Ripper ve Spittin Quik
 

Rules:
10-15 lines
No crew/Hater votes
Poll votes determine winner
No feeding off others verse
Must check in.



This is my check in.

check in here after i finish this battle wit Saladin

aight

Aight,
this fool goes by the name of Spittin Quik, well he has 2 b if he's gonna suck dick after dick//
no need for discussion, i'll blow him up n say it woz human cumbustion , its disgustin//
ay yo i skribble invisible flows like ghostwriter, a live wire dynamite tied to a timer//
my battle records gonna b higher than the amount of times spittin quik wanks/
my flows will fuckin finish this faggot i might aswell b sendin blanks/
if u think ur gonna beat me ur gonna fuckin need a whole arsenal of tanks//
my flows endless while u use the same recyled lyrics coz u cant rhyme and think of ur own/
shit i'm the king and after this people will recognise dat i shud b sittin on the RB throne/
dont fuck wit me coz i'll beat u so bad i'll put u into shock and my victims kno that i'm prone//
2 do anything that i want at my own free will especially dickheads like u that i Rip 4 fun/
my rhymes r so hot ur gonna feel as if u been out 4 too long playin it the sun//
u think u spit rhymes dat are ill, the only time u'll b "ill" is wen u see me run down ur mama in a road kill/
dont come back 2 this verse after wit a weak response wit no punches, just rhymes dat fill/
i take time wit my rhymes and put in so much dedication, so do us all a favour and take a lethal overdose of ur medication//

poor i kno.
lookin 4 feedback on the verse. its hard 2 think wen ur at work wit lil inspiration.
uppin' 4 Quik.

aight thanx man

ill post in a min

aight dats cool

Aight look

Mic Check 1,2,3

Yo


this kid's a plain fruit, i need something to gag-him-with, a plum or pear will do ..//1
cause man your doo.. your verse is like the GRIZZLY's in the OFF-SEASON, simply UN-BEARABLE.. //2
Don't tell me to Shoe, it's not my fault..YOU-DRAW the horsefly's when the SHIT-COMES//3
cause like the nba playoff brackets, Him winning would be MAGIC, nevertheless he'll still get's PISSED-ON(piston) //4
I rip-Joints with punches that gather-up like DBZ Games, multiple HIT-POINTS. . //5
cause Ripper winning is outta-wack . . .like observing THE POPE IN A STRIP-JOINT//6
it's a disaster that, i drowned him in my flow, then got commited of consecutive POOL-CRIMES//7
i mean, he's part of the "THE WACK SQUAD", my verse ate Ripper and left him with 2-LINES//8
i'll have u keepin an eye on my punches, as i take ya face n' i sock it(socket)/battle me? u've lost it, cuz not even wit jet fueled mics could u roc it(rocket)//9
like this kid's a droppin bible stock, ya jus a lost profit(prophet)//10
Ripper’s like a 13 year old (Ripper), someone told him to grow up, so he took a peanut n' dropped it//11
from Ripper u see nuttin but soft hits like punches from foam gloves//12
i'm known to be off the hook, so Ripper payed my bill n' hopes of makin phone love//13
Bones [i]slug[/u]ged(shot), covered in blood(Ripper) as i leave ya body in-sections//14
misdirection in battle(war), cuz this man's down like sloppy erections//ya can't copy perfection, cuz even if this kid bit me he'd still be 2nd rate//15
now it's time...(title) cuz like ya facin cannabilistic rapper in a second ya ate kid's representin hate, and when the battle is over let the spectators evaluate//16
this kid's whack n' doesn't belong in rap like R&B artists//17
ikid'll leave here wit more battle wounds than if i was in the army w/ scarred spits//18

oh my bad you said 10-15 linez
you can manage
lets get some votes
i was in the mood kid

yo i vote spittin on this one his punches flowed better
ripper you was tight it was close but spittin just had better punches

1-0 text and 1-0 poll
keep em comin

yo i agree wit ice spitt was better it was a tight one tho

ight
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1-0 poll

need more votes

Uppin'
vote on this and i'll vote on ur's.

uppin'

Yo i'm goin for spittin quik as he said he was in tha mood and it showed.

POLL = Spittin Quik

Yo return tha favor on ma battle wit sword.peace

we need some votes peeps

AWWW MAN MY NIGUH SPITTIN QUICK IS ILL WITH HIS FLOW
VOTE=SPIT

P.S. K.O.!!!!!

there aint no KO's.
uppin'

spit wins but not by much, the first part of your verse was confusing, but as I read on the flow played out and got more on a constant beat, vocab and word play are really what won it for you tho... 1

keep em comin
4-0 poll
its a KO

both tight n i liked both verses but i gotta go wiv spittin on this JUST, better punches thats all!

vote= spittin quik

black ice u gonna drop ya fuckin verse or wot!
will u 2 vote on that wen he posts? thanx!

bet... good lookin out

yeh good win.
u deserved it.
i can admit wen i get beaten fairly!

thanx man

im votin for spittin quik.

hez wordplay was more clever and they helped his attack.

VOTE => Spittin quik <=

Cant poll vote cauz i dont have 100 posts.

but if u could return the favour of lookin and poll vote here thatd be good.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=409299