Treach p vs Nuclear weaponz
 

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no dick rydin drop verse soon

check in when ready

ima drop tommpr couldnt be bothered doin it now

yo trench check out my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43869

Ayo Nuclear weaponz,My victory be precise learn too soon shut your mouth because dick be your only vice/
You just another parasite that ima bout to squash with my pinky,na nah you be worse than lice/
Your veses posses no irrleivence, no real life issue, you wanna shoulda to cry on, FUCK YOU,heres a tissue/
Its funny how your life was ended berfore it was started,Your boyfriend yung dees upset because you was killed and soon be parted/
You like a a an 18th century sallon brawl it all started when i pulled the ace/
Ha ha i guess you will never no what its like to be a flyweight intercepted by punchlines that stung you like a can of mace/
Even thogh you think your hard, you dont posess wordplay,because your lerical pool only stretches ankle deep
You diggin yourself a shallow grave homey, this is one agreement you fogot to meet/
Universal paramedics couldnt fix your sorriful pleas/
Jsut like that homosexual incident you got caught in you just claimed "i droped my keys"/

you better not no show

Just found tha thread lol. i'm a key it up right now.
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Ayo.....

I'm doin a mistake, i should pull a NO SHOW IN FACT/
Cuz postin next to Treach, is tha only time i'm CLOSE TO WACK/
Bite marks all over his back(biting), proves that its skillz that he lack/
Tryin so hard to outwrite me, your crackin your wrists/
Tha closest you had to a dope punch was crack in your fists/
If this bitch slapped me wid gifts his presence (presents) couldnt be existent/
If he was trapped on a forklift his elevation still would be resistent/
Fuel your pencil tip by stuffin yourself wid paint chips on a platter/
It dont matter, either way your gonna get lead in your bladder/
Your raps are like stages made of meadows, cuz your rap game is plain/
Your joined that platoon cuz no other crew wants you in it's CAMPaign/
This bitch be pullin verses out of his purse at random/
Seldom getting tha outcome you expect like an unsuccessful ransom/
You crash in defeat, askin tha paramedics on websites "how do I speak after i was beat to retreat"/
I'll rip out this kids vocal cords, have him speakin in tongues/
Battlin me?? he dont need to smoke, to get heat in his lungs/
My words are breathe takin, when i dropped this verse Treach was purely asphixiated/
Whole crew loser, he should say fuck crews cuz he sux too much to be affiliated/

Tha closest you had to a dope punch was crack in your fists!!!

That shit was too funny! Nuc definitely won this one with better punches. Both verses were aight but his was nicer.

Vote: Weaponz

I amitt, my verse had madd effort behind it lol. I dropped a fuckin bomb.
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uppin for votes.
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VOTE = WEAPONZ...

REASON: He came wit str8 heat..nice flow...tite structure..all of that...don't get me rong, treach p's verse wuz nice too...tho i thought a lot of his linez were too long which messed up tha flow...

iight..
Treach, return tha favor nd vote on my battle wit punk'd:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44568

Your joined that platoon cuz no other crew wants you in it's CAMPaign/
What the hell is that supposed to meean?
there is no crew called tha platoon

Pretty close, both had pretty good drops, both gettin better, there were a fair few things I didn't like...Weaponz said, "Yeah I'ma key this up" then said "I put MADD Effort into this" dogg, don't claim u KEY it and then don't oh k...But no hate in it, I reckon Treach just got it, I really liked this line..

Even thogh you think your hard, you dont posess wordplay,because your lerical pool only stretches ankle deep

That was good, both had good lines...I reckon Treach just got it, by like half a point haha good battle kids...Peace!!!!

Ok, treach, you wanted to know what i meant by that line right? platoon is another word for crew or squad i never said tha name of it or it would of been in CAPITALS or "quotation marks". And meadskillz i did key it up, but i put effort into it as well. And i dont like tha way you said i'm gettin better when i prolly been doin this longer then you have. No beef unless you got, but i'm not no fuckin herb.
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VOTE => Nuclear Weaponz <=

Big improvement from the last time i saw him.

He punched just that bit more.

I probly can only post a text vote cauz i havent got 100 posts but in time i can vote for every 1 else cauz of the new rulez.

Now vote here. Ill return a beta favour when i have had 100 posts.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9226#post409226

Lol. thanx for tha vote, but y'all are makin me feel bad like i just barely won. I know i ripped this kid. It just comes to show that posts dont matter about skillz. Even tho i been rhymin for 6 years lol.
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treach got this one, yea i have to agree this came veryvery close, but i reckon treach beat ya by like 1 or 2 punches, both of yaw came hard but treach came harder, but i gotta give the vocab to weaponz,

vote = treach

Your veses posses no irrleivence, no real life issue, you wanna shoulda to cry on, FUCK YOU,heres a tissue/

^^^LMAO... treach was just funnier... i dont give a fuck what ya'll say... i reckon treach won this for sure

I'm doin a mistake, i should pull a NO SHOW IN FACT/
Cuz postin next to Treach, is tha only time i'm CLOSE TO WACK/
Bite marks all over his back(biting), proves that its skillz that he lack/
^^MAD PLAYED

I'll rip out this kids vocal cords, have him speakin in tongues/
Battlin me?? he dont need to smoke, to get heat in his lungs/
^^THAT TOO...

vote=Treach P

Your veses posses no irrleivence, no real life issue, you wanna shoulda to cry on, FUCK YOU,heres a tissue/

^^^LMAO... treach was just funnier... i dont give a fuck what ya'll say... i reckon treach won this for sure

I'm doin a mistake, i should pull a NO SHOW IN FACT/
Cuz postin next to Treach, is tha only time i'm CLOSE TO WACK/
Bite marks all over his back(biting), proves that its skillz that he lack/
^^MAD PLAYED

I'll rip out this kids vocal cords, have him speakin in tongues/
Battlin me?? he dont need to smoke, to get heat in his lungs/
^^THAT TOO...

vote=Treach P


posted again to let me vote...

^^^^^^^^^^
said it all

Vote: Treach P..............................













hit my battle with Vendetta: link in my sig

Mane, some of my punches killed his whole verse. You must be some of them newbs that got madd posts in tha chat room lol. I came from a vet site, and if this battle was on there, it'd be dead clear that i won. But fuck y'all dont give a fuck if i lose or not, cuz in tha end it dont matter who's better, just who's got more back cuz people wid 50 posts dont get no respect.
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Yo, this nigga weaponz took this by far. his punches where madd ill and his closer was dope as fuck.
young book aka oncore

really close battle but weaponz got it
more punches and flowablilyt
vote on myne
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=44670

yea hes been improving like mad

treach didnt have enough word play and too many fillers with a soft punch

vote=nuclear

hahahahaha
nuclear weaponz claimin hes a vet and how he wrecked me i think they no what there donin you hardcore veteran

3-3 on the polls. TIED. CLOSED.