Mic Check VS 13th Disciple
 

30 Lines Max....10 Min...

Check In By:Wednesday
Post Verse By:Friday
Voting Ends:Sunday

No/Biting/Recycling

No D/R

mic check......1.....2.........

hows 20 sound? I really don't feel like goin' 30.....

Where This Dude At?.......

aint posting, i never signed up....

just post.......damn

NO!, im too busy!....find someone else, or call this a no show...i dun give a fuck, wont get any pride out of it but i dun care, move on with yur life instead of bitchin over this.........

aight ima go wit ya, 20 lines ya said ?

whateva.........bring it.....

10 min. keystyle........


Hey yo
I'll pull your card, smash your face when my punches split right through ur guard//
Leaving this rook-scarred...kid is staring at rocks, thinking that he looks hard//
I cook lard just to heat up the beef I'll beat up this geek before he's ready to run//
My style is like being a 'runner up in Christian relays' second to nun (none)//
I'm like obese people, cause when it comes to weight(guns) I carry a ton//
Watch where your stepping son I'm quick to pull out a machete for fun//
Kid thought u had this win? well I'll 'cut your arm off' to prove ur 'out on a limb'//
Deliver a thunderous swing; similar to swishes your styles 'all net'; under the rim//
Fight me again; n find out I'm ready to drop a 'Holy Shit' rd like a 'constipated priest'//
1 punch will have ur lung expanding cease; I stole your heat like a confiscated piece//
U'll get no votes...so I can say this battle's a 'blowout' like getting my dick 'sucked outside'//
Have your luck subside; kids like 'Mormons', just 'wont go down without a fight'//
I spit out delight; words confound competition when I spit profound verbs and nouns//
Herbs get pound with pronouns; must be a 'circus cafe' the way I 'serve this clown'//
With Clarks I kick…strike and hit this bitch with precise marksmanship//
Your back will split when I get the clip, then persist to embark with spit//
U wont get the V; I simply get the W as people X my name and vote against you//
'Dyslexic'? I'll 'spell it backwards' too; as I X out the W and take this V from U!!!!!



18 lines, i dont care...live with it

*Disciple Sees Anotha WannaBe Eminem..........Lays It Down*


'Amplifyin' The Cries Of Ur Beatin While Tappin For The Sounds Of This 'Mic Check'/Submergin U In Water Wit One Thousand Volts Of Power Causin Ur Tongue To Touch The Back Of Ur Neck

I'ma Lyrical 'Jedi' Descended From The 'Stars' Excellin In Verbal 'Wars'/Shinin Light On Ur 'Darkside' Connectin Wit Punches Usin My Spiratical 'Force'

U Might Be 'Drunk Off Of Vodka' Cracka Yeah I Peeped Ur 'AOL Handle'/BUt My 'Shots' Will 'Sober' U Up Witnessin Is A '100 Proofs' Like A Bottle Of 'Jack Daniels'

Murderin Ur Verses 'Decapitatin' Every Part Of This Administratin 'Member'/Ur Crew Screamin 'Someone Please Call 911' Realizin That Ull 'Be Gone Till November'

Castin A 'Clipse' Over UR Persona Rapbattles Askin 'What Happened 2 That Boy'/Disciple Killed Em On 'BlackStreet' For The
Reason Mic Check Wasn't Bringin' Him 'Joy'

Hollow Tips Eruptin Ur Lungs Released From My I.L.L.matical Glock/
And Easy Victorious Battle When My Oppenent Is Equal To 'Jenny From The BLock'

Ur Blows Are Weaker Than A Parapalegic Wit A Contagious Case Of Leprosy/Rippin Ur 'Innards' Out Makin Ur Verses 'Infertile' Disciple Givin U A 'Radical Hystorectimy'

'Screw'-in U Deeper Wit Every 'Nail' I Pound Provin U Got No Skillz In 'Crafts-Man'/U Been Votin In All My Battles 'Stalkin' 13th Disciple Consider This Duel For My Biggest 'Fan'

It Must Be The Night Before 'Halloween' Cuz The 'Devil' Possessed Me Wit Murderous 'Michael'/Mic Check Must Be Drinkin A '12 Pack' Of 'Canned' Co-Ni-Ac Cuz He Has A Tendacy To 'Recycle'

I Admit I Was In Shock When I Seen Ur Identity In 'Member Pictures'/A Marshall Mathers Carbon 'Copy' Just Like Ur Lyrical Scriptures

'8 Mile' Wuz Dope But When U Take It To That Extent.........Damn!/
Next Thing U Know U Starrin' In A Movie Called 'Single White Man'

(More) And (More) 'Bull'-Dozin Ur RHymes Which I Repeatedly 'Gore'/'Choppin' Away Like A 'Tree' U Realizin Ur 'Syc-A-(More)'

Mic Check Lackin Abilities To Even 'Check' On The 'Mic'/He's Like
'Ellen Degeneres' Denyin That She's A Muff Eatin 'Dike' (oohhhh)


......26 lines............deal wit it................................................ ......1

*golf clap*

uppin for votes on this motha fucker

^^^

Damn Good battle ....props to both ,,,but i read each one twice and in my opinion 13 had this one.......




^^ very good opener....

and the rest was on point throughout ...

vote=13th Disciple

well this is how it goes down............

vote=13 simple reason his punches hit harder.b4 i even get started i treat every rb.com battle like it was a real battle...now if u read both outloud pretend this is a real freestyle battle goin down...who tha fuck is gonna believe that 13 came up wit all dat shit off tha top of his head....and not jus this time.......EVERY FUCKIN TIME...guess il jus give u props u got mad skillz who am i to place judgement on wats real and wats not.

