


13th:::

don't take it so harshly when somone don't vote for u........
take what they say and kearn from it: otherwise you will never earn that vote in another battle:::















besides:







they are right

thats a KO.....good battle...1

**sighs**...........





**shrugs shoulders**..........




**leaves room**........






















good battle.........1

and i thot id have a real lose match up wit tha record of urs guess not...w/e good shyt ne way 1

thats what happens when ur public enemy number 1.......

iight 1

umm.. there are no KO's.. when are people going to read the battle rules? battles are over when the polls say CLOSED. So people can still vote if they wish to.

uppin

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