[.Meta 5-vs-Optically InViz.]
 

Rules:

• 10 Lines Max
• Votes must be explained

GOODLUCK....

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*tips hat*

u said 10 lines not 50 bars where u at?

Yeah, 10 lines.... I can only get online @ school, understand? Schools ending and I have to go.... I'll drop tomorrow morning... you can drop or wait for me... either way it don't matter

ill wait....... my shits ready....

*tips hat*

I'll use a different style then usual

I’m Your First Battle, What Are You Looking for Trouble?
High Hopes for a Win, Guess I Gotta Bust Your Bubble
No One Feels Your Lines so it’s Best to Use Your Optics
You need protection from my heat, I suggest Hawaiian Topics
Can’t Stop My Rockets, Believe This Won’t Be An Even Score
I’m Launching My Meta 5’s To Destroy Your Metaphors
Battling Me is Like Sex Offenders; You’re Likely To Get Touched
My 4th Opponent, 3’s A Charm, Guess You Ran Outta Luck

-Death Becomes You-
I Murder With Death’s Sword, Yeah I Jacked The Ripper
An Emcee? KillingYour Kind With Genocide, Alias is Hitler

heres my key 10 lines

This muthfuckas hits are as strong as muscle relaxers.. Coated in evadible-edible- amphetamines, I’ll ‘quote’ation my ‘exclamation’ marks across ya throat.. to make ya neck look like a singular ‘parentheses’/
I be deflecting bitch niggas relentlessly with and epiphany of demonic unstoppable invincibility diligently, while ya tongue packs powerful punches of impotent abilities/
Ur a ‘faggot’ nigga… that spits ‘sweet’ like ‘syrup’ shit is getting drastic, and I could tell u was gay… by the way u be slowly was looking at ‘male-asses’ (malaises)/
I spit bars bitch tipped darts that u cant seem to see right, so ill throw razors at ya puples just to give u a ‘sharper sight’/
Critical nigga that would distort ya minds resort, make ‘meta’ plead the ‘5’th… after I fracture his fractions.. back down to 1/4th/
Ya lines are cold no heat cuz they’re arctic bars ur applying, this is ‘land’ for s’pacific’ verses cuz we don’t ‘sealions’(sea-ya-lines)/
Ya rhymes are ‘plane’ cuz ya text ‘ticket’ isn’t valid so why waste ya line fuel any longer, ill pull out my ‘knife’ so ya body can still get ready for a soon ‘de-part’ture/
Partner u star just becuz, my ‘gatling gun’ would love to ‘clap’ and give u acouple ‘rounds of applause’/
Ima send u and –L- thru ‘AIM’ so just ‘accept’ the fucking LOSE, or ill make ya skin drag off ya body… worse then the little gurl in the ring everybody was scared of/
And let this shit manifest, ima leave brails on ya forehead… so the blind can experience the expression on ya face when u first meet death/



Blah….

edited for color change

uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^

meta 5 caught phat shit....vote ya....check my battle dice-roller vs whitelightning

a yo i just checked the vote poll how did meta get a vote?

VOTE - META 5

Damn...This wuz a tite battle...META 5 came harder tho (punchlines n shit)...I juss wuz feelin his verse more

lmfao can we get some REAL people in here that know how to VOTE..........

vote=meta5
harder punches, and his last two lines were the illest in the whole battle.

WHAT THE FUCK IZ ALL YALL ROOKIEZ?

damn, looks like I'm winning... and you still went over the line max.. I said 10 LINES not 10 BARS, there's a difference...

good battle though

it's funny how everyone in the thread said they gave me the vote... and you still have 2 votes?! kinda wierd huh?

yeah, I thought his was a-bit long.. I'm voting for "Optically InViz" sorry meta, usually you smoke cats, but I really liked the multies and punches this kid had.. it seemed like you didn't put all your effort into it...

naw, I really didn't, He was rushing so I thought we just wrote something quick... you know a keystyle... so that's what I did.. didn't know he prewrote his verse.... coward

I'm debating on if I should DQ you or not... that's some bullshit that you over the Line Limit by 10 lines.....
unless you want to edit your verse to make it 10 lines like the rules says... i'll be forced to DQ you.... don't make me do it.. I hate to waste a verse

what the fuck r u talking abuot u never heard of streched bars? those r ten lines u se where the /'s are at?... exactly

those r dicryding votes aint no dq fuka u come over to rap-concepts and we will show u how we run shit no dr no hate votes straight up battling and real votes


and thenk u blunt atleast we know theres another sain person

and dont talk to me like im some rookie lmao u lost and u know it and the fact that these other kids didnt read my verse makes it clearer and some probably didnt even get my lines

uppin.........

This muthfuckas hits are as strong as muscle relaxers.. Coated in evadible-edible- amphetamines, I’ll ‘quote’ation my ‘exclamation’ marks across ya throat.. to make ya neck look like a singular ‘parentheses’/
^^^ r u serious that was nice with multi's

Ya rhymes are ‘plane’ cuz ya text ‘ticket’ isn’t valid so why waste ya line fuel any longer, ill pull out my ‘knife’ so ya body can still get ready for a soon ‘de-part’ture/

^^^ this thing is sick lol like the plane concept mixed in it..


i dont know how this other kid got votes

vote optically inviz

finally these cats no how to vote........


now UPPIN!!!

uppin.....

omg, is "meta5" actually serious, lmfao, "yo, i shoud DQ you for going over the limit" haha get over kid, damn, anyway, this battle aint even worth a break down, Optical clearly had better Multis, Word-Ply, and punches that were worth a damn. Ayo meta5, if u that iLL, then why u underestimate kats.

yo this shit was wild yo........

lol im not voting on this cuz optic already won it but looks like meta was trying to cheat... i dont know maybe its the cats here... ima newbie and already dont want to be here after i seen this foreal any way im out --------------------------------swish

yo my vote goes to optically inviz jus cause you threatened to DQ him IF he did go over you shouldnt be worried about it the way you supposedly can flow but whatever my vote goes to opt.

hey can ya'll vote on mine and punk'd battle -1-

Although Optically InViz did go over the limit, most likly prewrote, I think Meta didnt really put much effort into his rhyme.... like he said keystyle but it hurt u son.... i gotta give this one to Optically InViz

vote = Optically InViz

lmfao pre-wrote i had that shit done after i excepted his challenge what r u talking about lmao and i didnt go over thats my style theres niggas on this site that use the same style come on now....

UPPIN ayo how many votes r needed to win?

i didnt even have to read this long. Halfway readin thru Optically Invis he just plain won.

Rhymed betta. Better wordplay.

Vote => Optically Invis <=

Are you that stupid that you can't count lines?

if i said 10 bars then yeah, your piece was straight, but no doubt that shit was no 10 bars... I like how you brang your homie's from RC to the site to talk shit... aight Kiddo, is that how you get down @ RC? I'll take this one on the fact that I bullshitted with this battle... we'll rematch no doubt... and i'll make it plain and clear in the rules what a line is... and if you go over that then I will DQ you... first let me finish the crew and league battles I'm in...

One yaself

a yo i aint bring no one from rc nigga one ya own self nigga and i didnt go over u cuntfuck STRETCHED BARS i can tell uve been rappin long u cockjunkie..................


so i mean is this shit over is it a win or what how many votes r needed?................

the battle ends when the poll closes and you're ahead of the votes 8-5 so it's basically over....

funny how a half ass battle will get so many votes but a lot of people's dope ass battle get slept on....

nice verse though besides the lines...