irrelivance vs harmor
 

12-18 bars
give a little explanation for vote
no crew votes / dick ridin votes
verse due in 1 hour (it's 1:13 am here)
I'll spit first

ight. in

i'll use these array of gamma rays to make ya tissue decay/
then peal back the layers revealing the bones and veins/
eject potent blood from dead rodents into ya bloodstream/
leave ya conscience the whole time to hear ya scream/
then i'll prescribe some neo-gothic antibiotics/
deadly as fuckin ten droplets of Ricin toxin/
give it to you through a tube that contains mephitis/
so mother fuckin rancid and putrid like ya lyrics/
and then the side affects will make you pass out/
followed by skin rash, itchin, diarrhea, nausea, and dry mouth/
you can try me bitch if ya mind contains doubt/
you couldn't beat me if I was just startin out/
cuz you have an inefficiency to not be lyrically incline/
that's why this battle is mine from the first two words I rhymed/
I'm on a higher level than you/I'm so much better than you/
mothafucka you won't win with those lyrics that you use/
my spits are like guns with the option of rapid fire/
I'll tie you up and drown you in a saliva quagmire/
Til your oxygen expires and your lungs dry up/
you need to die bitch with a painful death/
i'll use a steak knife to cut your esophagus/
give you a dissection infront of ya parents/
then i'll send a postcard to ya friends and relatives/
with picture of me with a weight about to crush ya skeleton/
they be to late ta save you cuz ya be without a brain/
cuz I'll fuckin blast it usin a double barrel 12 gauge/
leave ya dead in the streets where the children play/
so they can be dramatized by the snakes crawlin out ya eyes/
and the amputated leg with maggots coverin the thigh/
so the conclusion is don't fuck with me or you'll die/

good verse kid

illegal crew?.............. what, its a crime now to be as wack as you?//
battlin me is like spinnin the 'wheel' of lyrical 'misfortune', landin on "you lose....... irrelivance wins"//
"young mc on a mission".....thats what it says in your sig......mission failed if it was to get a win//
im not even comin hard harm, cause your punches hit as hard as the leprechauns' from lucky charms//
every punch you throw completely misses....your flows are nasty while mine are "Magically Delicious"//
rappin about diarrhea and shit....... could let you post 1,000 bars and still not one punch would hit//
from the style you choosin i already know the outcome before the conclusion..........you losin//
take a look at ya crew........bunch of nobodies...........through and through//
Illegal Crew is accepting all applicants i see, 1 vs. 7 ya whole click and id still come out with a victory//
dont get me wrong dawg you have some potential......but you dont realize that in this game talent is essential//
lookin at your verse and see no personals....was it prewritten or bitin?....either way, no way you getting any votes in the polls//
alright now, last bar, this is the end......take ya paper and pen and come back when you want ya next lesson//

spelling errors

so tight..I just gotta give it to irrelivance....check my battles whitelightning vs Mad Man and whitelightning vs dice roller

uppin fa votes

ight white

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hmm.....
 

iight here's how I SEE THIS....

Harmor ya verse was good up until tha Dry mouth line....afta that you went downhill..... you had no punches and no good disses...
you kinda sorta had wordplay but you did'nt spit a battle rhyme...
ya verse was more ov a Pycotic Cypher :mad: :beat:

irrelivance verse was really simple,elemtary so to speak!!:whacky: .... you had no FIE in ya disses, and ya punches like Punch!! but you did spit a battle verse tho...

but this is a Toss up so if tha polls show tie!! I'll be tha Tie Breaker or I'll make it even!!:sleep:

wtf did you jus say? lol........who voted for harmor?

someone gave him a poll vote..........harmor maybe?

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uppin

ayo my votes go to irrelivence for sure.....he just came atcha from every direction, and brought that ooah ahhh factor...
harmor, i like ur style...cuz its like me when i started, but its a bad habit, to battle with all fictional stuff, and not put dirt on your opponenet knah mean? you gotta hit him hard....something like this kid is copies eminem like b.rabbit// the way he fantasizes about him shows hes a faggot!!!.....
aint hatin on no one! lol!...just my 2 cents

yo i read both verses and i see it as

H came basic and didnt really have disses to do much effect

and irr u didnt thro good punches either

so

flow-h
metas-irr
punches-tie
structure-h
overall-irr

vote goes to irrelivance.....


i need votes on this battle cuz this battle im being cheated...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44137

i didn't vote for myself

thanks everyone for your votes............uppin

bump

Vote: irrelevance

Better punches:: the flow fell off a bit int he middle but your pucnhes were much stronger

H::

you had good vocab and nice flow, but lacked metas and wordplay....and mostly punches::: So work on that aiight!

Good shit

oh yeah::: ^^^ peep my battle with Vendetta: the link is in my sig

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THis battle was one sided....irrelivance ripped this shit......im not even comin hard harm, cause your punches hit as hard as the leprechauns' from lucky charms//
every punch you throw completely misses....your flows are nasty while mine are "Magically Delicious"//
these lines sold it......vote- irrelivance

ight 5-1 me. wouldve been a ko but someone voted for you before i even dropped............hmmmmmmmmmmm.............anyway s.....nice battle and stay up dawg

if you don'tr belive I didn't vote for myself than I'll vote to prove that I didn't
^hope ya got that^

lol still says one

my vote goes to irrelivance. Although i was not sure cauz he did get the chance to feed off the lines.

But that doesnt mean harmor didnt have the chance to attack. Instead he was just some disturbed serial killer.

Vote => Irrelivance <=