1-N-Gone vs Rise
 

rules:16 lines max
No Crew/No D.Ryding/No Hate/No Recycling..that means no feeding
1hour time limit after check in
explained and poll votes will decide it

You ready?

its 7:55 how bout' till 9

coo

start now

Ok....time to prove I can hang in Elite....shall we begin



I get on your nerves like surgical-folds,Is 1 nice?..., I heard-a-few-NO's::
I'm certain-you-know, peeps wouldnt fall into your punchlines, if you wrote them with a VERTICAL HOLE::

You Better-show-respect, or get Severed-below-the-neck::
your like Retards Masterbating during quizes, 1 you "never-come(cum)-correct"::
Named 1-n-gone, cause after your 1st one, we ask "R U-Done-REJECT"::
you just cant spit hot, even if your "CAPS", were really from a tek::

you couldnt "break it down", even if your ass wrote in great-intervals::
Your not a Leader/Or a Soldier...look at his sig...your in a crew with "Eight Generals"::

WTF is that about?

when my punches land,Certainly-his-head-Rocks::
this dude wouldnt have nice lines, that flow off the top of his head, even if he had MurphyLee-Dred-Locks::
his rap "sheets" wouldnt be "Sick", if he caught the worst disease from his Bed Top::
dude wont "Bust" into the HipHop industry, if he was investigating 50cents, with the rest of the Fed Cops::

This chapter is done, Bastard I won, you garbage like the living quarters of Sanford & Son::
you'll never "spit anything sick", even if you cuaght "Cancer in lungs"::

1-N-Gone is staggering...time for the KO punch

You wont stick out, your hoping I push you UP, like training Bras, to little tittie hoes::
your a little slow....and more ASS than J.Lo's New Video::

Spandex Wearing MuFucka....lol.....


Rise

Yo dawg rise ama vote on thiz battle as soon tha dude drop his verse but vote on my battle vs Fatal is tie 5-5 holla

too tha point..........


yo rise play close attention ur flo is fallin down similiar too niagra/
u gettin up to challenge me is as potent like hugh heff wit no viagra//

my verbal dagger stops u dead in ya tracks like frozen tag/
think rise is 'sick'? ya if u 'sea fag' in tha dictionary next too 'scurvy scalliwag'//

(quick switch)
its ova yo 'gone' jus stopped ur ascension/ pulled u from recess into detention/ for lack of comprehention/ as i did mention a simple intervention/ rise lives up too his name like inner city drug prevention//

(back)

instead droppin for good, u steady exel for worse like D strawberry in rehab/
must be a family curse, or is it ur poppa's seed was really sad//

compared to my broadway like award winning rap PRODUCTIONS/
norton antivirus couldnt erase ur RB n hip hop corruptions//

so rise jus keep on suckin/ get 'smashed' like semi trucks 'n'/
dame dash in r.o.c. videos 'drunken'/u winnin this battle makes as much sense as web-hand midget bitches finger fuckin//

wats ur record?

WTF happened to my Record?.....why is it 0-0?

1-N-gones also

WTF WATS MY RECORD??

oh thanku jesus....wooo chest poundin

OK its back...scurred me for a minute

**lol**

Now can we get some votes

Rise took this one, wth first of all more creative punches and a flury of them also.

the verticle hole line was some tight shit.
And rise's overal flow and set up of punches was better.

1's spit was aiight, punches were o.k. but wasn't up to the skill leve of his opponent.


Vote= rise

Ya'll click on the link and vote on my battle with Lyricbrutilizer


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44438

holy shit...that was sick...........
yet this was still close....

but Rise took this with harder punches, and better wordplay

vote=rise

My vote is goin to Rise. I read both and felt more punch from rise than 1nGone. But both were ill.

Vote => Rise <=

help out and vote here pleaz. id poll vote but i need 100 posts. Pleaze poll vote here as well.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Ok... let me set something straight... Vote: Rise... but not for what everyone else is saying...


the vertical hole line was stupid... There is no way to fall into a vertical unless you trip... or you are pushed or some force moves you into it... vertical is up and down... that's why I think you are mediocre... for small mistakes like that... had you said horizontal... I'd have been like... damn nice line... but you won simply because kid got outpowered...


um... whatever that kids name is... had the sea fag/scally wag line... pretty good...


Rise: You're best line... was the 8 general line... that there was classic... props on that... now if you came up with more of those lines... I wouldn't say you were mediocre and only had 65% of hard lines... hey the flow was a little off though... in some parts... seemed like you tried to fit to much in...


small suggestion... worry about punches and wordplay... that's what wins battles... multi don't do shit but make the flow better... oh and make it a reason for herbs to vote for you... it's the truth...


Good job...

^^^^^^
couldn't have said better Av........


you'll never "spit anything sick", even if you cuaght "Cancer in lungs"::

^^^^
Plus: lines like this are sooooooooooooooo played, I think there was another one

^^^^^^^
oh yeah::::::::::::::::::::;


Vote=Rise

Yall are proven my pointe exactly..

why go 100% when it is not neccecary?

I know those lines are played....but they are just filler...I won the battle with like 2bars....theres was no pointe in going all out...

Its call **edging out**

No need to be outstanding....I'm winning 5-0......Get It...lol


O yea up for more votes

ok...........ur votin for him..........even though u have heard his punches b4......................and u admit it.................damn my shit must have been weak as hell

but i agree that wasnt bright usin tha multi shit.....jus sounded coowl in my head

and rise ur not THAT good they voted for u cuz i only had like 3 real punches if i wanted to i'd hurt ya feelings

Bhahahahahahahahahahahaha

**puts serious face on**

NO....NOT FUNNY


**smile comes back to face**

Up for More Votes..Or is That KO?

LMAO@Rise... ^^^^that was funny as hell...



1... he beat you... way to easily... about how nice he is... you have nothing to say... at all... He made you take all the generals out ya sig dog... matter of fact... why is Merk Squad in your sig..? Are you an alias of

Un..? no... don't think so...
With that verse couldn't be Mind... billy or Quotient...
I doubt you're Evolve... he's pretty loyal to AI...
I know for damn sure you're aren't me or Quill...
not KnightShade for sure...
and I don't think Rise would battle himself...
Unless I'm wrong about something I've said...
Doubt I am though...



so indeed... why is it there..?




so remove it...









or you have 24 hours until you get merked...


thanks for your time...



Avalon...

lmao...^^^^^^^ok il do so big guy lol dont wanna get merked........ooooohhh dont merk me lol............man rise ur awesome u really got me shook.......no seriously .... ur levels up there .................................ON THA FUCKIN INTERNET LMAO all of u mc rejects get a life...i do this shit cuz its fun

nuff sed..

no disrespect to tha site its great...jus dont take it too seriously k

'gone'

........think il leave tha merk there
NOW WAT............o geez im gonna get merked......someone call tha coroner 1-n-gone comin on express delivery LMAO

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm


















No


give it up

yo this a KO...can someone close this and adjust our records

thanx