I cook lard just to heat up the beef I'll beat up this geek before he's ready to run//
My style is like being a 'runner up in Christian relays' second to nun (none)//

^^^^got me rollin in my chair mic check but u underestimated 13 and jus kicked out mediocre punchlines tha rest of tha way
but tha ender was sick


Ur Blows Are Weaker Than A Parapalegic Wit A Contagious Case Of Leprosy/Rippin Ur 'Innards' Out Makin Ur Verses 'Infertile' Disciple Givin U A 'Radical Hystorectimy'
^^^13 hotness..are u a i.v. league graduate or wat dunny


'8 Mile' Wuz Dope But When U Take It To That Extent.........Damn!/
Next Thing U Know U Starrin' In A Movie Called 'Single White Man'
^^^i dont get it..am i missing somethin? and yes i know ur talkin bout' his picture..somethin to do wit tha movie single white female?? throw me a bone here maybe im jus not on a level to understand.....or maybe u jus through some shit out ur ass on tha screen no worries though tha rest of tha verse was hott

very entertaining battle

(dont get a big head 13 he jus through that shit out there without caring and chances are he still doesnt care tha fact of tha matter is mic check could eat u alive if he wanted too.....supposedly)

No DouBt.....Mic Is I.L.L.......Single WHite Man has To DO WIt siNgle White Female.......Remember In the Movie She Started TO dress Like That Chick And Even Act Like Her........IN the End She Wanted TO be HEr.....................1

Hm..........................................

this was defneitley a hot battle

13:
you had creative lines, but.... half your verse was open mic

some of the lines could have ben worded better:::

instead of:
'Amplifyin' The Cries Of Ur Beatin While Tappin For The Sounds Of This 'Mic Check'/Submergin U In Water Wit One Thousand Volts Of Power Causin Ur Tongue To Touch The Back Of Ur Neck

use:

Submergin U In Water Wit One Thousand Volts Of Power Causin Ur Tongue To Touch The Back Of Ur Neck
'Amplifyin' The Cries Of Ur Beatin While Tappin For The Sounds Of This 'Mic Check'/


^^^^
put the real Punch! at the end
it makes it harder

Mik Check:

you still running good multi's, and came with stronger punches:::

Vote: Mic Check

^^^^^^^
Check had more "dissing" in his verse although somewhat general (not personal)........




Good shit to ya both

13 in yur last reply above unemceeable's what the hell are you talking about?....lol



oh and unemceeable howd u get that thing in yur sig with the arrow to see the members of merk and yur wins and not applicible losses?

uppin.........

Don't Sleep On THis Yall......

This was a real close battle, I liked Mic Checks multi's and fthe flow was even on both parts. What edged 13th out was his punches, where as they both were creative, but 13th's was more personal. With calling him the Eminem clone and single white male and all that. 13'th lines a little more harder too.

it's was close but
vote= 13th Disciple

who doesnt call a white rapper eminem's clone....its simply put...PLAYED OUT

Yeah Yeah......3-1 Me.........

blah blah....i can count.......

Mic Check got this
way better punchlines

VOTE=MiC ChEcK



~`UnO~`

Can U.......I ThouGHt U WEre 'Dyslexic'......I Mean U Mentioned That In Ur Battle................

shit.. wow.. this a tight battle... mad props to both of ya---
heres my judgement:
vocab: 13
disses: 13
punches: mic
multis: tie
creativity: tie
flow tie..

shit it was a hard battle to vote on.. i liked both but i have to go with 13th disciple---
so vote =13th

yo, props to Bribeone cuz he voted for the one he thought best, putting aside the beff there is between 13th and the Porductions...

peace...

both came correct but I think I gotta give it to Mic Check. 13th didn't heat up until the end so mic got more punches . . .
"fight me again; n find out I'm ready to drop a 'Holy Shit' rd like a 'constipated priest'//
1 punch will have ur lung expanding cease; I stole your heat like a confiscated piece//" . . . that line was tight.

VOTE=MIC CHECK

4 13th Disciple
3 MIC Check

both verses wern't a dissapointment,they delivered,respedt to those mc's for a good battle,anyways i'm goin disviple as i felt he built up and jus sheded it
Vote = 13th disciple

5 disciple
3 Mic Check

13th disciple gets my vote because he had more punches and like it was said before it was alot more personal, good battle though for both yaaa

whoa... nice fuckin battle yo, i like 13th disciple on this 1 cuz he was 1 hard mutha fucka, mic check also had some great shit

With Clarks I kick…strike and hit this bitch with precise marksmanship//
Your back will split when I get the clip, then persist to embark with spit//

niiiiiiiceeeeee but i liked hits 1

Ur Blows Are Weaker Than A Parapalegic Wit A Contagious Case Of Leprosy/Rippin Ur 'Innards' Out Makin Ur Verses 'Infertile' Disciple Givin U A 'Radical Hystorectimy'
daaaammmmnnnn
vote=disciple

7 Disciple
3 MiC CHecK

yo disciple and mic.. check my battle vs MC KILLA T...
i already voted o this..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45226

remember to poll vote.. thanx.. peace

fie battle here...... mic check came nice, some lines were played that did'nt really spark, but he had some good disses.. wordplay was kinda basic tho

13th had tha betta wordplay....he brought more heat to tha battle....punches hit nicely..

vote 13th

8 Disciple
3 MiC Check

nice battle you two

Id have to say 13th Diciple for my vote better wordplay n his punches worked out better than mic's

9 Disciple
3 MIc Check

13th took this
that wack type pisses me off yet but oh well...
just a better verse...
nothing against Mic Check I just felt 13th's punches more